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April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. The sex scenes are very steamy, but well-written.
The characters are great and the whole thing is pretty original (compared to some things I've read).
However, like in many AC fics, the flow of reading had to be broken a few times, just to google the Italian parts. As much as it makes a story comparable the the dialogue in the game, it's distracting to those who arent fluent in Italian.
(Please take that as a suggestion for improvement, rather than a deterrent to writing. It really is a fantastic fic, and I'd love to read more of your work)
Keep up the great work!
The characters are great and the whole thing is pretty original (compared to some things I've read).
However, like in many AC fics, the flow of reading had to be broken a few times, just to google the Italian parts. As much as it makes a story comparable the the dialogue in the game, it's distracting to those who arent fluent in Italian.
(Please take that as a suggestion for improvement, rather than a deterrent to writing. It really is a fantastic fic, and I'd love to read more of your work)
Keep up the great work!