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No new Reviews? What a shame! It's such a good story! You can't imagine how excited I was when I saw the update. I danced on my seat xD Your writing style is very comforting. I don't have to twitch on every sentence because of bad grammar or something. And also your idea of a date between Altaïr and Malik is fascinating. I don't know why but it feels more intimate to me as the sexscene. Stupid I know. But I am curious as hell how it will continue.

Okay I am very upset no one else is posting a review! For once Malik is not only in a position of power but he's literally screaming sex on legs! I love how his words manipulate Altair which we see in the bathroom. Hell, I would love to be the one in that position! Call me crazy but I can see Malik being this way. Altair was wanting to be found by him, he wants it.....

There are no words for all the laughter and amount of times I flinched reading this. XD
Stucture needs a little work but otherwise this fiction is the wicked!

Wow! The story is amazing! I love how you take the time to let Altaïr have his doubts and his fears. It's not just: So here they are and after a little confusion they have great kinky sex. I was for myself a little doubtful if it could entertain me. I'm not so much in BDSM but I adjust to it just like Altaïr. Please continue and don't wait too long for the next update! I'm so very curious about what may come next. Fantastic!