rate_review Reviews

Just when I'd given up hope that you would ever continue this story, you come back with a chapter that reminds me why I like this story. The dialogue was fluid, the characterizations well done and the smut very fruity. If I had one complaint, I would make sure that you check your punctuation marks. I noticed a few missing quotations and misplaced periods. However, these are small complaints that do not detract from the overall quality. I welcome you back, Sir or Madam, and look forward to more.

Good to see you haven't abandoned the story and fixed the disclaimer issue. Good as ever and looking forward to the next chapter.

An interesting chapter. Either you really like Joker or you are Seth Green because he's certainly getting a lot of attention. :) Might I recommend going over the chapter once more as I see some words switched around and some punctuation errors. Anyway, a fun read and I look forward to the next chapter.

Still good. One positive thing I hadn't noticed before is that you seem to understand pacing in a story. That is often lacking on this site and only the best fics seem to utilize it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please format chapter 2.

I was right, you do have a talent for detailed scenarios with this pair. Looking forward to more.

I forgot to mention that in my review. The jump in quality between chapters is quite shocking, yet feels strangely fitting. And the romance is good too. :)

I forgot to mention in my review that I hope you continue this story. I feel that with what I've seen so far that you could be capable of some extremely inventive situations.

An excellent story with an interesting premise besides romance. 5 stars