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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was great, all three of them in character (especially Shinji's 'tch' and Mitsuru's "You misunderstand me. Let me explain.")
The only small thing is - Mitsuru and Akihiko don't use honorifics with each other. They always, or almost always, call each other by their first names with no '-san' after them. Because they've known each other for years and for a while it was just them at the dorm, which a lot of people (myself included) interpret as UST or a flat-out discreet relationship.
Anywho. Just wanted to point that out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
The only small thing is - Mitsuru and Akihiko don't use honorifics with each other. They always, or almost always, call each other by their first names with no '-san' after them. Because they've known each other for years and for a while it was just them at the dorm, which a lot of people (myself included) interpret as UST or a flat-out discreet relationship.
Anywho. Just wanted to point that out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters are far too short, the title isn't very imaginative and so far there isn't any actual sex.