rate_review Reviews

I really liked this! I feel that they pretty much stayed in character and it was cute. the descriptions were good and the realism (chapped lips, etc) worked. the references to not being a woman felt out of place, but might just be me. you do pick your verbs very well :)
[in the first chapter 3rd paragraph from the end there's "mouthes" lol)
good writing!

Mhhh, yeah... delicious lemon in Christmas Eve...! Nero learned a lot more than just what mistletoe is...
Take care and good luck!!