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by Koori

person lolu
schedule December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! Your stories are awesome to the bone! I love them !

Ha, Pa would go crazy if he knew the damage to his kids came from the hand of Vance and Foster D:
I want to keep on Reading on and on!
Excellent work as usual!!

P.s: I wanted to let you know, that I had reviewed your other stories last year (Brothers and Hell Cavern) as 'loli' , but that loli is me :3
person Althea
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg this story just keeps getting better and better and I am so not ashamed of saying that I cried at the end of this chapter. Poor Nathaniel what is going to do? :D I can't wait to find out!
person lolu
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
haha it seemed I checked right after you uploaded!
I am so sad!! Why did they have to say goodbye? I want more Foster in the story goddamnit! :(
Though I'm also eager to know what happens with Nathaniel and the rest of the family; including Sara's story and everything!
I don't want this to end!! jgnhjkfgnhj so awesome words can't describe! I love it!
Thank you for the awesome updates; I hope you keep them coming !
Cheers! Best of luck
person Demmu
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I had to read it three times in a row it was so good!!!! What perfect developments and I already LOVE their father even more!
person lolu
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
god damn!! They should have killed Vance when they had the chance!!!! He was right there! jfgnhjkgfnhjk oh my!
What an intense chapter D: I love your updates!
I don't want Foster to go away!! Please let him stay :(
Oh my; I'll be so sad when this story ends...
Great update as usual! I hope to see another one soon :) Best of luck!.
person Tyreon
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping you would cover Foster's death at some point. I was curious as to how he really ended up in the hands of the LK - now it makes sense.

I absolutely loved this update. I read it last night and I had to read it again this morning. The excitement with the baby was very well written, and I can imagine Foster's turmoil at being shot by his own father. I mean, you know he expected it but having it actually happen is a whole different story.

Thanks for the quick updates lately, by the way. Can't wait for the next one. (:
person lolu
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome chapter!!
Opposite of what Demmu said; I really want to see Foster heal together with Nathaniel! Please don't let him go away!
I am so fond of you characters! I don't want this story to end D: Can't wait for next chapters aaaand for part three of Brothers!
I am so eager to know what happens once they arrive home, and what will happen with Sara's baby!
Keep up the fantastic work!

person Tyreon
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woot another update! You're on a roll! :P

I love the Nathaniel/Foster bond you have going. And you portray the death knight struggle epically! Also, I had a feeling Omelet would end up being someone's mount, haha.

Thanks for the greatness!

-Tyreon
person Demmu
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a really awesome update, so full of exciting tension! I can't wait to see Foster really snap.
person Demmu
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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