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March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16
It's always a pleasure to see Anora playing at politics. She's a cold and manipulative little thing, isn't she?
Well done! :D
It's always a pleasure to see Anora playing at politics. She's a cold and manipulative little thing, isn't she?
Well done! :D
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November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am in awe. The story advances and all three words! Amazing work, Anesor. :D
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November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
I always feel somewhat sorry for Alistair when he gets caught between these two strong women. A gamble that lost, yes, but it isn't just Alistair and Attryne that have lost here, I think. Anora's shown a great deal of weakness in her unrelenting drive to force Trinna and Alistair apart, without showing clear political gain since Trinna most likely won't have an heir. Nothing worse than an ill-informed leader, not to mention one who's oblivious to the Tevinter threat right under her nose. Not that I won't snicker happily when Anora fails as publicly as she's humiliated one of her noble subjects.
Lovely and deft use of the prompt words, as always! :D
I always feel somewhat sorry for Alistair when he gets caught between these two strong women. A gamble that lost, yes, but it isn't just Alistair and Attryne that have lost here, I think. Anora's shown a great deal of weakness in her unrelenting drive to force Trinna and Alistair apart, without showing clear political gain since Trinna most likely won't have an heir. Nothing worse than an ill-informed leader, not to mention one who's oblivious to the Tevinter threat right under her nose. Not that I won't snicker happily when Anora fails as publicly as she's humiliated one of her noble subjects.
Lovely and deft use of the prompt words, as always! :D
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October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Oh, how the plotting grows, and the demands of bloodlines trump the realities of Grey Wardens. I'm rooting for Trinna and Alistair to pull off a firm rebuke, and go for what's truly important, rather than dance to such a sour tune.
Superb use of the prompt words - very deftly done! :D
Oh, how the plotting grows, and the demands of bloodlines trump the realities of Grey Wardens. I'm rooting for Trinna and Alistair to pull off a firm rebuke, and go for what's truly important, rather than dance to such a sour tune.
Superb use of the prompt words - very deftly done! :D
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kudos, well done! I have been left with a serious sense of foreboding. :D
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July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
The gratitude of kings, and queens, is a fleeting thing. Anora shows a hint of weakness, though, for all that she exerts her authority. But Attryne has not taken advantage of that lapse, to her credit, and she shows her greater nobility.
But I will admit, the delicate game of words was a delight to read!
The gratitude of kings, and queens, is a fleeting thing. Anora shows a hint of weakness, though, for all that she exerts her authority. But Attryne has not taken advantage of that lapse, to her credit, and she shows her greater nobility.
But I will admit, the delicate game of words was a delight to read!
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I so enjoy these forays into such a foreign land, for me anyway. Well done in using all three words, and creating a very despicable queen. I like having someone to dislike in a story. Thanks for sharing! PW
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
I really am enjoying this tale, as the political maneuverings encroach on the relationship between Alistair and Atrynne. It really is the bronto in the room, isn't it? I'm eager to see what Anora has up her delicate sleeve.
I really am enjoying this tale, as the political maneuverings encroach on the relationship between Alistair and Atrynne. It really is the bronto in the room, isn't it? I'm eager to see what Anora has up her delicate sleeve.
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, the prompts flowed so naturally that I had to go back and look for them! Excellent work. :D
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
Sometimes, there are sacrifices that are too great to make. While duty demands, there's a limit, isn't there?
Nicely done!
Sometimes, there are sacrifices that are too great to make. While duty demands, there's a limit, isn't there?
Nicely done!