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October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
The mystery deepens, but I have faith in the detecting abilities of Trinna and Alistair, and the ever faithful Mouser. And yes, it pays to get the very best runes. :D
Wonderful use of the word prompts!
The mystery deepens, but I have faith in the detecting abilities of Trinna and Alistair, and the ever faithful Mouser. And yes, it pays to get the very best runes. :D
Wonderful use of the word prompts!
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October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well done, as always. I like this little trip into sleuthing!
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
This has such an air of menace, even given that the Fereldan setting tends to breed menace, between politics, residual darkspawn and betrayal at every turn. I especially liked to touch of having Barr simply faint from the pressure he was under.
This has such an air of menace, even given that the Fereldan setting tends to breed menace, between politics, residual darkspawn and betrayal at every turn. I especially liked to touch of having Barr simply faint from the pressure he was under.
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very charming little inn, complete with bodies in the rooms. Just what Trinna and Alistair did not need, especially after Antiva, with all its leather tanneries. (Thank you, Zevran, for that lovely bit of travelogue that will never quite leave.)
Toss in some politics, and this will be a fine pickle for them... I'm looking forward to the rest!
Toss in some politics, and this will be a fine pickle for them... I'm looking forward to the rest!
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice use of the prompts! I'm not really familiar with the fandom but I enjoyed this, and it made me want to know more, which is always a good sign with stories. Good job. :-)