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October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you remind me of another writer who previously did sexy Wario/Waluigi fics on Y! Gallery. The comprehension, the meaning and understanding behind the characters, their wants and needs - this fic has it all. Wario threatening to charge voyeurs jokingly, Waluigi being a contortionist, you observe and deliver. Wario wants to posses everything as a personal belonging and he shows it.
There were some parts that took me out of the story's moment, most pointedly when you used 'joystick' as a euphemism for Wario's penis. Words like that just don't mesh with the atmosphere and frankly, sound ridiculous.
The part about Wario's gold tooth and Waluigi's striped stockings, I guess that you have seen a lot of hentai images done from others, haven't you?
Geez, I need to read more stuff from you - nay - I want more fics from you.
There were some parts that took me out of the story's moment, most pointedly when you used 'joystick' as a euphemism for Wario's penis. Words like that just don't mesh with the atmosphere and frankly, sound ridiculous.
The part about Wario's gold tooth and Waluigi's striped stockings, I guess that you have seen a lot of hentai images done from others, haven't you?
Geez, I need to read more stuff from you - nay - I want more fics from you.