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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't say I'm a fan of the pairing, or the furry stuff, but the writing was okay enough for me to carry on. You've got a few good, descriptive sentences in there. The fic could be longer though, the plot was too thin and there wasn't much to characters other than one being in heat and the other being a desperate dick. There are glimmers of hope in your writing, but you need to add more layers to your storytelling.