rate_review Reviews

Very nice and in character.  Would like to read more.

great work. capturing all 3 of their personalities is impressive enough without adding the details like the taste of Lyrium in certain places. I hadn't thought of that but it makes sense. Keep up the good work & hope to read Quality like this again soon. Perhaps in the next chapter, they could start exploring kinks instead of straight up sex?

I have never reviewed a story in my entire life, but i just had to review this one.

This story is fantastic. I would kill for a second chapter. Isabella needs to corrupt Merrills innocence even more.

Reading this was an absolute delight.

God adam i love u and this story wish i was merril and you were hawke lol ;)