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May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
INteresting concept you have. My only issue is that despite being on Mobius there's barely any Sonic characters in sight. I always like watching the different Sonic pairings. While your OC's encounter with his mom was interesting, there wasn't a whole lot to latch on to. You have a lot of OCs on display and I'm not a huge fan of them anymore. There's enough Sonic cast to play around with that an OC isn't necessary these days. I'll keep an eye out for a second chapter and see where we go from here.