rate_review Reviews

This was amazingly well written and I'd love to see a sequel to it maybe? I was really happy to see that there was a decently done Leon story out there. Keep on doing what you're doing, because it sure as heck is working~ You can only go up from here, dear.

very good for a first story, i really enjoyed it. i always enjoy a good rune factory story, its one of my favorite series and the setting worked well to set up the scene. there were a few spelling and grammatical errors especially in the first half of the story but the second half was better. i suggest proof reading the story to root out all of those better, it will help with the immersion a lot. the sex scene was very well done, i didn't really have any problems with it. please continue to write you have a lot of great potential and i would love to see another rune factory story from you, keep practicing! thank you for writing i enjoyed reading!