rate_review Reviews

Okay. Im in chapter 10, and i keep seeing the posts of "no one is commenting". And for the masses, i feel the need to say something. Your story is absolutely intriguing and well written. It is not difficult tocsee why no one comments; they are entralled with your story. They do no wish to stop reading for the time it takes to write everything they feel about the story. But fear not, your story is wonderful. Back to reading (and playing) i go. You know, i always had a small crush on Kormac, and when i got on today, i realized i didnt hace a demon hunter that wasnt hardcore. Keyphrase: didnt. Lol. Keep up the good work.

I would like to see the chapter.

Finally got time to read your story from beginning to end in one go. Having played DH myself I must say that you captured the feel of this class. I cannot imagine any other class as Shandra. Also, for the purpose of this story, the chemistry between Kormac and Shandra is really well depicted and makes sense story wise. Your take on how they met as children was an interesting twist and it certainly added to the story. I am grateful that you chose to expand "companion role", because Blizzard dealt with that aspect somewhat blandly, albeit in expansion they at least ended their stories in the form of optional quests. That should've been done in basic game imo. I don't have anything negative to say about spelling or your writing style, it feels very natural and I must say it once again, you nailed the feel of DH both with word choice and the idea behind it. Thank you for wonderful Diablo 3 story; you should consider writing another one.

Very interesting new chapters. Smut aside, the plot of this story and how you interweave it with the Diablo 3 storyline is very well done. The smut itself was well put together, fun to read and very enjoyable. After reading the visions granted by Kulle, I wonder just how Killa will react to Cydea's temptations when she descends Mount Arreat in the future...

A rather interesting way to tie the Templar's back story to a Demon Hunter's need for control, in this case over others rather than herself. I look forward to seeing how the story develops as the pair discover each other's limits and histories.