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January 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You shouldn't tell people not to leave negative reviews, with a threat to delete them. That's not how you get better as a writer. Otherwise, good writing, though the lack of actual sex does leave the reader a bit wanting, afterward. Would love to see what you write in the future, perhaps with a touch more non-implied intimacy?