Parts of this were sexy and had merit but the ending was just silly. You also promised at the start Lara would not `get out of this' and while she ended up in a sort of slavery it was pretty far from her pony days so that's a let-down.
It seems to me the only purpose of bringing in Sam/Himiko was to rescue Lara and that really betrays the whole broken/owned concept.
Lame ending
hey
love the work
but could you please let me know where to find Nimrod's Lara Croft in Hard Labour, or works of Morbid Fantasy, ty
bozdo77 (at) gmail.com
appreciate it!
read the first couple of chapters...
together with porneaters work(s) among the best tomb rider stories out there.
really like the darker approch.
What was that?!
Seriously abrupt ending.
To the sad little boy who left the last review: GET OVER HER!
I'm sorry that mean girl rejected you It's over.SEEK HELP!
Dear Thought Police,
Free. Effing. Country.
Opinions are like a$$holes...
Which means, by the transitive property of equality, you are like an opinion.
Sincerely,
One of your many possible fathers
(But likely not or you'd be smarter)
Hello again Mr. Mello ANON - Thanks for the validation of my assesment of you. Now... breath...
lol
Speaking of "validations of assessments":
It's 'breathe', genius.
Oh, yeah.
lol
Hunter, old man. This was sick, twisted AND amazingly well writen.
I had trouble reading it because I hated where it was going. BUT Glad I kept reading, because I loved that great ending.(All for the Lara/Sam love; and feel Drasha aint gonna like Lara comming back to Parmastan.)
Amazing story.
Yay! Happy ending.
Always shipped LaraxSam but canon served to sink that ship as it almost always does *shakes fist*