Well that was...interesting. Tracer being a slut is one thing, but I honestly didn't expect her to swear like a sailor. Also, character dialogue should be it's own paragraph respectively. Other than that, I pretty much enjoyed it.
I love this so much. My only complaint is it's too short! I love your style of writing and I really enjoy slutty heroines, so needless to say Whore Tracer was really up my alley. I loved her character in this one! I hope you write a follow up chapter where she gets blowbanged and gangbanged to high heaven, and I hope it's a long chapter because your writing and eroticism is so evocative and just plain fantastic!
what. a. joke. Stupid plot. The biggest compliment I could give would be strong adjectives and paragraph structure, also quite the laugh. 6/10