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February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Write more. Lara needs to be kept and knocked up.
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May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Love this. Beast soon please?
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May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM
You need to proof-read, not just spell-check. Simplistic, you need to spend more time on descriptions and take more time with each sex-act as they are the point of your story. Try and make the dialog a little less `bad porn movie'. Some potential but it needs a lot of work.