Amazing story, I hope we get a part 2 soon!!
Very well done. Well written and sexy, great descriptions of the sex. Im very amused that you used the exact line from the game “Hey. Look, um… about Tess…”
I am playing it for the first time and just got to that scene. I also imagined that scene turning into sex so I got a kick out of you doing it. Hope there are more chapters of this.
If no more of this coming, please get back to your Mass Effect piece. I love that one.
Very good. But you may want to edit the title. ^_^