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Just finished chap 2, fun smut.  I'd advise you to stop commenting on how the girls are mind-controlled in every other paragraph.  It gets very repetitive and we know they are enslaved.  Looking forward to more.

Chap 3, good chap.  If he is going to start making off with gym leaders, he should make arrangements to have one of the other girls there take over.  Also it should be made clear if he can wipe memories, since after he leaves his victims would call the authorities, unless the effect of the machine permanently removes that impulse.