rate_review Reviews

haha...pole.

Great story.

nice

Ed, that was absolutely beautiful. You're a great writer, do you have anything on AFF?

Oh, and it's also really sad when a satirical review is that much better than the actual story. Instead of felling vaguely unclean after reading this oh-god-I-hope-this-is-a-parody, I have a warm and fuzzy feeling--yes, there _are_ good (sane) writers here!

ps: story sucks beyond measure, yadda yadda, you're getting MSTed on Smartania, yadda yadda.

Sick!

You should explicitly but what kind of sexual material is in this story, so people can know what to expect. You should under the summary put nc, rape, incest and adult w/ child. Many would find child rape and incest to be completly sick and offensive. You should do this to aviod begin flammed and to warn people who would find this material sickening.
Your fic is a good story because it was sickening horrific. If horror was your intention for this fic then its a job well-done. But if anyone finds child rape sexually exicting that person needs to seek help.

Um... yeah... get help.

There's a difference between adult material and filth. This would be filth, I'm sorry.
No one in their right mind regularly writes child porn. You're fooling yourself if you think otherwise.

Oh my...what the hell did I just read?

umm no no no no i refuse i hold Back FROM FLAMING YOU YOU ARE SO SICK!!