rate_review Reviews

Oh I LOVE this fic!! Yay! such an original idea! I really love it. If you decide to do anything to it, like continue it or add details, I am behind you 100%!!

Read through this over and over. I loved this fic! Riku is such a little trixter, I love him! Ha ha! Poor sexy, silver haired angel.

SQUEEEEEE!!!!

MY GOD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

Your writting is just stunning. *is in amazement* your descriptions are remarkably real, and the writting quality is unmatched by any other auther i have read.

amazing job.

~Twitch

(btw. I found your story on ff.net.) ^_^

I just wanted to say how much I absolutely adore this fic. The way you have characterized Sora has made him so tangible, cute, sexy, real and yet so incredibly Sora at the same time. I don't think I have run into any other Kingdom Hearts stories that have captured him so beautifully, and to think the setting is after the events of the video game to boot. I recommend this fic for anybody to read, it is well worth the time and extremely enjoyable. I look fowards to any other works that you may write. This one has left a glowing feeling in my heart. <3

I have never commented on any fics that I have read... never... but this one, I just had to. It's so realistic and well written, while reading it I felt like this was the actual story, the real Kingdom Hearts.. and it's just so, great... Words really can't express how tremendously good this fic is. And now, I must go seek out my brother and beat him down for getting rid of KH, because I am going to die of the urge to play it... *scuttles off*

SEQUEL! plz!!!! it's SOOO good :D

yoo sug! its me Pet! *waves* nice story u got here.. *twitches a little* yes u know wt I'm thinking..*sighs*.. but i absolutely luv it yaoi or not u r the most talented author and fanartist i've ever seen ^^ c u round k? keep writing beautiful fics like these n gimme a note if ur gonna update! cya l8tr hun

Pet-chan

Squee! that was a lovely although smutless but brilliant way to end this story. glad i followed the links back to here to read this story. it's convincing me to stop FFX2 and finish up Kingdom Hearts at last :)

oh wow! it was great! i loved it. ^_~ but i'm just a sap for happy endings? please, a sequel would be so nice!! like i said before, this is the best Kingdom Hearts fic i've ever read and i want to see more!!! maybe where Sora and Riku go traveling for King Mickey together!?! and they fight side-by-side!! *clasps hands togehter* Oh it would be great!! *laughs* now i sound like a total fairy...=^_^= but anyway--i loved the ending, it was simple and sweet and just, great...! it took you long enough to finish it anyway!^_~ thank you!!!!!!!

Hello, I just want to say, that was a creative idea with the trigger words to the spell, kind of funny. Also, you shouldent write a 'delete scenes' because the only time riku and sora where together long enough to have sex, was when riku was a slave, and that would kindof be like rape... and I don't think sora would have done that. you should write a sequel, or atleast a one-shot... or a collection of one-shots or something