The Ancient and the Rose DX - Director's Cut | By : zentillion Category: +S through Z > Sonic Views: 8588 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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The Ancient and the Rose DX: Director’s Cut
Introduction: Possibly the fic that I’m most known for in the Sonic community... well the part of the community who reads this kind of thing. After about two long years, I’ve decided to pull an SA:DX he fhe fic that, in essence is my baby, my pride and joy. Consider it a fix on grammatical and typographical errors, some dialogue changes, along with a little bonus content to tide yourself over with. If you enjoyed this fic when it was first published, check it out now! I shall be redoing and releasing all ten of these chapters sporadically (My writing juices have dried up a lot. Back when I wrote this, I had inspiration like no other.). In fact, there is a chance... that I may actually make a new bonus chapter or two along the way. But enough blabbing, let the fun begin.
Warnings: F/F content, allusions to M/M (later chapters), some coarse language (later chapters). Please note that Chapter 1 does not contain sexual situations.
DISCLAIMER (Added 10-11-05 to obey regulations): I do not own any of the characters or the world that they live in, however some concepts are wholly mine, but are not being used for profit in any way, shape, or form.
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Today was just another normal day in Station Square, although it hadn't been normal a few weeks ago when the Space Colony ARK nearly collided with and annihilated the planet, but thanks to the heroic efforts Sonic the Hedgehog, Miles Prower, Knuckles the Echidna, Amy Rose, Rouge the Bat and even the evil genius Dr. Eggman... And Shadow the Hedgehog, who sacrificed his life for the planet.
Today, Amy was on her weekly shopping routine, now in the grocery store, looking at fruits... Apples, oranges... bananas and melons. With a smile, she put a few of each except for the melons, which she got only one of. She walked into the bread section, and looking around for some good bread was Dr. Eggman.
"Eggman!" Amy squeaked.
"Oh, hello, Amy." Eggman said "I'm just shopping, like you. You know, after all that has happened, I think I should just... I can't believe I'm saying this... get myself a normal life. Legitimize myself and all that."
Amy looked at Eggman curiously.
"I don't believe that for a second." she said.
"I knew you wouldn't." Eggman replied, and took a piece of bread "Anyway, I'm off to the produce section."
"The melons are very ripe today." Amy said "I'm sure they're excellent."
"I will take that into consideration." Eggman smiled and went off.
Eggman, a normal citizen? Amy thought That would be the day. Ah, this bread looks perfect.
With that, she took some bread and went off to pay for her groceries. In the line, she bumped into....
"Sonic!" she said with glee when she saw her hero paying for his own groceries.
Sonic quickly sighed and turned to Amy.
"Hello, Amy." he said "Shopping again?"
"I do it once a week!" she said "It's like a hobby."
"Hobby? More like a pain in the neck! I don't see what you see in this kind of stuff. Oh well, at least I got stuff for my berserker chili dogs!"
Amy shuddered... That was chili dogs, but with jalapeños, cheese, and mushrooms in the sauce. Hot and weird. Too much for her. It was getting oddly more obvious that Sonic wasn't her type... But, he was still her big hero. That would never change.
"Well, I'll see ya later, Amy." Sonic said, going out of the store with his groceries.
Amy then paid for her groceries and began to walk home. Suddenly, she saw a small point of light... kind of pink in color, traveling through the alleyway. It seemed very familiar... Amy was going to just go home, but her curiosity got the better of her and she went where the light was going. Suddenly, she came to the end of the alleyway, and the little pink orb just went stationary.
"If I remember right, you're someone, little ball of light." Amy said. The light just stayed where it was. Amy inched closer and closer to it until she could reach for it with her hand, and that's when it began to circle her. And then, it changed form right in front of her to a female echidna about her size, wearing ancient jewelry and clothing.
"Hello again, Amy Rose." she said "I have not talked to you personally ever since Chaos returned to his natural state."
"Tikal, wasn't it?" Amy asked.
"Ah, so you remember me." Tikal replied.
"Yeah. So, why are you here anyway? Shouldn't you be with Chaos in your pocket dimension?"
"Yes, I would be, but Chaos no longer really needs me.. He's finally back to his kind old self I knew back before my father attacked... He can run the place by himself... Besides, I'm just here to sample life and civilization for awhile. I just needed contact from one of you before I could take on mortal shape."
"I see... But, um... I really don't think your style of fashion would really work around these parts or this time period."
"But these are the only clothes I have."
"Don't worry, I was going home anyways... Maybe I could give you something of mine to wear?"
"Okay."
"Then come on!"
And so, Tikal and Amy went to Amy's house so Amy could lend Tikal some clothing.
"Okay, let's see here..." Amy said, looking through her closet "Hmm, i think I wear too many of these things..."
Amy sifted through all the red dresses she had, almost all identical. But Tikal didn't look the sort for red... Suddenly, Amy remembered that she had some old clothes she didn't wear very much... Mostly a bunch of t-shirts and some normal pants... Amy wore them in her tomboy phase, back before she heard the tales of Sonic's adventures. That was only a few years before, but they were quite baggy on Amy during that time, so they shouldn't be now.
"What colors do you like, Tikal?" She asked.
"White, green, and blue." Tikal said "Why?"
"No big reason..." Amy said, getting out a pair of bluejeans and a white t-shirt with a green 'girls rule' logo "Here ya go."
Amy turned around to hand Tikal the clothes, and gasped when she saw that Tikal had already taken off the old top and skirt.
"Ummm... Ahem?"
"Yes?" Tikal asked.
"You're ummm... naked. Well, except for the jewelry."
"I suppose undressing in front of another female is taboo around these parts or time period? In my time, we never really worried about it."
"Yeah, kinda." Amy responded, staring at Tikal a bit... Those old clothes hid a bit... Soft, almost smooth glossy peach fur covered her entire body, which was quite shapely... Firm, round breasts just a bit larger than Amy's, a well-toned stomach, and round, perky hips. Amy blinked, and looked back up, handing Tikal the clothes.
"Better put these on. Ya can dress up in the bathroom."
"Thank you, Amy." Tikal smiled, and turned tail to the bathroom, also giving Amy a nice view of her tight, round behind. Her walking was fluid, her hips swaying side to side, her tail swishing in the opposite direction. Amy blinked again, and looked upwards. Never in her life had she seen a female body like that... Nor had she been so mesmerized... No, it couldn't be possible that she was actually ATTRACTED, could it? She liked guys... like Sonic... Then again, Sonic was almost the only guy she was really attracted to. She had also never really been around many females in her entire life...
Tikal wandered back in, wearing the clothes Amy had given her... they were nice and snug on her, almost totally flaunting her frame. Amy stared again.
"Is there something wrong, Amy?" Tikal asked when she noticed Amy was a tiny bit... distracted.
"Nope, nothing wrong." Amy said, snapping out of her trance "Those clothes look gorgeous-- erm, great on you, Tikal."
"Thank you, Amy. I think I look pretty good too... and so do you."
"Umm, thanks." Amy said with a nervous smile.
"So, now that I've got the style, what do we do next?" Tikal asked "I've never done anything like this before..."
"Are you hungry?"
"Oh, yes, very."
"Well, I did buy some groceries, maybe there's something you'd like from there."
"Okay." Tikal smiled and walked out the door, her behind and tail still making that hypnotic movement... Amy tried not to stare and followed.
Amy b by by pulling the fruits out of the bag. The apples, the oranges, and the bananas. Tikal had never seen these exotic fruits before...
"What odd fruit." Tikal said "Never really had anything like it in the old times..."
Amy sighed, and pulled out the melon.
"I guess then you really don't want fruit..."
"Oh my word... Is that a... Globulox Melon?" Tikal said, looking at the perfect sphere of a melon "Now, THOSE are FRUIT! Can I cut it?"
"Sure." Amy said, handing Tikal the knife. Tikal took the knife, and began cutting into the sweet fruit, its salmon-colored juices flowing out and on the knife. Finally, Tikal cut the melon in half, and then cut those halves in half, and then, she disposed of the seeds, and cut off the rind.
"Wow, how did you manage that, Tikal?"
"Lots of practice, Amy. You want to share?"
"Yeah." Amy said, taking a fourth, Tikal doing the same. She took a bite into the soft flesh, juice rolling on her tongue. Globulox Melons are well known for their amazing sweetness, softness, and juiciness. Amy suddenly noticed something... The color of the melon was the same exact color as the female echidna's fur. This made Amy's desire even stronger... She kept on eating the flesh of the melon, Tikal doing the same thing.
"Good melon, is it not?" Tikal said "My grandmother used to call me Globulox as a nickname. As you may notice, its flesh and my fur are the same color."
"Hmm, you're right." Amy said in false agreement. She already KNEW. Could Tikal read her mind?
Finally, they both finished their melon pieces, and licked the remaining juice off of their fingers.
"Mmm, just gotta love those melons." Tikal smiled.
"Yeah, they're really great." Amy giggled.
"Mine or the globulox’s?" Tikal said suddenly.
"Huh?! Whazzat?! The globulox! Why would you think..."
Tikal burst into laughter.
"Hehe... Sorry, just something I heard while I was floating around the city. I wish I knew what it meant though. What are these other 'melons'?"
"Heh... Heh-heh..." Amy said nervously "They mean your... Geez... hehe... C'mon, it's kinda obvious..."
"Ohhhh.... those." Tikal said with a blush "Yes, I guess they ARE quite nice. Wouldn't you say so?"
"Yeah. I suppose."
"Yours are nice, too."
"Um... thanks. We are talking about breasts, right?"
"Heh... yeah, we are... Heh. Umm, anyway!"
"Yeah, anyway... Anything else you'd like to do?"
"I've always wondered about the miracle you call television."
"Meh, I don't have a TV. never rally wanted or had the time for one."
"Oh. Anything else then?"
"Hmm... Well, not really."
"I guess that's that then."
"What do you mean?"
"I have to go back to the pocket dimension if there's nothing else for today."
"Oh. Wait... There is ONE thing."
"Oh, do tell."
"I could show you around town so ya can get to know the city if you decide to return sometime."
"Sounds great! Can we go now?"
"Yes, sure!" Amy replied... somehow, she was very excited to do so. But she didn’t notice it.
With that, Amy and Tikal walked out the door, and began to explore.
First, it was the main part of the city... Quite a bit of it had been rebuilt since Perfect Chaos destroyed and flooded the entire downtown area. Tikal marveled at the odd machines, although she had seen them before, just never at work.
Afterwards, came the clothing stores. Tikal had never seen so much clothing in one place, nor in so many varieties... So many she wanted to try... But, maybe some other day. So, she and Amy continued onwards...
And now it was beginning to get dark. Suddenly, Tikal saw something.
It didn't matter, though, and soon she was dancing to the music as well... And Tikal noticed...
"Wow, this is so... what's that word you use?" Tikal said.
"Cool." Amy replied "And yes, this is pretty cool."
And they danced for a long while after.
Finally, they were out of the club, and Amy looked at her watch....
"Almost midnight..." she said.
"Uh oh." Tikal sighed "I have to go back at midnight."
"You do?" Amy said.
"Yeah... I won't be able to come back for a month... Amy, thanks for showing me around Station Square. I had a wonderful time. And it's all thanks to you."
"No problem, Tikal. I had fun, too. I never knew dancing would be so great... Especially since it was with you... Ummm... because it was nice to be with a girl for a change, I usually hang out with boys..."
"Me too... Chaos has been like a brother to me, and most of the group I was with were male... My grandmother was the only female I ever really knew. My mom died before I really even got to know her."
"Aw, man, that stinks... I never knew my family... I lived on Little Planet most of my life alone, and then Sonic came by... He saved me, and I've always been so grateful for it... Maybe a little too grateful... I mean, I like him, but in that hero worship sort of way..."
Tikal sighed, there was only 3 minutes until midnight...
"Time to go soon."
"Well, I better get home then..." Amy said "I guess I'll see you next time...."
"I know we will see each other again." Tikal said "In a month. But a month seems so far away... I'll miss you, Amy..."
"I'll miss you, too, Tikal..." Amy said, looking into her eyes...
And that's when their lips touched. Just a light touch, but they touched nonetheless, and that touch turned into a small kiss.
They parted, and looked at each other, blushing.
"Whoa..." Amy sighed.
"Wow..." Tikal said "That was the first time I've ever kissed anyone that way..."
"Me... too...." Amy said "And it felt nice...."
"Again?"
"Again."
Their lips touched again, only this time, their kiss lasted for a while longer... Amy wrapped her arms around Tikal, as her new kissing partner did the same. They kissed for almost 2 minutes, and then, suly, ly, DONG... The big clock struck its first of twelve strikes...
"It's time for me to go, Amy." Tikal sighed "I await the next time we meet... Goodbye, Amy Rose, we’ll see each other again. “
BONG. Strike nine.
"I'll be waiting for you." Amy said, smiling and nodding "Byeee!"
With that, the clock struck twelve, and Tikal became a pink ball of light again, circled Amy, and vanished.
With the smile still on her face, Amy headed towards home... She smiled, having made herself a new friend. And somewhere, deep down, she knew of the possibility that it could become much more.
To be continued.
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