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Devilios Zon Exciet
By : InuSonishaUnlimited
Category: +S through Z > Sonic
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Devilios Zon Exciet
Written By InuSonishaUnlimited
Disclaimer: Nope, still don't own the SEGA characters but I am working on it even as we speak. Weird title I came up with, not affiliated with any language of any kind, so be not offended by it. Anyway, the only SEGA character in this tale is Sonic, everyone else is based on the design but not much else should be familiar. Probably my first attempt at a comedy story of some sort. A story about a young Demi-Devil that will be told...well, here. Rated M or MA for Strong Language and Violence, along with Sexual Content. For Mature Audience only, meaning no weak-minded or soft-hearted people or kiddies, okay?
Chapter 1: The Demi-Devil named Sonic
The story starts in a realm of elements, known solely as the Element Grave. Within this realm lived beings with no apparent special, spiritual or out-of-the-ordinary powers called Normalia and beings with such abilities known as Inherancients. Inherancients(combining "inherit" and "ancient" meaning, beings that inherit ancient powers) were divided into sub-species called Mystic, Mortal and Devil classifications. Mystics were magic-imbued beings that could avoid death, Mortals had special powers like great strength or some shit like that and could die, but our story here revolves around the Devil beings. They were, of course, the black-winged creatures of evil and all that. These were slightly different, however, since their setting wasn't entirely evil. The Devils had the out-of-the-ordinary powers, like bending reality and controlling minds and all the weird stuff.
Devils were separated into three classes, Supreme Devils, Devils and Demi-Devils. Supreme Devils were the ones with the greatest power and created the Demi-Devils from their own flesh, wearing smoky robes and red split masks. Devils were your run-of-the-mill black-winged beings with dark powers and all that. The Demi-Devils were the low class, yet still possessed hidden and dormant power. They were trained with Supreme Devils and were treated as their own flesh and blood. Some Demi-Devils looked like your traditional devil, others looked like deformed humans with enlarged limbs or other things. The special Demi-Devils were what we come to now, the ones that looked like SEGA characters.
The first of these is RaZeke Eightwings, a sky-blue hedgehog with a large hook-like bang over his right eye and a long mane going down his back. His eyes were sword-like and he had around his body a large white cloak. He wore no gloves or shoes, but possessed the greatest power among Devils, effectively making him a Supreme Devil. He created most of the Devils, but paid most attention to his most recent eleven year old devil, Sonic Blackwing. A cobalt hedgehog with emerald eyes, white gloves and red sneakers. On his legs were green leggings and red arm pieces with gold rings near his shoulders. Coming from his back was a pair of long black wings and smaller wings were on his forehead, along with a tiny red gem. At the tip of his tail was a spike and on his chest was a symbol that looked like a bat. RaZeke knew Sonic was special and was ready to teach him how to wield the elements, though he also wanted him to have a normal Devil existence.
Devilios, a capital city in Element Grave, is the underworld utopia of these demonic beings, in other words, a very beautiful Hell. Gemstone buildings, tall ancient columns, shimmering water, it was a sight to behold. Where our first random adventure begins is in a large field of Glassgrass, shiny fields of skin-shearing grass. RaZeke stood a few feet away from Sonic, smiling and watching as Sonic's hands were covered in bright flames. He launched a fist forward, launching the fireball and doing the same with his other fist. He did this again, adding a sweeping air kick and somersault, creating a fiery shockwave on landing. RaZeke lightly clapped as he neared his legitimate son, considering he created Sonic. "Very, very good, Sonic. Your proficiency with the Fire element is at a great height. I am so proud." he said, giving Sonic a head-rub. "Really, Master RaZeke?" he asked with childlike enthusiasm. "Of course. Now then, have you practiced the Ice element?" "Yes." "Show me what you got."
Sonic covered his hands and feet with black ice and made slow, but precise movements. He swing his hand to the side and launched icicles while slightly moving his feet, creating small ice waves around him. He lightly lifted his fingers towards his palm, causing a spike of ice to erupt from the ground. "Excellent job, Sonic. Remember, the Ice element requires slow and relaxed movement as opposed to the others." RaZeke said. "Yes, sir." Sonic said, watching the ice disappear. "Come, the others will want a status report on your progress." "Will they really care, RaZeke?" "Of course they will. Unlike others, you are the closest match to my Supreme Devil state. You are essentially my son." "Aren't we all your children, though?" "Technically speaking, but not in other aspects. In any case, you are too young to grasp the concept of birthing rights." "Is that the nice way of saying I'm stupid?" Sonic said, grinning. "Yeah." RaZeke said, lifting the blue hedgehog as he fooled with his hook bang. "Now then, let's go." "Okay, RaZeke."
Sonic stood surrounded by tall, heavily armored Devils with clown-like masks, which made them laugh and Sonic laugh. "Hmm, yes...The elements are indeed...Yes, oh yeah..." was the general speech of the group as they started scribbling on sketch pads. "All right, so what's the general thought of Sonic?" Razeke asked as they passed him sheets. Most of them showed "A+" on them, except for one, which had that and a picture of Sonic biting a woman suggestively. "Damn it, man, that's not what I wanted!" RaZeke said as the Devil responsible looked confused. "What, that's my opinion!" he said, erupting the whole room in laughter. Sonic was confused as all hell and tugged on RaZeke's cloak. "RaZeke, is that the story of the Birds and the Bees?" he asked, making everyone, including RaZeke, laugh. "Oh God, stop! You're killing us!" they all said. RaZeke stopped laughing long enough to give Sonic the knowledge that the picture displayed no such information.
They both walked out and as they did, another of the judging Devils came up to them. "RaZeke, how is progress, in your opinion?" said the devil. "He is performing perfectly, despite his...well...naievity." RaZeke said, holding giggles after looking at Sonic's happy expression. "Ha ha...ehm. Anyway, just wanted to know." he said before he left. "Why is everyone so focused on my playtime, RaZeke?" Sonic asked. "Eh, they just want something new to play with, but that ain't gonna happen." RaZeke said. "Well, I'm done for the day. What do I do now?" Sonic asked. "Well, let's head over to the bookstore. There is something I want you to read." RaZeke said. On the way, several children devils waved to Sonic, but didn't speak. "Master RaZeke, why doesn't anyone want to speak to Sonic?" Sonic asked. "Well, there's an issue with security, so we want to make sure no one gets too close and cause damage." RaZeke said. "Like rape?" Sonic asked, receiving a brutal shaking, resulting in a very dizzy feeling. "No, silly! Who teaches you these things?" "Y...You?" "Oh yeah."
In the bookstore, RaZeke walked up to the counter, setting the dizzy Sonic on the counter as he awaited the management. "Yes, master? What can I get for you today?" said the worker female devil. "I ordered this book on Devil Summoning for my son, I'm here to pick it up." he said, showing the lady the receipt. "Please wait a moment." she said, walking into the back room. A loud horrifying scream and several grunts, as well as fire blasting, later, she walked out with the book. "Uh...how do you get your books again?" Sonic asked. "Well...I'd rather not say. Here you are, little man." she said, passing him the book, who gave it to RaZeke. "Thank you. Let's go, Sonic." he said, putting the hedgehog on his shoulder.
They entered a large emerald-colored mansion with eight columns surrounding it. Floating above the columns were shiny gemstones with no apparent purpose. "Shiny me likey." Sonic said, looking at the stones. "Must you say that every time we come home?" RaZeke asked, smirking. "Yup! They glitter each time I say it and give me things." Sonic said, showing RaZeke a blue ring. Sonic held it up into the air as a random text box appeared below him, stating that "Sonic received an Aquamarine Ring from the glittering shiny things!". "Rrriiiigggghhhtttt..." RaZeke said as they entered the door, Sonic falling down because his head hit the top of the doorway, being on RaZeke's shoulder. "Oops, you okay?" RaZeke asked. "You ask that everytime...mister fluffy..." Sonic said as he went inside all wobbly, causing a sweatdrop to appear behind RaZeke's head. "Yyyeeeaaahhh..." he said as he walked in.
"Okay, so I need to attend my arcana-web surfing, so I'll be leaving you here by yourself again. Will you be cool?" RaZeke asked. "Yeah, I'll be fine." Sonic said, shooting a bird outside with an eye-beam. "All righty then...Also, check out that book and try the summoning that I bookmarked, all right?" "Yes, sir. Have a good time." "No problem...and don't destroy the house in any way, shape or form." he said, walking out and leaving Sonic sitting in the center. "sigh...I burn the kitchen a little and you just won't let it go..." Sonic thought as he created a multi-colored pentagram using sidewalk chalk. "It should be noted that we aren't suggesting that you write on your parent's carpet with sidewalk chalk. I guarantee that if you've never been beaten before, you will if you do this." Sonic said, finishing the pentagram and slicing his arm slightly, coating a slightly wet cloth with his blood. Five minutes later, the whole symbol was glowing red after he finished rubbing the cloth. "Uhh, RaZeke, I'm using the living room." Sonic said over the phone. "Oh lord, you're doing it on the carpet?" he asked, not realizing how wrong that sounded. "Yes, I've drawn the symbol and am now getting ready to do the incantation." "Very well then, carry on. Remind me to woop your ass good when I get home, all right?" "All right." Sonic said as he hang up the phone and grabbed the book.
"Devil forces beyond comprehension, beyond my thoughts on this incantation, with bloody mustaches blowing in the wind and true terror of Telltubbies within. Let the devil residing below rise up now and stand to show, lovely or scary it matters not at all, for to it I may never forget to call? What the fuck...?...anyway...Rise forth now, netherworldly being!" Sonic said, closing the book and promising himself to research the originator of that ridiculous incantation. The circle started glowing and a being was coming out. Sonic was surprised that it really worked and will also be impressed with the results...in the next chapter.
-Crazy, right? Tell me what you think of this one. Suggestions are taken and all that jazz.
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Devilios Zon Exciet	By : InuSonishaUnlimited Category: +S through Z > Sonic Views: 1143 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Devilios Zon Exciet