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Odette's Burglary	By : Ditmag Category: +M through R > Monster Girl Quest Views: 315 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Chapter List
- 1-Break-in
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The minotaurus lady was humming to herself as she worked in her kitchen. Even though she lived alone, she loved domestic tasks. Perhaps someday she’d have the privilege of performing such tasks for another as well. But she was older now, and knew that finding domestic bliss was unlikely. Oh, she’d taken her share of men, but that was strictly for feeding. Unlike many other monsters, Odette didn’t believe in forcing men to marry her. So she’d violate them and let them go.
Odette was preparing her favorite dish, beef bowl, for lunch. Some people thought it strange that minotaurs loved beef so much, given that minotaurs were part cow. But, Odette would point out, we are also part human, and humans like their beef as well.
Odette brought the spoon she was using to stir the broth to her lips. She frowned. Needs thyme, she thought. A little thyme works every time!
Odette left the kitchen to go to her walk in pantry, which had a huge spice rack. She was fairly successful economically. Turns out that her brains were even more valuable to a human city than her prodigious strength. Or maybe her perverted boss just liked her enormous breasts. It didn’t really matter to her. He was a weak human, not a threat to her. He had more to fear from her than she from him. And she had to admit, she enjoyed his lewd stares at her chest. Perhaps she’d enjoy a quick meal with him one day. She’d bake him a cake, and he’d feed her some delicious semen. Assuming she hadn’t misread his intentions. Depending on him for her very well paying job complicated matters. She’d have to handle the situation delicately.
When Odette reached her pantry, she found the door ajar. Did I leave the door open? She wondered. I know I’m getting older, but I was pretty sure I closed it out of habit. Then she heard the subtle movement: someone, or something, inside the pantry trying to be stealthy. Well, there was no reason for Odette to be stealthy. There was nothing in the city that could frighten her. Whether it was a rat, a human, or even another monster, she would simply barge in and deal with the intruder.
So that’s what she did. Odette and the boy both yelped at the same time. The boy for obvious reasons. He’d been caught red handed, a jar of jelly in his hand. In Odette’s case, she had simply been startled. The boy was strikingly handsome, a nice, cherubic face with a mop of purple hair. He looked a lot better than the usual street urchins she encountered in the city. Smelled good too, she noted as his succulent smell reached her nostrils.
They stared at each other for a moment. The boy was trapped. Odette’s bulk was too wide to get around to make a try at escape. Odette, for her part, was trying to figure out what to do with the boy.
“Who are you, thief?” Odette barked. Well, it actually came out as closer to a moo, but she liked to think that she could be intimidating when necessary.
“M-My name is Luka!” the boy replied, cowering before a woman who was at least four times his size. “I’m sorry, I was just hungry! I was only going to take what I needed!”
“And you needed a jar of jelly?” Odette asked suspiciously. “There are far more nutritious and filling items in this pantry. You could have taken flower, to make some bread.”
“I-I don’t know how to make bread,” he whined.
“There’s also literal bread in here,” she countered.
“Oh…. I guess there is,” he admitted.
“You just wanted something tasty and sweet!” Odette said accusingly. “You’re a very bad boy, Luka!”
“Please don’t hurt me!” Luka pleaded. “Yes, I wanted something sweet! I’m poor, so I can’t afford nice things! I eat plain bread every day! I wasn’t going to take your bread because I already have bread at home. I just wanted something to put on it!”
“And you were willing to break into a monster’s house to get just that?” Odette asked. “Do you realize what some monsters would do to you? My next door neighbor is a succubus.”
“A-A succubus lives here?!” Luka asked fearfully.
“Well, she’s undercover, living as a human,” Odette clarified. “Succubi are not welcome in this city. Or very many cities anywhere for that matter. But if she found you….. she would drain you to death without hesitation.”
Luka dropped the jar of jelly. It shattered on the floor.
“And now you owe me for that jelly, young man!” Odette said sternly.
“Please don’t eat me!” Luka pleaded.
“Eat you?” Odette laughed. “I’m a minotaur girl, not a scary monster from Hellgondo for goodness’ sake! But you need to be taught a lesson for your own protection! Aside from the fact that stealing is wrong, you were just one door away from breaking into an apartment that would have led to your demise! I might have let you go if it was just about the jelly. As angry as I am about the thievery, your carelessness is more concerning to me! Now come here, young man, and receive your punishment!”
Luka wouldn’t meet her gaze as he slowly approached her. Whether it was due to shame or fear Odette wasn’t sure. The boy really was poor. His clothes were ragged and torn. She felt sorry for him. She really would have let him go, had he been a decent thief. But instead he was the kind of boy who does foolish things and ends up a monster’s meal as a result. He had to be taught the error of his ways, for his own welfare.
When Luka was close enough, she roughly grabbed his arm and dragged him to her couch. Sitting down on the couch, she put the boy over her knee, removed his pants, and walloped his bottom with her huge hand.
“WAAA!!!!” the boy cried out in pain. Odette was sure his own mother had spanked him from time to time, but a monster doing it was much more painful than a mere human woman’s hand.
Nevertheless, Odette continued to spank him. His buns turned red, as did Luka’s face from the humiliation. But there was something else. With the boy now pantsless, Odette could feel his erection against her lap. Enraged, Odette grabbed a paddle from her coffee table. She’d used it recently when her niece had visited. She’d been a naughty girl, trying to rape a boy about Luka’s age. That kind of behavior might have been fine out in monster country, but in human cities that could bring down retribution that would be detrimental to monster residents. So Odette had very firmly taught her better manners. In the future she’d stick to raping older men like a civilized monster.
Now it was time for Luka to taste the paddle, and for similar reasons. He was a little pervert, getting excited by either the feel of her lap or the spanking, or perhaps both.
“You! Little! Perverted! Thug!” she yelled, striking his behind harder with that paddle with each word. The boy cried out at each smack, and yet his penis only grew harder. Taken aback, she let him go.
Luka bounced around, holding onto his red hot fanny, crying his eyes out. Odette felt a pang of regret. Sure, the boy had needed a spanking. It was for his own good. But perhaps she hadn’t needed to use such a hard paddle designed for a monster’s much tougher tushie. She could have injured the boy. Fortunately, he seemed to be fine except for the redness. And that raging hard on.
“Come here, boy!” Odette ordered.
“NO!” Luka raged through his tears. “No more!”
“I’m not going to spank you anymore, Luka,” Odette said. “I think you’ve learned your lesson. But you seem to have a little problem there. Well, maybe not so little.”
Luka recognized what she was talking about immediately. She was, after all, a monster. Luka knew all about monsters. Or at least, he’d been told about them in church. Monsters were evil and would lead men to do dirty things and thus lose Ilias’ light. Luka looked for an exit. The only way out was to get around Odette. He made a break for it.
Odette’s leg extended, tripping Luka. He fell with a thud, face first, fortunately on carpet. Odette scooped him up with one arm and laid him back on the couch. His dick seemed to have only become stiffer due to his fear.
“Now there there, boy, I’m not going to hurt you anymore,” she cooed. “Quite the opposite, in fact. You see, I like sweet things too. And I’m afraid my jelly is going to go to waste on my pantry floor. Perhaps we can eat it together. Would you like to share my jelly?”
“But…. It’s on the floor!” Luka protested. But his mouth was watering. He clearly wanted some jelly.
“Dear boy, no one cleans house better than Odette,” she said proudly. “You can eat off of my floor! Now go to my kitchen, get a spoon, and then go scoop up some jelly from the floor. Make sure there’s no glass in it, boy!”
Luka looked at the entrance to the kitchen, then the entrance to the pantry. The door leading to freedom was free of obstacles once he got to the pantry.
“I see what you’re thinking, boy, it doesn’t take a mind reader,” Odette laughed. “You’ve had your lesson. If you want to run out, go ahead, I won’t try to stop you anymore. But if you run, you’ll miss out on a very special experience.”
“I’ve had jelly before, you know!” Luka said defensively. “I’m not going to stay here just to get a little of your stupid jelly!”
“No, I suspect you would not stay just for that,” Odette admitted. “But that’s not the special experience I was talking about.”
“Wh-What is the special experience then?” Luka asked.
Luka followed her eyes. She was looking at his still erect penis. He reached down and covered it with his hands.
“Bring me the jelly, boy,” Odette ordered. “Or not. If you want, just grab a spoonful for yourself and leave. You might want to take your pants with you as well.”
“That’s exactly what I’ll do!” Luka said hotly.
“Of course you will, dearie,” Odette said. “Now go on, go get a spoon out of the kitchen and help yourself to my sweet stuff. It’s what you came here for, is it not? But if you want more than just the sweet stuff in the pantry…. Get two spoons. One for me, one for you. And then I’ll fix your little…er…. Moderately sized problem.”
“Ilias says that’s wrong!” Luka yelled.
“Well, then, if you are so firm in your beliefs, this should be no problem for you,” Odette said. “But if you keep that commandment as well as you keep her commandment not to steal, I think you’ll be back with two spoons. But the choice is yours.”
Luka looked at her suspiciously. Luka had been taught that monsters were evil. Despite that, he didn’t hate them. But he was certain they wanted to do lewd things to him, and Odette was proving him right in that respect. And yet….. he couldn’t stop looking at those huge breasts. Odette noticed his gaze and grinned.
Odette watched as the boy went into the kitchen. He kept looking back, expecting her to spring from the couch and trap him, but she simply sat there and waited with interest. For her part, she wasn’t sure what he would do. That made it all the more interesting.
She remained in suspense when he exited the kitchen and went to the pantry. He was hiding the spoon, or spoons, probably with the intention of stealing them. He couldn’t have missed that her silverware was actual silver. But that only made it more interesting. Now he had yet another reason to run out the door. Would he? Or would he succumb to her temptation? Odette was eager to find out.
Luka entered the pantry, again glancing back to make sure she didn’t rise from the couch. She waited with baited breath. She didn’t really care one way or the other, but the suspense was still getting to her. A moment later, she had her answer.
Luka exited the pantry with two large spoons heaping with jelly.
Sullenly, he approached her with the spoons.
“Well, you wanted something sweet, did you not?” she asked. “Well go on, sit on the couch and enjoy your jelly. Give me the other spoon.”
Luka never took his eyes off her as he sat down and licked the jelly off of the large spoon.
“It’s good,” he said approvingly. “Expensive.”
“I’ve been fortunate enough in my life to be able to afford nice things,” Odette said. “When you leave, you may take the spoon home. Sell it if you want. It should fetch you enough to get some decent meals for awhile.”
“Aren’t you going to eat yours?” Luka asked.
“Oh yes I am,” Odette said mischeviously. She rose from the couch and commanded Luka to lie down. Staring at her, he obeyed, his penis sticking straight up into the air, having not settled down one iota since the spanking.
She reached down and touched it with the tip of her index finger. It twitched in response.
“Oh my, you’re so sensitive!” Odette teased. “That’s good. That means it will feel really good.”
Luka yelped in surprise as she dumped the spoon onto his member. With her hand, and the back of the cold spoon, she slathered the jelly all over it.
“That’s cold!” he complained.
“Don’t worry, something very warm is coming next,” she assured him.
She extended her huge tongue and licked him from base to tip. He arched his back and thrashed his arms, so startling was the pleasant sensation. The jelly was indeed delicious, made even moreso by his penis being the delivery system.
“If you do that to me again…” Luka gasped. “I… I’ll….”
“Of course you will,” Odette laughed, and licked him again. His reaction was just as enthusiastic, if not moreso.
“Oh look, you said something would happen if I did it again, and nothing happened,” she teased. “I guess I’ll just do it again.”
She licked him a third time. He was going absolutely insane from pleasure. But she could see that he already wanted release. He was young, that was understandable. And she was hungry, eager for a quick meal. Still, she wanted to train the boy. She turned his penis to the side and licked each side clean, leaving jelly remaining only on the side facing him and all over his balls.
“My, my,” she said. “It looks like I could just lick you all day and you’d take it. Such a strong boy. Maybe I’ll do that. Wait here, I’ll get more jelly.”
“NO!” he pleaded.
“No?” she asked innocently. “You don’t want me to lick you any more? You didn’t like it? Well, if you didn’t like it, then let me give you your pants and you can go.”
“NO!” he said in a panic. “I love how you lick me! I just want…. I want….”
“You want me to do something more, so that you’ll….”
“Yes, please! I feel like it’s about to explode!”
“Well in that case,” Odette laughed. “But remember, you asked for this.”
Odette took his entire length into her mouth, her tongue licking the jelly off of his balls as she sucked his entire member so hard her cheeks were sunken. The satisfying explosion came in seconds and seemed to go on forever. The delicious succulence of his semen mixed in with the sweet jelly to create an amazing combination that shouldn’t have worked but did. I should market this recipe, Odette thought. I’ll call it…. Odette’s Pieces.
“Stop it!” Luka pleaded. “I’m too sensitive!”
Odette realized that she’d been gulping it all down so ravenously that she’d failed to stop as his orgasm wound down. Of course, being a monster she could keep on going without mercy and he’d come again and again. But he was new to this and he had given himself to her willingly, so she decided he deserved gentler treatment.
“I saw you staring at my breasts before,” she said, taking his still hard penis out of her mouth. “Did you know a woman can give a man pleasure with her breasts?”
“I…. I didn’t know that,” Luka replied. “How?”
Odette lifted her enormous rack and plopped it down on his lap, his penis between them. She brought them together and began moving up and down. His penis was still slick with her saliva and slightly sticky from the jelly. His reaction to this kind of pleasure was more subdued, but just as satisfying. Rather than thrashing about, he simply relaxed and enjoyed the feeling of those two enormous pillows massaging him.
As enormous as her breasts were, she noticed that he was getting even bigger and harder. His head began to poke out from between her cleavage. Precum was leaking from his urethra.
Odette added her tongue to the fray, which caused Luka to begin thrashing around again. Sensing that he was going to finish very quickly again, she closed her lips over the head of his penis, continuing to move her breasts up and down his shaft. The semen exploded into her eager mouth again, although not as much as the first time. This time she remembered to be gentle in her sucking. When she was finished, the boy went limp.

Several hours later, with night beginning to fall, Luka awakened. He was alone, lying clothed on the couch of the woman whose apartment he had tried to rob. A note was on his chest. Luka opened it and began to read.
“I had errands to run today, so I am trusting you with my apartment while I’m gone. I am at your mercy. You can steal whatever you want and I can’t stop you. Or….. you can come back tomorrow and clean this place up for me, and maybe I know some fun things we can do while you clean. Oh, and if you want it, there’s another jar of jelly in the pantry. You may take that home with you to remind you of how kind I can be when you make me happy. You do want to make me happy, don’t you Luka?”
Luka closed the note and looked around the apartment. It did seem a bit untidy…..
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