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First Rule Of Stealing a Kiss	By : Sabulana Category: +G through L > Jak & Daxter Views: 5098 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Jak & Daxter, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Chapter List
- 1-First Rule Of Stealing a Kiss
- 2-The Morning After
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A/N: People seemed to like the last chapter so here is a rewrite of the
original lemon scene. The last chapter changed a lot when I actually typed it,
as opposed to what I hand-wrote. Anyway, enjoy everyone. I know I did! *Wink*
God, I hope Susan doesn't find this...
Disclaimer: I had a good disclaimer for this one but I can't remember
it...anyway, I do not own the characters. I'm merely playing with them and
letting them play with each other. Hehehe...
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It was after dawn when the two sleeping elves awoke. Jak found himself
curled around Torn's chest while the older elf was holding him close under the
blankets. Jak looked up at Torn and smiled. Torn was still asleep and all the
worry had gone from his face. He looked peaceful for the first time since Jak
had met him. It didn't last long though as Torn soon woke up.
"Morning," he said.
"Morning," Jak replied sleepily. He ran a hand over Torn's chest
and stopped whe foe found the scratches he'd made the night before. "I'm
sorry about those."
"It's fine. They won't scar and they're healing already," Torn
covered Jak's hand with his own. The green-blond ducked his head under the
covers. "Jak, what-"
Torn's question was cut off as Jak gently kissed every scratch on Torn's
front. Then he gently turned Torn over and kissed every scratch on his back. He
paused and looked up at Torn's head. The blanket completely covered him so Torn
couldn't see him.
Slowly Jak lowered his head and kissed the last scratch on Torn's butt.
Torn's eyes shot open and he lifted the blanket to look at Jak. He noted the
mischievous smirk on the younger elf's face and smirked himself. In a swift
movement, Torn had joined Jak under the blanket and was kissing Jak
passionately. Their arms wrapped around each other and they pressed their
bodies close. It was almost as if they were trying to merge.
Torn slowly lowered Jak on to his back and ran his hands down his chest. He
paused briefly at Jak's nipples.
Jak mewled with displeasure when the hands left but it quickly turned into a
moan when Torn's hands reached their destination. The older elf's hands wrapped
around his length and began pumping slowly.
"Torn..." Jak moaned loudly as Torn�s mouth left his and travelled
down his collar bone.
Torn looked at Jak, judging if he was ready or not before reaching down to
the pile of discarded clothes. Jak looked confused for a moment before he saw
the bottle in Torn's hand.
The tattooed elf settled between Jak's legs and spread some of the contents
of the bottle over his fingers. Gently he searched for Jak's entrance and
pushed a finger inside.
Jak gasped and arched back. Torn gave him time to adjust before adding a
second finger. He scissored them slowly and added a third finger. He pushed
them further inside; probing for the little bundle of nerves that would
distract Jak from the pain and discomfort.
He found it. Jak screamed with pleasure. Torn smirked and pushed again, with
the same response.
Jak was in exquisite agony. While the fingers were uncomfortable he didn't
want them to leave. He wanted them to touch that special spot again while also
wanting it to stop because he didn't feel he could hold on much longer.
All this didn't stop him from making sounds of disappointment when they were
taken out. The noises stopped when Torn replaced the fingers.
Torn slowly pushed his erection into Jak, making sure he didn't hurt the
shorter elf too much. Jak moved under him and he took it as a sign to begin
moving in and out. He hit Jak's spot again, producing a strangled moan.
"Torn...more...do that again..." Jak gasped.
Torn obliged him but this time, he thrust harder. Jak screamed. Torn moved
faster and faster in and out of Jak. He could feel his release building up
inside him and knew Jak couldn't be far behind.
Jak, by now, was screaming just about none stop. He couldn't even think
coherently. The only words left in his vocabulary were 'Torn', 'more' and
'harder'. He wasn't sure if any of these words were escaping in his screams
and, to be honest, he didn't care as long as Torn didn't stop thrusting in and
out, hitting that bundle of nerves every time. The Metal Heads could have the
city for all he cared at that moment.
Jak came first and Torn not long after. They both screamed each others name
and Torn collapsed, panting, on Jak.
"Jak kissed Torn once before lying back on the bed. Torn kissed
his chest and moved to a slightly more comfortable position to fall asleep in.
"Torn..." Jak began, still a little out of breath. The other elf
looked at him. "I love you."
"Torn smiled. " I love you too," He said before kissing Jak
again and pulling him close.
They fell asleep like that and didn't wake up until much later.
Outside, Tess and Daxter were playing a card game, guarding the door during
all of this. Samos appeared at the end of the street. He had a new mission for
Torn to give to Jak but he was stopped form entering by Daxter.
"Better not go in there, big green," the cheeky ottsel said.
"Oh? And why shouldn't I enter my own hideout?" Samos turned on
Daxter.
"Torn and Jak are sleeping. You don't want to wake them, do you?"
Tess smiled sweetly. "We'll tell them what they have to do when they wake
up. Unless we can help?"
"No, no. Just give Torn this," the Shadow handed Tess ain ain
envelope. "Do I want to know why they�re so tired?"
"Oh, y'know, missions and stuff. Jak hasn't been sleeping so good
either," Daxter made up any excuse from the top of his head.
"Hmm.very well then. I shall see you two later then. Goodbye,"
Samos walked off and Tess and Daxter resumed their game.
"Heh! I win again, baby!"
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A/N: Well, what do you think? Feedback appreciated unless you're flaming. In
that case you are either homophobic or I'm a really bad author...and if you're
homophobic, why the hell did you read it anyway? *Confused* Anyway, reviews
feed the Plot Bunnies and if they don't get fed, they don't inspire me and run
away to visit my friends.
Since this was originally posted on fanfiction.net I thought I would thank the
reviewers for both chapters here:
Elys ~ spoke too soon dear.
LittleMissGothicChyld ~ I told you not to read it in class! What if Liz
caught you?
Karr �Scarface� ~ Thank you! *blushing*
HappyGlow ~ Thanks!
Lady Tsuru ~ Jak was originally submissive one all the way through but then
I typed it and it didn�t work that way�
That seems to be it�if I�ve missed you, I�m sorry but I�m too busy to hunt through
over 60 e-mails from fanfiction.net alone.
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