Niara's Tales: Bow of the Righteous | By : NiaraAfforegate Category: +G through L > Lord of the Rings Online, The Views: 3014 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Notes: This chapter is the beginning. As a result, though it is technically a LotRO story, this entry takes place in lands as yet uncharted by the MMO. Even so, it details the events surrounding Niara, a character within the LotRO universe, so sue me if that's not good enough. Reviews, comments, criticisms, anythign at all, all will be appreciated. Feel free to tear me apart in the name of improving my work. I enjoy it. Without further ado then, here is the beginning of Niara's Story.
-Niara ==================== Epic Book: Introduction Leaning low in the saddle, Niara whispered hurried urgings for her horse to run onward and faster. One of the short, crude orc arrows whipped past her a few feet off to the left, while a second fell short a short way to her right. She thanked whatever small mercy it was orcish bows were short of range and inaccurate at best. The shouts behind her cried for blood, but the small band was on foot, and wouldn’t catch her so long as she kept riding. They were too close though. Far too close for her liking. Close enough that on bad days, the horses could smell orc stench on the wind, even at home. It made them skittish, and between calming the poor creatures, and the training and preparations she and the other stable hands had been going through, there was precious little time left for actually training them. Prepare they must, though, that much got clearer by the day. Other farmsteads had been raided already, and a band would strike the Foregate farm eventually. Sooner rather than later if the small bands were getting this close. Niara turned her horse as her pursuers fell behind, heading in a random direction away from her home. They would follow her trail for a while at least, and she daren’t lead them back. It was only a small band, certainly, and nothing the farm couldn’t handle by now, but if any turned tail and escaped, it might bring a proper raiding party down on them. As the plains rushed by beneath her, Niara glanced up to get a bearing of the time. Still about three or four hours of sunlight left, enough time to tend what horses remained on the farm at the moment, and drill for a while with the other stable hands. Hopefully. After a few more minutes she turned her horse homeward. If she was really honest with herself, she liked taking the daily scouting runs whenever she could. Her father would disapprove, she was certain, but then, he’d been away to Gondor for the past two months, to trade horses there, and didn’t know about Saruman’s capitulation to the Enemy, or the subsequent raiding that had been going on. A part of her was slightly worried that he’d be coming back unprepared, but the only dangerous part would be the trip from Edoras home again, and he’d pick up what he needed to know there. She shifted slightly in the saddle, resettling the shield on her back, over the quiver that sat there as well. Besides, it was always a big venture, these yearly trading trips, and between Edoras and Minas Tirith, they travelled with an established caravan. It also took the majority of horse stock from the farm, leaving her precious little to actually do. A full half of the horses that set out on the trips would be coming back; only half would be traded, the yearlings and other strong, fresh young horses, the other half would be along for the ride, to carry back the goods and currency bartered for after the dealings were all done. All that was left on the farm itself were their stock breeding horses, and any new foals, their own personal horses, and a few trusted old friends, too old now for anything but company. The farm came into sight and Niara sat up in the saddle, waving one hand over her head in case anyone was watching for her. Her eyes could pick out a figure standing watch on the roof of the homestead, but she couldn’t identify him yet. She felt bad about it, but it was actually quite exciting. Since the reports of raiding and occasional bands of orcs had started, she’d started preparing the farm of fending off a raid if one came. There was much more defensive construction and barricading set up around the perimeter now, and she and the stable hands had been training and drilling daily, pooling what each of them knew of combat, drawing what they could from a few of her father’s old books, and sparring against each other. There was an air of waiting, and impending that she found slightly intoxicating, even if the fact made her feel somewhat guilty. Before this had started, she had always had very little to do while the trading trips were made. There were generally no horses that needed training, and tending them certainly didn’t take all day when there were so few left. Her father always left her with instructions to work on this or that, for discipline’s sake, when he was in the mind that she ought to become a shield-maiden. The other half of the time, usually when he got back from the White City, he would try to groom her to be more lady-like, so that she might find a powerful suitor from the city. That he couldn’t make up his mind was annoying, but in the end it was overshadowed by the fact that she found both prospects distasteful; the real issue was that he wanted her to go out, find a nice, suitably stationed and malleable young man, and bring him back to her father, so he could pass the farm on to someone he trusted and could teach. As she rode through the front gate of the farm, the boy on the roof tipped a pair of fingers to her in greeting, and started to scramble down A few of the other hands wandered towards her as well, and she waited for them all to get within earshot. “Not much change out there today, in any direction. They’re out there, in small bands, here and there, and there’re more of them than there were a few weeks ago. Nothing large enough to attack us yet, but it will happen, I’m more sure of it now than ever. Anything happen while I was out?” She shrugged off her shield as she reported, letting it clank to the ground, and pulled her hair out of the back of her tunic with a sigh. James, the boy who had been on watch shook his head. “Nope, nothing from the orcs or anything like that. All pretty quite. Anis finally foaled though, strong healthy girl. They’re both recovering and seem to be doing well. Your father’ll be pleased to hear that, I bet. Star is almost past it, and we’ll need another breeding mare in a couple of years to replace her.” He scratched at his cheek as he spoke. He’d probably need to start shaving soon, more than likely. Niara nodded, and was about to speak when a pair of bright blue eyes caught her gaze. Danas seemed to have a knack for getting her attention whenever he wanted without saying or doing anything. She still wasn’t quite sure how he managed it. “Miss Niara? Since you’re back, I thought we might go through the drills again, and pair off for some sparring. It’s easier with even numbers, after all. Your father ought to be back within the week, and he’ll be surprised to see the farm done over like it has been, so we all want to show him we’re ready to defend this place when the time comes.” He was grinning as he bent to scoop up her discarded shield, and take the sword she had unbelted from her waist from her. “Right, yes. Just give me a couple of minutes; I’ll be back in a second.” He nodded as she made for the farmhouse, and James took her horse. It occurred to her as she stepped inside that Danas had been suggesting the drilling, even as he took her weapons from her. They’d gone through these motions often enough now that he had already known she’d want a few minutes first. She slipped off her quiver and tossed it onto her bed, before taking care of business and getting a drink. Standing with one hand on her hip and the other holding the small earthen-ware cup she was drinking from, Naira looked at herself in a cloudy mirror that resided in the common room of the homestead. Dark green eyes watched back, tracing over the small line just under her left eye. A scar, acquired when she had traded arrows with what had probably been a lone orc scout, a few weeks ago. His arrow had come within a finger length of taking her eye out, or potentially killing her altogether, and the injury hadn’t faded away yet. She might bear the mark of it for years and years, or even the rest of her life. Fortunately, the orc had only had time for a single shot before her own arrow adorned his neck, and she’d been left on an excited high for the rest of the day, but her father was going to be very upset when he found out. She sighed, brushing hands over her face and heading towards the door again. The way her hair would frame her face could hide it well enough though, and the line was already easy to miss, even if it wasn’t entirely un-noticeable. She reminded herself that vanity was a luxury of the well protected and sheltered these days, and that she was neither. More than that, she found herself remembering the rush and excitement of the encounter more than the injury; it had been a thrill that overwhelmed her, not the fear or worry she had first expected. Back outside, Danas had formed the men up, eleven of them in total, though some, like James, ought still to be called boys. Niara dashed across the yard to quickly check on her horse, then returned to reclaim her gear from Danas and join the line-up. They started with combat drills, along with stance and form practice, and Niara found herself wondering what her father would think of it all. Usually when he got back from Minas Tirith, he was all a bluster about her being an elegant lady, and marrying some powerful noble and giving up her training. Normally, he’d be delighted to see her putting so much effort into this, instead of whiling away her days practicing with her bow, but he could well be annoyed at it all if he was feeling the other way. After drills, they paired off to spar in real practice, after taking a moment for them all to bind their blades in cloth. As always, though, Niara found herself having a hard time keeping her shield and sword apart. Often she’d end up attempting to block or parry with her sword, when strictly speaking the form worked best if she used her shield, and kept the sword ready, this would then lead to her attempting to make use of openings with he shield, rather than her blade, which never really worked out. The training went on, though, and she tried to keep up as best she could. After a couple of hours, they broke for the evening, and Niara leaned against the wall of a stable, catching her breath. She felt drenched in sweat, and her hair was struggling to escape its confines and get into a woeful mess. Danas approached her, sword over one shoulder and an annoyingly cheerful grin on his face. He didn’t even have the courtesy to look flustered or tired out, and barely seemed to have broken a sweat. “You’re getting better, you know, I was watching your form when I could. I know that your father thinks that if you become a shield maiden, you ought to be a proper formal one, and train with sword and shield and go to Edoras, and all that, but it looks to me like the style just doesn’t suit you. You could try dual wielding, that way you’d never have to worry about which hand to defend with and which one to attack with. That seems to be your sticking point.” Once more, he picked up her discarded sword and shield, along with his own. Niara just nodded, still regaining her breath, and wiped sweat from her brow. After a moment she stood upright, leaning her head back and stretching. “Be lighter too. It’s easy for you, working away over there with more muscles than three of me, but that shield is heavy.” Danas worked the small forge for the farm, taking care of what metalworking they needed done, when it was needed, and he looked more at home with the heavy smithing hammer in his hand, than with his sword, but the result was that he was easily the largest and strongest man on the farm, and took notably longer to tire than any of his sparing partners. Mind you, he had removed his shirt while drilling, and the sharp smell of the thin sheen of sweat coving his rather well defined body were all things that Niara noticed, while trying to pretend she didn’t. “Maybe you can show me what you mean some time. Formal may be well and good, but I’d rather survive when the actual attack comes.” Danas nodded to her, before turning to head back to the small group of buildings where he and the other farm hands stayed, and Niara leaned back against the stable wall, thinking things she really though she ought not to. With an hour or so left of light, she and the other hands set about tending and bedding down the horses for the evening, and Niara made sure to check properly on Anis and her new foal. As the last of the light was fading, a shout came from the roof of the homestead, and Niara came into the courtyard to find her father’s caravan filing in and assembling. She rushed over to give him a hug as he dismounted, shouting happily, while at the same time another part of her groaned inwardly at the thought of having to take care of all the other horses, and unpacking and sorting the large amount of bartered goods he’d brought back. It would probably take them at least another couple of hours, if not more. “Father, you’re back! We though you’d be home soon. I’m so glad you’re safe! How were the roads? We’ve so much to tell you, though you’ve probably heard a lot already from Edoras, I guess. Did you do well? It looks like you did. Anis foaled just this evening, I’ve just finished bedding them down. What—” Her enthusiastic rambling was cut off by there father’s strong laugh. “Calm, Niara-girl, Calm! Easy! It’s been a long day! I’ve got some very important news, but lets get everyone settled and unpacked first, we can talk about everything later over some proper supper.” The hands that had travelled with him were beginning to unpack and lead the train horses away to be cared for, but she noticed that a good many of them were wearing scale or chain shirts, and all of them had weapons, none of which they’d left with two months ago. More than that, there were three faces she couldn’t see among them, men she knew had set out with her father, and most certainly ought to have come back with him. Giving her father another quick kiss on the cheek, she dived into the bustle of hands unloading and tending, losing herself in the work, and the gentle wash of conversation drifting back and forth between people who hadn’t seen each other for a time. Much small news passed between them as they worked, and a part of her was surprised that so little of the conversation touched on the conflict that seemed to be consuming the land. It was reassuring, in its way, she thought; you might start wearing armour, and carrying weapons, and your farm might become a fortress, but underneath it all, everyone was still themselves, and still wanted to talk about the trading and the news from afar, and conflict be damned. “Niara!” A call pulled her out of her quiet thoughts as she cleaned tack and she glanced up to see Treffar, now complete with scale shirt and a somewhat intimidating, if plain and functional two-handed sword on his back. “I see the unpleasantness with the orcs has reached your ears here as well. I’m glad to see you took it into your head to prepare the place for what may come, some of us were worried we might be coming back to a burnt ruin.” Niara couldn’t help a smile. He looked so different with the weapon and armour, but it seemed to have come to suit him already, and he still sounded like the Treffar she knew underneath. “We probably knew about the troubles before you did, Treff. There’ve been reports from a number of farms, attacked, ransacked, raided… sometimes they just take horses, black ones, other times they burn and destroy everything. None of us wanted to see that happen here, so we set to.” The other man picked up some dropped tack and set to cleaning it along side her. “Aye, but all of this, the defences, the sentries, the training I’ve been hearing about. No-one else here would think like that, I’ll wager all of this came right from your mind, didn’t it, girl? The other men might not admit it, but your mind’s sharp like a razor and quick to work out what needs doing. That’s why your father wants to keep you here on the farm. Sure, he might want to you find a husband from somewhere for him to train in taking care of the place, but we all know it’ll really be you running the show in the end.” Here Niara snorted, blushing despite herself, but still perturbed. “Thanks, but I don’t suppose he’s ever going to take the time to ask if I want to spend my life here. I love the horses, and I love my father, but—” She hesitated, not quite sure how to put to words what she was thinking. “There’s big things going on in the world, and not all them nice. I feel like I want to help, want to do something about it, and I can’t do that from here. There’s some that have whispered that the Enemy has returned, you know. I know, if that’s happened those who fight will need horses, but I just can’t do that all my life.” She inspected the piece she’d finished and put it away, taking up the next, avoiding his eyes. “You’re right though. My plans and ideas. I’d like to actually build a tower or two, to post the sentries in properly, maybe train everyone with a bow a little, but we’ve not the time, or resources, for it.” More horses were lead in and bedded down, more tack placed alongside the growing pile for cleaning, and Thamas settled in with them to help. The boy was only about fourteen, and had gone with her father for his first chance at seeing the Minas Tirith. Niara was glad he’d made it back in one piece. Treffar scuffed him lightly over the back of the head, and claimed he was just shirking carrying duty. Thamas, grinning, suggested that if more were needed for carrying, someone bigger and stronger than him ought to get out and do it. Treffar turned his attention back to Niara as she interrupted them. “So, tell me, Father said he had some big, important news for me. I’m dreading what it is, unless it’s that he’s finally made up his mind once and for all exactly what he wants of me. Either way it’ll be a relief if he just stops changing his mind. Either of you two care to fill me in?” She didn’t like the way they glanced at each other, only for the briefest of seconds, but it was there. Treffar spoke up first. “The boss has been keeping very quiet about that. A few of us think we might have worked it out, but—” He made a pained expression, and Thamas took over. “Your Da wants to be the one to tell you, and we could just as well be wrong in our guess. What we’re guessing isn’t something we’d want to be wrong about telling you, so you’ll just have to wait until we’re all done and he decides to tell you.” Niara tried to control the scowl taking over her features. She couldn’t exactly blame them, in the end. Her father’s temper was something no man on the farm wanted to be on the wrong end of, and for that matter, she’d heard whispers that they dreaded her almost as much. “Fine. How about something you can tell me.” She looked down. “Though I’m not sure I want to hear it confirmed, really. Fridrick isn’t with you all, nor Nestan, nor Eoswart. Tell me of them.” The air dropped, and silence settled for a moment as they all cleaned. It was Thamas that spoke first, surprisingly. “It is as you fear, Niara. For Nestan and Eoswart, at least. We were attacked a couple of times on the way out, between Edoras and the White City. Small bands, trying their luck, because we weren’t defended or anything to begin with. Even bandits once or twice, not just orcs.” The young man spat, a derisive, disgusted gesture she’d never seen the boy make before. “Was a man as did for Nestan in the end, not an orc or any servant of the Enemy, from behind, while he was stopping another bandit unhitching the horses.” He shook his head. “I was there, but he thought I was too small to be a threat. I gutted him with my knife, but I couldn’t save Nestan.” As she looked at him more closely, Niara noticed for the first time, a weight behind his eyes that no boy his age ought to have. She gripped his shoulder for a moment as Treffar continued. “Eoswart fell halfway back, to an orc arrow. We were prepared and ready, so no parties attacked us directly, but there were small groups of them on the plains, and they’d take shots at us when they thought we wouldn’t chase. Couldn’t chase, mostly, we couldn’t leave the horses, and we’ve no real bowmen among us to keep them out of bowshot.” “And Fridrick?” Here they both seemed to brighten somewhat.While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. 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