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Precursors & Dark Makers	By : Xax Category: +G through L > Jak & Daxter Views: 5605 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Chapter List
- 1-Precursors & Dark Makers
- 2-Chapter 2
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- 2
Author's Note: It's been ages and ages since I posted the first chapter. Whoops. Actually the difference in response between this and Interspecies Cooperation is pretty interesting....

Anyway in terms of actual <em>fic content</em>, I should mention that this gets kind of, uh, violent. Like there's a definite veering towards torture porn or something like that, although in this case it's all <em>consensual</em>. Also the sex scenes get kind of ridiculous but really I'll let you the reader decide about that.

Jak woke bleary-eyed and dizzy, like he'd been hit over the head with a plank. His body moved strangely when he shifted into wakefulness; his arms and legs seemed too long and lanky, his entire body stretched and attenuated. His claws scraped across the floor, through the thick gel of dark eco still slopped over and all around him in a thick coat. He yawned; his mouth tasted foul, like battery acid, and the taste wasn't improved by the dark eco covering him dripping into his mouth. He ran his tongue along the wider curve of his teeth; it felt strange over the extra fangs.
The room was unexpectedly light when he opened his eyes. He was in the cathedral hall of the shrine, walls and ceiling crumbling to bits, and the sun — midway up in the sky — cast stark light and shadow across the wrecked floor. He sat up, dark eco spilling down his body, like thick tar, oozing down in heavy drops. Moving hurt; every part of him was stiff and aching. The eco around him had set during the night, now solid and gel-like, and he'd been sleeping in the crater formed by his larger body, the outline still vaguely humanoid as the eco slowly spread inward.
Around him, in sleeping — he assumed — piles, were the dark makers. He stirred and tried to get to his feet, vertigo slamming him sideways as he tried to stand. He clung to a nearby pillar until the worst of it faded. It was still a challenge to stagger through the mess of bodies without tripping over anyone. He waded through the ankle-thick mess of eco, leaving a dark trail in his wake.
As he staggered through the passages of the ruined temple, a thick swimming feeling slowly settled into him, and the numb feeling that came after that was even worse. When he was a kid Samos had told him all about eco poisoning, even though his unique metabolism meant he didn't have to worry about it, not really. Though most people would have been killed on contact with dark eco, he could absorb enough of it for the more standard eco poisoning symptoms to set it. He shook his head, balance off, staggering and shaking with each step as he dragged himself up the stairs, his long claws scraping across the stone.
Eco poisoning wasn't much of a problem, traditionally — if you sat on top of an eco vent for hours you might get a little lightheaded, but even as a kid he'd never had that problem. He burned through eco like a flash explosion, so all he knew of it was Samos' boring lectures.
Who knew what dark eco did to you; it was too deadly for anyone else to find out. He'd been eating it; drinking it straight from the source — his pale cheeks flushed dark as he fully recalled just what he'd been up to last night, swamped in alien bodies, hot lines of come splashing across his gigantic frame. Even drained and exhausted the memory was arousing, but his body just wasn't up to it right now.
Purple lightning crackled across his body as he tried to force the dark eco through him, refracting off the walls as he climbed higher up the stairway. A tiny thread of it seeped from him in crackling, sharp energy, like lightning and ozone. He was still coated in dark eco, and the only real affect the lightning had was a slow burning starting up across his skin as he started absorbing more.
He brushed a hand across his face and it came back dripping; droplets splattered to the ground as he shook his hand. He felt hot all over, almost feverish. He spat, and it came out threaded with dark lines. He could feel dark eco well up in his mouth, like spit, like drool, and it dribbled out past his lips before he could spit again. He spat out the mouthful, then wiped his mouth with the back of his arm, just smearing the eco covering him further.
He'd collapsed in the sand; he hadn't noticed when he'd reached the top of the steps. He was outside, and he was on his knees. Something shifted in front of him and he looked up, his view swaying dizzyingly in a way that must mean his head as lolling back and forth. A dark maker stood in front of him, all black-purple shell and skin, horn and bone sticking out of xyr body.
He looked at xem, more dark eco spilling between his lips and dripping down his chin, turning aside to spit and cough. The dark maker's hand traced over his cheek, xyr right hand absurdly huge, asymmetrical and lopsided. The claws traced over his cheek and jaw, dimpling his skin but not breaking it. Who knew what it meant, and after a moment xe turned away. He wasn't in a state of mind to wonder about it; everything was swimming and vague. He knew his body was pushing out the dark eco, but he could spit mouthfuls of it all day and still be covered in it at the end. His skin burned all over, deathly pale, and the more eco he spit out the faster the he absorbed what was still coating him from head to toe, sucking it up into his body with a painful burn.
He coughed, spraying droplets of eco across the sand in front of him. He coughed and spat and just sat there, trembling and feverish, hacking weakly over and over, coughing up mouthfuls of eco, drooling it out. The sand in front of him was a dirty black with pools starting to form by the time the dark maker reappeared. Jak looked up, eyes unfocused, and saw xe was carrying a large urn, half-dragging it up the steps. It left a heavy furrow in the sand as xe dragged it towards him. The dark maker gestured at him and shoved it forwards, letting it settle into the sand in front of him. The urn listed over, a white, glistening fluid slopping out as it grit against the sand, toppling over in minute degrees.
Jak blinked slowly before dragging himself forward and leaning over the lip of the urn. Light eco filled it to the brim, slopping over the sides as the urn slowly shifted in the loose sand, and he didn't even think about it before he shoved both his arms down into the thick fluid, so sharply his claws crashed against the bottom of the container.
Even in the grips of eco poisoning the light eco felt warm and pleasant, rushing into him like a wave. He felt elated, giddy and flushed, and he sagged back against the wall, dragging the urn down on top of him, breathing hard. The entire landscape — his whole body — was twisting around, warping and shifting, and he had to keep a firm grasp on the wall behind him unless he wanted to fly off.
His whole body throbbed with the eco running through him, and although the slime coating him thinned as he absorbed it all, the rush of new energy inside him welled up painlessly. He was still full past overflowing with eco, with more being pulling into him every moment, but the heavy, aching haze that covered him lifted, replaced with a sharp, hollow pain as the eco inside him roiled around. He sagged back against the wall, body tense and aching as his skin sucked up the last of the thick, clotted dark eco covering him, his insides feeling like a whirlwind.
His claws scraped against the old rock wall as he pushed himself forward, his knees landing on the sand with a thump. His body ached, sweat pouring down his pale skin, and he felt — burnt up and electric, utterly consumed by the eco rushing through him. His eco settled inside him, churning in his chest, roiling down across his stomach, perforating his guts, and with a lurch so sharp it made him gasp sickly it welled up, percolating into physical form, making him cough and spit threads of blurry combined eco, marbled dark and light.
Somewhat inappropriately, he felt his cock jerk, lengthening down his thigh as he gagged and coughed up more eco, and he laughed slightly hysterically between heaving shudders. His body hummed with eco, even though it felt like his skin was burning up. The spike of pleasure through him when his cock stiffened was so forceful he gasped and gagged and breathed wrong, choking and coughing eco up his nose, his face a smeared mess. The mixture of sickly and aroused at the same time felt perverse; his body a mess of conflicting sensations.
He let out a shuddering gasp, listing to the side, leaning hard against the gritty sandstone wall as he reached down with one hand and grasped his cock. Just the touch sent another whirling overpowered sensation through him. A noise like a growl ripped its way up through his throat as he stroked his cock, so hard it felt bigger, bloated with the blood and eco rushing inside him. With a jolt of weight shifting, eco slid down his body, whirling in the pit of his stomach, leeching through his guts and reaching into his cock.
He was leaking precome, a translucent black as it dribbled out the tip of his cock, and with a slight push more burbled out, slick and black as it rolled down the underside of his cock, across his pale fingers. His cock was dark at the tip; not flushed red but a glossy grey-black, and when he pushed again another spurt of precome mixed with eco sprayed out his cock. He felt full to bursting.
Like he was a vessel punctured, the slight seeping of eco out his cock pulled more down, rushing down to his swollen cock, the entire thing stretching and bloating larger, balls swelling. The corded tubes inside his sack twisted and lengthened, thickening, and it was with a dizzying lurch that the eco inside him dropped out from its suspended state, percolating through him directly, the heady burn of dark eco flooding through his balls as the tubes stretched and folded against each other, his sac's heavy skin stretching as it bulged out in lumps, skin turning a mottled black-purple from the sheer excess of eco inside him.
He came in a rush, black come bursting out in ribbons, his cock jerking and spasming as he shot heavy ropes across the sand. The sensation of it all sublimating into physical form somehow hit harder than the ejaculation itself, his orgasm riding up until his mind pinwheeled away, his body consumed by sensation. The mind-blowing orgasm lasted long enough for Jak to have his awareness pinwheel away and dizzily come back, concentrate on his surroundings, only to find himself slumped against the wall still coming weakly, dark eco spurting out of him into a thick slurry all across the sand in front of him. The pressure inside him hadn't let up at all.
Sharp claws touched on his shoulder and he started, balance and reflexes so messed up he almost toppled forward. The dark maker who'd brought him the light eco was still there; xe'd been watching, xyr cock hard, dripping long strands of black come, xyr cunt lips spread around xyr shaft, slick and flushed black-purple. Jak groaned and leaned into xem, mouth open, fangs scraping across xyr chitinous skin as xe straddled him, rubbing his swollen, oversized cock against xyr spread labia. His body was impossibly hot, skin flushed grey-pink all over his chest and stomach, dark come spurting across the dark maker's stomach, hollow and sunken, xyr hips and chest chitin in sharp relief against the smooth, black-purple skin of xyr stomach.
Xe ground xyr spread lips over the base of his cock, his mottled purple-black skin almost matching xyr's. Xe rocked against him, xyr cock rubbing against his, labia spread around his cock's thick shaft. The eco slopping between them snapped and crackled, wet slurps sounding as Jak ground back against xem, grunting and gasping as he shoved the swollen, bloated pillar of his cock against xyr body.
The dark maker rose up, reaching down to spread xyr cunt widely. Xe pressed against the very tip of his cock, dark eco spurting from the tip like oil upwelling, xyr cunt folding open over his cockhead, the barest fraction of its slope pushing inside xem. The dark maker came with a rattling noise, xyr tongues lolling out as xyr cock erupted across Jak's face, painting it with dark streams.
The light eco in him was almost as overwhelming as the dark, singing and frantic, and it was with a subconscious movement that he brought it forward. It poured through his fingers as he reached for the dark maker's cunt, sliding his fingers around the rim of xyr entrance, the heavy, soft skin there stretching like thick rubber as he thrust forward, bloated cock sinking inside. Light eco glistened under xyr skin as he thrust in, dark eco spurting from his cock in burning, stinging waves, splattering across his thighs as he thrust up sharply. The dark maker pushing back with equal force. Half his bloated, mottled cock sunk inside xem with one thrust, the wrist-thick length stretching xyr cunt wide and still xe pushed back. The dark maker sunk down his cock, hilting the entire thing inside xem, xyr hollow stomach swelling out, the chitin across xyr hips bulging apart into distinct plates to make room for the oversized thing.
Jak was already dizzy and desperate for release, his balls aching with the massive load of dark eco inside them, his entire body rejecting the eco burning through his veins. The painfully tight grip of the dark maker's cunt, sliding so smoothly over his burning cock, made his entire body tremble with release. He came almost instantly, dark eco pouring from his cock, spraying deep inside the dark maker, xyr cock erupting again and staining his face dark as he just came and came, strange muscles clamping tight around his cock, trapping his load inside the dark maker. Xe swelled larger and larger, xyr stomach bloating. The light eco inside xyr stretched and healed xem, xyr reaction the same as his, swelling xyr cock thicker and heavier as he spent his load, erupting in a continual climax that left him insensate, trembling and drained, only aware of the tight clenching of the dark maker's cunt around his cock and the painful sting of eco all around him, burning its way back into his body.
The dark maker's tongues curled over his face and Jak opened wide, a needy sound escaping before xyr tongues plunged into his mouth, his tongue sliding against the writhing, whiplike appendages, dark eco drooling into his mouth and past his lips.
His entire body felt twitchy and active, charged with energy. The dark eco inside him rolled and swelled, eager and hungry. He grasped the dark maker's cock, hands stroking up and down its slimy length. He pushed his light eco down into his hands and pulled at it, making it bulge and swell outwards, hugely thick and swelling longer up his stomach.
A burble of dark eco still poured out from the tip, dripping down across the shaft and down into xyr lower folds, spread wide around Jak's cock, still weakly oozing inside xem. Jak kept stroking it, until it was sandwiched between their bodies, thicker than an arm and long enough for the tip to press against the hollow of his neck. He leaned forward to kiss the dark maker again, dark eco sizzling across the underside of his jaw, both hands stroking along the immense shaft.
Xyr gut bulged further, some internal chambers or organs swelling up alongside xyr cock, the weight of dark eco inside xem shifting and moving. Dark eco poured out from the tip of the immense cock in a steady burble, glistening down Jak's neck and chest as it slowly absorbed into him, leaving a thick crusted residue with only a trickle winding down his stomach. But the dark maker clutched him tight, pressing them together as xyr cock ballooned, mostly thicker and thicker now, the tip pressing against their faces as they kissed, the immense organ thicker than the dark maker's sturdy legs; almost as thick as xyr hips.
The wet folds of skin below xyr cock were swollen too, slick and black, and the continued growth pushed Jak back, sliding his half-hard cock out from xyr body, a wet gush of black slime flooding over his crotch, soaking into his body with an exhilarating pain. Xyr stomach was bloated outwards, skin taut over xyr enlarged organs, and as Jak pulled out xyr flushed, heavy cunt drooled dark eco around his cock. Viscous fluid spurt in long gushes from the tip of xyr cock, spraying out over their heads. Jak pulled back from their kiss, his mouth streaked with dark eco, and pressed his lips to xyr cockhead, opening wide and swallowing constantly even as dark eco poured out past his lips, the flow too much even for him. It coated his front and dripped down his legs.
He rubbed his fingers against xyr heavy, swollen lips before pushing them inside, his cockhead emerging with a wet squelch; xyr cunt lips spread just as wide still, just from the massive pillar of xyr cock. He twisted his fingers around with a wet friction, long black lines of liquid splattering between them as he probed deeper. He arched back, pulling the dark maker on top of him as he drew down, until he was sprawled on his back in the sand, come and eco wetly splattering out across his hips. Xyr cock was a massive pipe between them, as big as either of their bodies, so huge he could only reach the dark maker's shoulders around its huge girth.
He stroked xyr cock as well as he could, pinned to the ground underneath it, his half-hard cock sliding against it, eco slopping from the tip all across his body in heavy lines. Xyr claws across his sides set him off again, and he howled as he came, coughing on the eco pouring into his mouth as he came against xyr unfurled folds, open like an obscene flower around xyr cock, his come marbled grey, threaded with lines of glistening, pulsing eco.
The dark maker pulled back and stood, xyr cock staying heavy across Jak's body, just barely moving in jerks as xe stepped backwards. The tip dragged across Jak's body, spraying him down with dark eco, until with a wet, solid thud it slipped between his spread legs and landed in the gritty, quicksand slurry beneath him.
The dark maker pushed forward, xyr cock rising up from the sand before thudding down again, the blocky tip right between Jak's cheeks. The underside of it was thickly coated in sand, more gritty across xyr eco-covered body, xyr swollen lower lips completely encrusted. Jak shuddered as xe sprayed precome against his ass, grinding himself against xyr immense cock. The tip of it alone was bigger than anything he'd ever had inside him; the very tip of the sloped head was the size of his hand with his fingers outstretched and it only got thicker from there.
Xe rocked forward, xyr cock bumping and jutting against his tight asshole, and for a moment Jak thought he'd gotten in over his head. He let all his light eco flow through him, his bare skin glimmering as he started shining, his wings sprouting from his back and waving through the sand, drying the sweat across his sand-crusted skin. But mostly he concentrated on his ass, on the tight pucker of his asshole. The dark maker thrust forward again, xyr absurdly gigantic cock catching against his asshole and straining forward, dimpling the tight muscle more and more until with a clench his asshole flexed open and took in the barest fraction of xyr cock.
Jak groaned. His ass already ached from the strain, but the dark maker awkwardly thrust further, sending more of xyr titanic cock driving into him. His ass stretched out far beyond what was natural, the muscle warping like stiff putty as it stretched wider and wider. Jak panted and shuddered, light eco wreathing around his hips and ass as xe drove deeper, still only the barest amount of xyr length inside him. The dark maker grabbed his ankles and pulled him closer, working him down on xyr cock, and he distinctly felt his pelvis warp and stretch, creaking like an old door as it spread open wider. His stomach bulged out, the tip of xyr cock pressing clearly against his skin from the inside, blocky and huge, and the entire tip wasn't even in him already.
More pushed into him, stretching him far past whatever limits his body would normally have, but now he stretched and warped, aching with the strain of it as he was filled up. His body clenched tight around the impossibly-huge cock; his stomach bloated further as it drove up inside him. Foot after foot of the huge, dark cock slid inside him, his asshole distending. His hips warped and stretched out to accommodate the girth of the cock.
The dark maker was constantly spurting dark eco, a low hot pain inside him, and the further xe pushed inside him the harsher it felt, stinging and burning as xe plowed into him until his body was stretched out around xyr cock. Each push felt like it stretched his body to the very limit, drawn taut around the cock, but more kept fitting inside him, his body practically form-fitted around a cock as large as he was, his stomach bloated outward, just a thin covering of flesh and guts around the dark, painfully hot cock inside him. His entire body was trembling, muscles firing randomly as the dark maker grabbed his warped, stretched hips and pulled him down, xyr gritty cock slamming inside him like a punch, his dick drooling precome in a long, thick line, bobbing up and down with his cock as his body shook. The dark maker looked out of it too, xyr expression dizzy and unfocused, xyr mouth hanging open with xyr tongues hanging out, black slime dripping out. Jak could hear xem breathe, hissing popping noises coming steadily out of xyr mouth, xyr bulging stomach heaving as xe thrust deeper inside him.
The cock inside him had bloated his hips and stomach, the shaft visible all the way up until it slipped under his ribs, and feet still remained outside him, smeared with dark eco and covered in sand. The tip was spurting fat globules of dark eco, and it lit up his insides like a lightning bolt. Shooting, arcing pain seared through his stretched, warped guts, leaving behind an echoing feeling like knives. His organs shoved and jostled as the dark maker's cock shoved its way further inside him, up into his ribcage.
The massive cock would have speared his heart if he hadn't been so full of light eco; the eco sung inside him, healing his ravaged insides as the cock sunk deeper, the shaft thick enough to scrape all along the inside of his ribcage. He gasped repeatedly, taking all his effort to get a single choked breath; his lungs hammered sideways as his diaphragm flexed, warped and crushed as the dark maker's cock shoved deeper, wrapped in the coils of his guts.
Sand grit ground against his asshole, caught in the black ooze drooling out of him, more grinding up his insides, along his intestines, carried deep inside him as the dark maker pulled him down xyr cock, most of it inside him now. Jak could barely scrabble at the sand, clawing at it and making tight fists buried in the shifting substance, his body warped inhumanly, his wings lashing back and forth, coils wrapping around his stretched, bloated stomach, around his arms and legs, tendrils curling around the dark maker as xe worked the final portion of xyr cock into him.
He could feel every single bloated, swollen inch of it inside him, all the rounded edges and tapered points, from the tip spewing come somewhere just behind his chestbone down along its blocky, squared-off length. Sand grit against his insides, scraping between his bulging guts and the smooth surface of xyr cock as xe thrust more of it inside him. The tip crushed his windpipe closed as it shoved up against his throat, bobbing somewhere just below his neck. His ribs bent outwards, his skin bright and shining, glistening with eco as he stretched tight around the cock, the dark maker's bloated stomach finally grinding against the backs of his thighs, the entire cock shoved inside him, far more than anyone could take.
The sheer force of xyr precome burbling up kept his throat closed; he could barely breathe. His insides were shoved around with no regard for their actual placement; his intestines dragged up through his chest, still sheathed around the cock, and his chest cavity was twisted and shoved to one side. He was bloated around it, but more than that everything inside him was shoved around and pushed aside to make way for it.
The dark maker couldn't properly thrust into him; xyr cock was far too weighty, but Jak shuddered and writhed, and the reflexive, uncoordinated movements of his body clenched and squeezed the shaft inside him. His muscles all felt like they'd gone slack, torn apart, but still the faint ripple of his bloated body the immense cock inside him to spray more dark eco into him. The pressure inside him increased, dark eco burning into his veins as the dark maker got closer and closer to orgasm.
The dark eco came faster and faster until it started to build up inside him, bloating his body further. His chest and neck bulged out under the impossible pressure from inside him, swelling monstrously. His ribs shifted and bent with loud cracks, tearing and shearing against each other as they bulged upwards before finally splitting across his chest with a wet snap.
What felt like an infinite reservoir of dark eco emptied itself into him, and the dark maker hadn't even come yet. Ropes of eco sprayed into him and the sluggish flow from his ass increased, more spurting out around the square shaft, slicking down his torn-wide ass and plastering them both with sandy grit.
Jak couldn't even moan, too busy trying to breathe. His cock jerked and pulsed, his come spraying across his bloated body, and the dark maker groaned as Jak's body spasmed and twitched, clenching around xyr cock. Sand gritted against his insides as the dark maker pulled his legs, twisting him around xyr cock, and it was almost a relief when he felt xyr cock swell further, tensing as xe started to come. If taking the cock had felt like a punch to the gut, xyr orgasm was indescribable. Dark eco poured into him, enough that his body jerked and transformed, wings fading as horns burst through his skull, leaving behind ragged wounds that oozed dark eco. His eyes rolled back in his head as his body stretched further, impossibly, his flesh and bones warped beyond comprehension as the person-sized cock jerked and pulsed, stabbing through him. The pressure was incredible. His stomach bloated out even further, becoming a painfully tight swell sloshing with dark eco, and the distinct spurts of its cock inside him turned into a constant faucet, come bursting into him without end. He came again, cock rock hard, and he knew even with his eyes closed tight, his head thrown back, that he was coming dark eco again, in long lines that splashed across his tortuously stretched stomach and chest.
His body had already been twisted and warped, bulging as it conformed to the immense girth of the cock he was wrapped around. He knew he probably didn't even look humanoid, just a bloated lump of skin, stretched to bursting as gallons of come poured into him. But the light eco remaining in him was still active, and his body warped and bulged even further. His bloated flesh swelled upwards between his cracked ribs, uneven lumps forming along the center of his chest as come permeated his entire body. His stretched intestines bulged out in chambers, swelling like balloons. Even through the riot of sensation, dark eco erupting through his guts hit him like a sack of hammers. Pain and heat flooded higher up and poured into his stomach in a constant pressurized wave. The sloshing noise of it, audible over the cracks and snaps of his body bloating outwards, soon subsided into a constant rushing pressure inside him as the pressure equalized, his stomach filling to capacity and then joining the rest of his organs in swelling up, becoming a bloated, pudgy lump pressing up against his spread ribs.
Jak couldn't breathe, couldn't think of breathing; his throat was sealed shut, bulging wide with the tip of the cock wedged in his neck. But he didn't suffocate — couldn't, with the light eco working through him. The energy coursing through him wouldn't let him pass out, forcing him to stay alert as his torso bulged and swelled, bones creaking and bending under the pressure. His skin sheared and expanded like thick rubber, his insides twisted and crushed beyond repair, and still the massive thing inside him pulsed and spasmed, each jolt making his distended body jerk around it like he was a mannequin.
Jak kept coming, his cock flushed black; all his skin flushing black as the eco seeped into his blood, fat ropes of come splattering all across his bloated body, sloshing the chambers full of come inside him. Even his arms and legs swelled, skin and muscle saturated with dark eco, skin marbled with black veins and drawn taut over lumpy, misshapen swells of muscle and bone.
Jak worked his mouth noiselessly, his head practically the only part of his body not warped and twisted, and he somehow managed to gasp in a breath, working his neck backwards just enough to clear passage, his warped diaphragm shuddering and twanging, enough for a single mouthful of air.
As if his body could sense the barest hollow, dark eco flooded into his lungs. They both stretched, bulging to capacity in a flash, then swelled larger, more misshapen lumps jutting out between the wide, twisted gap between his broken rib cage. The gross swell of his organs pushed higher, and then the distinct rush of dark eco up through his chest, flooding out from his lungs and stomach both. He felt the pressure in his throat for a brief second before it burst out of him.
Dark eco erupted against the back of his mouth and he gagged, throat seizing and working, jaw hanging open as dark eco flooded out of his mouth, drooling in a solid stripes across his cheeks and over his chin. The come practically fountained out his mouth, like projectile vomit, in a long unceasing flow. It sprayed all across his face and body, thick strings of dark eco dripping and oozing down his cheeks as it spurted out of him. His throat muscles, spread wide from the sheer pressure, worked uselessly, making swallowing motions, reflexively fighting drowning even as the light eco kept him awake and aware. He didn't even have enough muscle control to heave, he just sprawled on the ground and gagged, the muscles in his throat spasming involuntarily.
Jak gasped, desperately trying to swallow, to clench his throat closed. His throat bulged out, swelling larger, distending from the rest of his neck, and when his muscles finally gave up and an even heavier flood of dark eco sprayed from his mouth his neck stayed like that, an uneven figure eight.
The light eco bursting inside him like lightning kept from from suffocating, but his body reflexively tried to gasp for air, his throat blocked, drowning on the dark eco bursting out of him, the wet, airless sensation making him thrash and lurch like a drowning man, his limbs only barely able to obey, wiggling weakly. He desperately tried to pull himself of xyr cock, unable to even summon the effort to clench his hands into the sand, unceasingly gagging and heaving up dark eco, his mouth hanging wide open, his jaw listing out of place as dark eco flooded over his face and neck. He didn't even have the mercy of passing out; the light eco kept him perfectly alert and aware as he suffocated on the unending upwelling of dark eco inside him.
If anything, his panicked thrashing prolonged the dark maker's orgasm, his stretched, trembling muscles working along xyr cock, twisting and clenching around it, heightening the heavy bursts of eco flooding him, making xem thrust against him harder, drawing back a fraction of xyr total length and hilting xemself with a bone-jarring crash, bloating Jak's body further.
Jak gagged and choked, clutching weakly at his chest, his bent-back ribs and the disturbingly soft bloat of his organs spilling out between them, his glowing skin threaded with black capillaries like threads in marble, dark eco spilling from his mouth and nose, coating his chest before it sizzled back inside him, flooding him with eco energy.
The dark maker's flood of eco finally ebbed, still coming out in gushes, but slightly less agonizingly-powerful ones. Xe stood up, and the motion just pulled Jak up at an angle, completely impaled on xyr cock. Xe braced xyr hands against the swollen flesh of his ass and legs and shoved, staggering backwards as xyr cock pulled out a foot. Dark eco was oozing out of him from every orifice he had, but it was flooding out from the stretched-to-impossibility muscle of his ass, spurting and oozing from the loose, uneven seal his body made around the dark maker's cock.
The dark maker pushed him back, stumbling backwards at the same time, and another section of xyr cock pulled out of him. The flared, flanged head was still pulsing weakly inside his ribcage, but Jak slowly worked his jaw, feeling twinges as his much-abused tendons slowly pulled back into place. His jaw jerked back into place with a clunk that felt like it ought to have hurt quite a lot, although he still couldn't breathe, spitting up dark eco in floods, his throat rattling and burping as he tried to breathe between bursts of dark eco.
He sucked in a desperate breath, immediately gagging and throwing up more eco, coughing until his throat was raw before he weakly tried inhaling again, oxygen burning through his body just as painfully as the eco before it, and he retched again, twisting his head to the side to throw up onto the sand before he managed to take a series of shallow, fluttering breaths.
Jak's insides twisted and flexed as the dark maker drew back further, half a body length away with xyr cock still flaring out his hips, the bone gnarled and stretched open around the immense girth of xyr shaft. His split ribs curled, his bloated insides shifting and compressing around each other, dark eco shifting and flooding through his body in congealed lumps. He felt like he had a black hole in his chest, something intensely dark and hot, cold shooting out through him in rippling waves, making him break out in a sweat. He couldn't muster the energy to open his eyes or look over himself, but he was certain he was sweating dark eco, beads of it oozing from his pores and being lost in the swamp of eco already coating him.
The dark maker pulled out faster now, pacing backwards, xyr cock only rarely twitching and spurting now. Each new line still felt like a firehose going off in his stomach, and his stomach moved in slow, heavy ripples as his guts sloshed, impossibly stretched and bloated, but it was nothing compared to the constant pressure of having the entire gigantic thing lodged inside him. He couldn't bring himself to move, barely able to breathe without vomiting up even more dark eco, sweating and crying dark eco in burning streams, his cock weakly pulsing, spitting eco over his swollen stomach, his asshole gaping wide, a river of eco flooding out of him in a slow roll, oozing like thick oil over the dark maker's cock. Xyr flanged, swollen head finally pulled out, jerking the ring of his asshole out with it, his guts folding out into the gritty quicksand mess surrounding him, eco pouring out like he was a ruptured vessel, and even with the pool all around him steadily growing his body was still twisted and distended, so much so that without the light eco still thrumming through him he'd die in an instant.
Jak laid there, his muscles spasming weakly as the dark maker's cock oozed out a few heavy, solid spurts of dark eco across his wrecked body. Jak closed his eyes, even that movement sending twinges of pain through his body, and focused on the gigantic swell of xyr cock pressing between his legs, up against his distended, lumpy stomach.
Light eco twined across it, slowly spiraling back into Jak, and he pulled at the energy flow, speeding it up. Every iota of light eco inside him made the pain more bearable and more intolerable at the same time. The dark maker's cock shrunk down, slowly, and that just forced all xyr excess dark eco out, spraying forcefully from xyr body and oozing wetly from xyr lips, further adding to the mess surrounding him.
His body slowly pulled itself back together, the black-hole inferno in his chest swelling harder and more painful as his organs lurched back into place, his lungs jerking to the side with a dull thump that knocked out his breath, leaving him gasping for a long moment. His ribs curled, moving like bone never should, each slotting back into his sternum with a disturbingly-wet squelch. His throat jerked back, abruptly letting him breathe evenly, and he let his mouth hang open as he gasped repeatedly, breathing and fast hard gasps to make up for the time he couldn't breathe at all.
The dark maker's cock shrunk and shrunk until it was only inhumanly large instead of absurdly gargantuan; all the light eco he'd suffused into it seeping back inside him, healing his body. He'd gotten smashed against a cliff wall by a stampeding Metal Head once, and he'd felt his entire shoulder explode, ribs cracking and arm popping from its shattered socket, and even that had taken only a brief instant to repair, everything slotting back into place. If it was taking so long for his insides to rearrange themselves he didn't want to think about how badly they were moved around in the first place.
He just lay there gasping, his body reforming after the abuse he'd put it through. Even with his bones and organs roughly in the right place again he was still bloated, his stomach bulging out like he was pregnant, his ass gaping, half-prolapsed, eco pouring out of him in a steady stream. Moving took concentrated effort; his arms and legs just spasmed and twitched if he tried to move, and it took a long, dizzy minute to simply reach back and push his guts back inside his body, his sharp claws accidentally slicing and cutting through them, puncturing deep inside him as he shoved his hand inside his gaping ass, slashing bleeding lines across his ass as he withdrew. The cuts stung, ragged and shallow, but it was nothing compared to the steady pounding ache of his body still reforming itself.
After another long moment he felt capable of just sitting up, slowly pushing up with his aching arms until he was sitting. His stomach cramped and spasmed, his guts sloshing and rumbling with the gallons of eco still inside him, his pale skin seamed in ragged red lines where it'd stretched impossibly to kept him from simply bursting.
Dark eco welled up in his mouth, pooling in his slack jaw before overflowing his lips and spilling down his chin. His body simply kept venting eco, drooling in a constant stream from his mouth, oozing from his gaping asshole, spurting in uneven bursts from his cock. His skin was mottled purple-black, in ragged splotches all across his body. Everything hurt; his body throbbed in pain; even attempting to think made his mind throb in agony. He just sprawled there on the ground and let his body attempt to repair itself. The dark maker move, feet scraping over the damp sand. Xyr body shifted against him and then away, and for an indefinite amount of time he lay there against the wall, body struggling to function. Dark eco swamped over his legs, almost totally immersing them, and it just felt like heavy, thick oil, his body so overloaded it wasn't reacting to him at all.
He felt more than saw the dark maker return, again slowly climbing the steps, again dragging a heavy urn behind xem. Xyr claws rang against the stone, vibrating through the wall at his back, and Jak could only sit there and think of how the light eco would feel in him. After another age xe reached the top of the stairs and padded over to him, spilling the light eco over him in a solid, glistening wave, splashing into the sea of dark eco around him and soaking into his body like he was bone-dry.
The light eco roaring into him hurt, but that wasn't surprising — everything else hurt too. His skin rippled, glowing in clustered lines, wings ripping out of his back with a sudden shock, slithering out like they were unwinding from around his spine. Slowly, with the muscles in his neck spasming and seizing, he turned his head to the side and spat, coughing up eco in chunks, breath rasping harsher through his ravaged throat.
"I'm fine," he finally managed to say, lips numb and aching so much it was probably unintelligible. His arms were as heavy as weights hanging down at his sides, so he reached out with one of his wings, the tentacles twining and shifting against the air, touching the dark maker's side and slowly wrapping around xyr ankle, xyr wrist. "Thanks."
Jak let his head loll back, body going even more limp as he reached out with his wings, curling them around the Dark Maker's body, caressing up and down xem. Xe moaned in response, the same throaty growl xe'd made at the very start, and Jak quirked his mouth into a smile as he reached more firmly, wrapping his tentacles higher across xyr body, encircling xyr chest, pulling xem down next to him on the sand. Xe hit the ground with xyr knees wide open, the folds of xyr cunt parted around xyr shaft, pushing out half-hard. Jak couldn't believe he was doing this again.
Jak rolled a tentacle over xyr thigh, the tip sliding over the soft skin of xyr inner thigh, and the dark maker made an abrupt hiss, the noise trailing off softly as Jak moved another tentacle over, wrapping softly around xyr cock and spreading xyr cunt lips further. The dark maker arched forward, pushing against his tentacles, and Jak pulled xem entirely into the fold of his wings, all of them rolling over xyr skin, the membrane between them shearing, pushing almost-solid against xyr body.
Xe straddled Jak's limp body, held up solely by his tentacles, clawed foot-paws scraping furrows in the sand beside him as he reached forward, sliding a tentacle inside xyr cunt, feeling with a bizarre vividness entirely different from his actual sense of touch the wet tight confines around his tentacle, squeezing and clutching at its perfectly smooth sides. His other tentacles moved, half with a mind of their own, curling over the coral-like horns on the dark maker's back, winding over xyr body like vines, twining around xyr cock as he pushed deeper inside xyr cunt, winding loose around xyr shoulders and neck. Some impulse sent one curling up around xyr face — almost a surprise to him — and the dark maker opened wide, xyr tongues spilling out to meet him. Xe drew his tentacle into xyr mouth, the pressure sizzling up it, right into his spine, making him gasp with pleasure.
Kissing back with his tentacle like it was a tongue was a straight feeling. He pushed deeper and the dark maker eagerly swallowed him down, arching into the tentacle steadily pumping into xyr cunt, thighs trembling. Even with his body sprawled out on the sand, unseeing, limp, his tentacles doing all the work, it was easy for his body to respond, his cock hardening against his thigh as the dark maker clenched down around his tentacles, drooling dark eco along the length of it, xyr cock dripping precome steadily over the coils of his tentacle. Jak arched up with his tentacles, holding the dark maker higher aloft, xyr weight strange over his tentacles. He reached over xyr body, sliding between xyr spread legs, against xyr still-swollen asshole, pushing inside with another tentacle without even needing to think, his body — not his body, but the sizzling energy growing out of him, a whirling maelstrom of eco — throbbing with desire, (his actual body flushed, cock hard, but he was barely thinking about that) working his tentacles across the dark maker's body, plunging deeper inside xem.
The dark maker hummed, or hissed, or growled, around his tentacle, xyr tongues coiling tight, squeezing him thinner as he pushed further down xyr throat. Xe swallowed deeper eagerly, clenching so sweetly tight as he pushed inside, all his tentacles, plunging deeper inside, stroking around xyr cock, dark smears of eco staining his tentacles as it drooled out. The dark maker's cunt squeezed tight as xe came, black come rolling down his pumping tentacle, oozing down xyr thighs and splattering in the thick pool beside him, and Jak spasmed, his tentacles shuddering, the eco inside him churning hot, something that sent a hot thrill up his stomach and entirely out his body, up his tentacles, a flash of feverish heat.
Jak gripped the dark maker tight, his free tentacles wrapping around xyr arms and legs, cording between the horns sprouting out xyr back, spreading xyr cunt wide, pushing xyr asshole open as he plunged in another tentacle. He shoved his tentacles further inside xyr body, one tunneling down xyr throat, tentacles twining around each other in xyr ass and cunt. Black come oozed from xyr cunt as Jak plowed into xem, staining them dark.
His tentacles slopped wetly into xyr stretched holes, stained black, shining with a strange sheen as his movements became more and more erratic. His conscious control was breaking down; he just wanted to plunge inside, worm his way deeper, his tentacles lashing and shuddering inside the dark maker.
There was a rising fever pitch inside him, his body trembling, mind wavering, his tentacles plowing into the dark maker, swelling thicker as they spiraled around each other, shifting and stretching. Jak gasped, the physical movement aching and painful still. Eco inside him whirled around and exploded, his cock shooting off against his stomach untouched, and the surging pressure erupted up his tentacles like he was shooting a gun.
He cracked open his eyes, face gummy with dark eco, the midday sun painful on his eyes, and saw for the first time the dark maker suspended above him, his tentacles an electric blue, cords of light and dark flowing up their lengths, erupting into the dark maker as he came and came, body racked with the diffuse pleasure of it. Eco burst from the tips of his tentacles, deep inside the dark maker, audibly glugging inside xem. His come rapidly overflowed the dark maker, a thick slurry of eco slopping from xyr orifices and running down his tentacles, splattering into the thick pool.
Jak pulled out with a jerk, tentacles emerging with a wet explosion of eco. The dark maker sprawled on top of his body, all rough edges and sharp lines, rutting against him as xe came, swollen cunt lips oozing against his stomach, xyr cock spraying across his chest.
Dimly aware of the danger even though his orgasm, Jak sluggishly pulled himself — and the dark maker — away from the heavy mass of eco, the burn of it already starting up across his back and thighs as his body began hungrily sucking up eco again.
He collapsed on the sand, gritty and damp and drained, the dark maker curled up beside him, xyr chitinous shell glossy and wet with his come. Jak sprawled out in the shadow of a pillar, exhausted all over again, only half aware as the rushing endorphins of his orgasm faded into an aching tiredness. He barely had to close his eyes before he fell into a heavy sleep.
He woke to the pointy, hard-shelled body of the dark maker against him, digging into his stomach. By the light it hadn't been more than a few hours, but he felt like a new man. His claws and horns and wings had all faded away at some point, the only marks left some dark bruises across his chest and throat, the red seams covering his body now barely-visible pink lines. Moving hurt, but it wasn't the jarring, sharp pain of before; it was a throbbing ache across his body, just his body reminding him he'd overtaxed it.
The dark maker stirred as he sat up, xyr overlarge right hand clutching across Jak's stomach, claws dimpling his skin. Jak slid to the side, and stood, staggering at the head rush. He stretched slowly, tight muscles stiff and aching all over his body. Seeing his shirt and armor lying exactly where he left them was surreal -- He'd left them there ages ago, it seemed, even though it hadn't been even twelve hours. He bent to pick them up, surprised again by the stiffness of his back, and slowly tugged his shirt on, leaving the ring and the armor draped over one shoulder. He... wasn't planning on going back into the temple for the rest of his clothes any time soon.
He had a set of riding leathers in the hopper, and he slowly eased them up his legs and over his bruised ass. His asshole was still aching and swollen; he wasn't looking forward to the drive back to Spargus.
The dark maker woke fully some time while he was strapping his armor back on, and came up behind him, wrapping xyr arms around him, tongues flicking out possessively against his bare neck. Jak grinned, arching back against xem, xyr half-hard cock grinding against the small of his back.
"Don't know if you understand me," Jak said, voice rusty still. "But I don't think they'd take you too kindly in Spargus." He turned to face the dark maker, xyr face even more obviously alien in the light of day. "But... thanks, yeah? I guess you saved my life. And," he said, leaning closer, xyr tongues flicking out over his lips, leaving behind burning black spittle. "I'll be back around these parts sometime soon." Jak kissed xem, lapping against xyr fangs as xe slid xyr tentacles into his mouth, around his tongue. He pulled back after a long moment, mouth dripping dark. "Be seeing ya."
He pulled back, and the dark maker let him, xyr lopsided hands trailing over his waist. He turned and headed to the hopper, aware of the crusted residue across his neck, of the awkward chafe of his cock against the bare leathers, not looking back to see if the dark maker was watching him. It was true; he'd be back. His entire body ached with their fucking, but more than that... he came here feeling like just a little action with his tentacles was fucked-up and depraved; who knew what he'd come back thinking next time, expecting an alien gangbang. He felt like depraved scum, but drowning that out was how much he'd liked it.
He slammed the hopper into gear, sand skidding as the throttle kicked in, the hopper pointed in the direction of Spargus. It was gonna be nice coming back, but he sure as hell wanted time to recover before then.
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