Ninja Gaiden Koibito

Expansion Pack: Kokoro & Hitomi

“Hitomi, I don’t understand.” Eliot’s voice was high with anxiety as they entered the darkened lobby. “What do you mean ‘expand my horizons’?”

After their first night of passion on the beach, Hitomi had promised that the following night would be one that Eliot would never forget. Eliot, quite sure he could never forget making love to the irrefutably sweet German girl, was somewhat flummoxed trying to figure out what she could be planning. She had led him to the resort’s information center, which obviously went mostly unused. Sunlight blazed outside the windows, but the interior remained rather subdued.

“Not telling.” Hitomi giggled and pointed to a very elegant leather sofa. “Just sit yourself down there and strip. Not necessarily in that order.”

“O-ok, sure.” Eliot had to fight to keep his voice even. He might have made love to her twice already, but he did not expect to get used to the idea. Not for a long time.

Probably never.

Doing his best not to shake, Eliot pulled off his robe. The cool air-conditioning, not to mention his nerves, brought goose flesh rising over his skin. He sat and tried not to wince as the cool leather pressed against his bare skin. He looked up at Hitomi and nearly jumped back off the couch in surprise.

A slender Japanese girl clad in an illustrious kimono stood next to Hitomi. Her long, dark hair fell past her shoulders to the small of her back. It took Eliot a split second, but he quickly remembered his nakedness and covered himself with his hands.

“Wha-what…who…?” Eliot stammered, blushing profusely.

“Pleased to meet you, Eliot.” The Japanese girl bowed. “My name is Kokoro.”

“H-hello.” Eliot glanced furtively at Hitomi. “But why…”

“She’s here to instruct me.” Hitomi smiled easily. “Go ahead, Kokoro.”

Kokoro stepped toward Eliot, reached down, and pried his hands from his crotch. She looked down between his legs and then turned to Hitomi, arching an eyebrow. Hitomi shrugged and grinned.

“It…it’s cold in here, you know.” Eliot piped up, his ire rising.

“Well, perhaps we can do something about that.” Kokoro turned back to Eliot and the next moment her Kimono was lying at her feet. Eliot’s heart nearly leapt out of his throat as his gaze swept up Kokoro’s lean and wondrously nude body. Her legs were lean and muscular leading up to a faultlessly toned tummy. Her breasts were full and stood on her chest in natural splendor. Eliot’s hormones inundated his body, doing their duty.

“Now there, see, Hitomi?” Kokoro pointed down to the boy’s crotch. “Not so cold now.”

Eliot looked down to see his cock rising up in excitement and shame flooded through his being. He hung his head.

“Eliot?” Hitomi asked, concerned.

“Eliot,” Kokoro spoke firmly. “I was raised to be ashamed of my body, but I’ve had enough of that. What about you?”

Eliot looked up at her, his mind a maze of conflicting emotions. Before he could say anything, Kokoro stepped toward him and straddled his lap.

“Alright, Hitomi, now come here and pay close attention.” Kokoro called over her shoulder and the German girl stepped eagerly up to the sofa, taking a seat beside Eliot.

“Take him in your hand like this.” Kokoro’s slender hand wrapped around Eliot’s stiffened organ, making his breath catch in his throat.

“Kokoro!” Eliot gasped, and then glanced anxiously at Hitomi.

“Shush, Eliot!” Hitomi chided him. “I’m trying to learn something here.”

“Stroke him slowly.” Kokoro’s palm slid over and around Eliot’s rod with glacial smoothness, causing Eliot to sit up as straight as he could. “And watch what this does.”

Kokoro began circling the tip of his manhood with her thumb and Eliot could do nothing to stop the pleasured moan that escaped from his lips. His hands clawed at the leather cushions as he tried to settle himself.

“Unglaublich!” Hitomi exclaimed, shedding her robe eagerly. “Can I try?”

“Here, give me your hand.” Kokoro nodded. Hitomi’s hand grasped Eliot’s shaft and Kokoro covered her slender hand with her own, guiding her ministrations. Eliot arched his back, his mind trying to come to terms with what his body was experiencing.

“Excellent, Hitomi.” Kokoro nodded enthusiastically. “Now watch this closely.”

Eliot looked on in disbelief as Kokoro guided his now throbbing cock into the moist entrance between her legs. Even as the pleasure enveloped his loins, he looked to Hitomi, terrified that she would run from the room and that he would never see her again. To his astonishment, Hitomi was completely transfixed at the sight of Eliot’s cock sinking inch by inch into Kokoro’s warmth. Indeed, Hitomi’s left hand slipped down past her waist between her legs.

“This is what Leifang and I have come up with so far.” Kokoro took a deep breath and gripped Eliot’s shoulders tightly. It was then that her hip undulations began, as well as Eliot’s screams.

“Oh, GOD!” Eliot cried out. “That’s…AHHH!!! YES!!!”

“Nnnngh…mmm…Yes, that’s right.” Kokoro moaned. “You see, Hitomi?”

“Y-yes…ohhh…yes…” Hitomi lay back on the couch, enraptured. Her fingers slipped deeply into her own folds, working their magic. Eliot had never believed that watching a girl pleasure herself could be so arousing, but his loins danced with delight at the sight of Hitomi’s body writhing next to him as Kokoro rode his dazzled member.

“Do…ahhh…do you think you have it?” Kokoro turned to Hitomi, sweat beading on her face. “Catch everything?”

“Yes…yes, Kokoro.” Hitomi cooed as she nodded.

“Are…unghh…are you sure?” Eliot squeaked. “Maybe you should demonstrate….ohhh…yes…a little…ahhh…longer.”

“Oh, he is cute!” Kokoro gave him a sweaty grin that made his ears burn. “Do you mind, Hitomi?”

“I’d kill you if you stopped!” Hitomi moaned as her free hand groped her own breast, tweaking her nipple. “You’ve had enough of Leifang’s tea to last another week.”

“You asked for it, Eliot.” Kokoro took Eliot’s face between the palms of her hands and looked directly into his startled eyes. Her hips twisted and churned around his cock, the smooth friction tunneling its way through Eliot’s sanity.

“Nnnghaa! God! Oh…yeah…” Eliot’s head lulled from side to side, his eyes rolling over. “That’s…so good…Kokoro! More…please, more!”

“Oh, Eliot!” Hitomi squealed as she watched her lover melting beneath the Japanese vixen. She drove her fingers deeper, rubbing her own clit furiously with one hand while the other kneaded her firm breasts.

“H-Hitomi?” Eliot’s thoughts felt distant, buried beneath the unyielding passion of Kokoro’s skilled hips. His hand reached out to Hitomi, to his love. She took it, their fingers entwined. Eliot pulled her to him even as Kokoro undulated on his lap. He turned his head and kissed the brown-haired girl tenderly. Their lips parted and he gazed into her eyes. “I…ohhhh…I love you, Hitomi. You.”

“I…mmmm…” Hitomi purred as Eliot’s left hand slid down her stomach to join her own hand in pleasuring herself. “I know, Eliot.” Hitomi reached out and pulled Kokoro into a fierce kiss, their tongues lashing at one another as Eliot looked on with wide-eyed wonder. “Give my love the best, Kokoro.”

“Nothing less.” Kokoro’s slender tongue lapped once more at Hitomi’s lips. Then her attention was on Eliot. Within moments the young boy was screaming at the top of his lungs as Kokoro’s lithe body writhed against him, unleashing pleasures he had never thought possible. Hitomi ran her hands over their sweaty bodies, feeling every contour of their nude forms, feeling each of Eliot’s thrusts shake Kokoro’s frame, feeling every shudder of Eliot’s lean torso as Kokoro rode him toward an inevitable climax.

“Oh, Eliot! It’s happening! Ohhh…yes, can you feel it?” Kokoro ran her hands through the sweaty mop of Eliot’s blond hair.

“Yes! Yes, Kokoro, I’m coming!” Eliot felt the warm embrace of Kokoro’s womb turn into a furnace of ecstasy. Without thinking, he drove his fingers as deep into Hitomi as he could, his hand shaking as his own climax tore through his body. Hitomi’s canal clamped down around his hand just as Kokoro’s vessel convulsed, pulling on his cock as it shot forth his seed.

“Hitomi, Kokoro, YES!!!” Eliot’s eyes rolled over white, his back arching, pressing his chest hard against Kokoro’s soft breasts.

“ELIOT!!!” Kokoro shook uncontrollably, her hands digging into Eliot’s shoulders.

“OH-, JA!!!” Hitomi’s toes curled, her bosom heaving as she cried out her release.

Kokoro collapsed on top of Eliot’s quivering body, and Hitomi leaned against them. They sat there together, catching their breath and trying to gather their thoughts. Presently, Kokoro kissed Eliot lightly on the cheek, even as his member still rested within her folds.

“You understand the general idea, then, Hitomi?” She panted.

“I think so.” Hitomi grinned, stroking Kokoro’s back. “I’ll let you know how it goes.”

“I, uh…” Eliot cleared his throat. “I think we should try that again. Just to make sure.”

“I’m afraid there’s no time, Eliot.”

The three of them turned, startled. Leifang stood a few feet away, looking quite flustered.

“I wanted to let you finish before interrupting.” Leifang explained absently. “Excellent form, Kokoro.”

“Thanks,” Kokoro winked at her. “I have a wonderful sparing partner.”

“What is the matter?” Hitomi asked, gathering their robes.

Leifang took a deep breath.

“He has returned.”

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Writer Commentary:

Boy howdy! I just realized while writing these current commentaries that Ninja Gaiden Koibtio has passed its first anniversary. A whole year has passed since I first posted this story, and there have been over 26,000 views and over 50 reviews! You people are beyond awesome. You’re…uh… ninjawesome!

But on to the commentary… The entire Eliot Expansion Pack is of course in response to Mark Wells’ challenge post. In that challenge, he asked if anyone could write about Eliot having sex with either Hitomi or Kokoro. It seemed that Hitomi would be my first choice for a pairing, but Kokoro seemed too good to dismiss. This is adult-fanfiction.org, though; having our cake and eating it too is the entire point of this site!

It was important to maintain the sense that Eliot and Hitomi really are a couple that is in love. It wouldn’t do for Eliot and Kokoro to just meet somewhere by accident and jump in the sack. The Time Trial chapter established that Leifang and Kokoro were masters of sex, so having Kokoro give Hitomi pointers seemed to be a good way to go. Of course, she has to demonstrate on Eliot herself, though.


There’s something pretty erotic about having Kokoro manually stimulating and then eventually riding Eliot as an instructional demonstration for Hitomi’s benefit. Even though he is undoubtedly enjoying Kokoro, Eliot manages to profess his love to Hitomi, doing his best to pleasure her as well.

Leifang enters next, and we sort of expect her to join in. But unfortunately she’s just there to end the scene with what sounds like a dire warning of someone’s return. Astute readers will of course know that the newcomer cannot be Ryu since Eliot already established that never did track Ryu down during his search.

On to the next chapter, and intrigue! Or just arousing erotic fiction. Whatever.