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Devilios Zon Exciet
By : InuSonishaUnlimited
Category: +S through Z > Sonic
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Devilios Zon Exciet

Written By InuSonishaUnlimited

Disclaimer: Nope, still don't own the SEGA characters but I am working on it even as we speak. Weird title I came up with, not affiliated with any language of any kind, so be not offended by it. Anyway, the only SEGA character in this tale is Sonic, everyone else is based on the design but not much else should be familiar. Probably my first attempt at a comedy story of some sort. A story about a young Demi-Devil that will be told...well, here. Rated M or MA for Strong Language and Violence, along with Sexual Content. For Mature Audience only, meaning no weak-minded or soft-hearted people or kiddies, okay?

Chapter 4: Then Came A Harsher Trainer

Violetwing opened the mansion door and walked upstairs to the bedroom, carrying the tired Sonic. She set him down and almost immediately, he woke up. "Jeez, my head hurts. We're back at the house?" he asked her. "Yes, you worked your blue ass off apparently and ran out of energy. How are you feeling now?" she asked, smiling at him. He returned the smile and said, "I'm okay. I guess I did go overboard on the exercises. Learning the elements isn't very easy..." "I can understand that." "Have you ever had a difficult time doing anything, Violetwing?" "When you've dealt with horny Devils, you know my hardships. They were all so pathetic..." "Not too sure you should be telling me about those things..." "Yeah, you're probably right. Well, time to sleep. You have one hell of a day tomorrow." "Oh, okay then."

Violetwing picked him up and laid his head on her breasts as he slipped into sleep. She held him as she fell asleep herself, the moon piercing the window. Outside in the front yard, random skeletons started rising and dancing to DDR music blasting from a Devil's crashed car. Apparently, the Devil crashed into his own house after a night of drunk driving. Somehow, he survived until the cops marched forward and beat his ass. The morning after was the first day of the Earth element training with RaMonown for Sonic, who walked in rather confident. Took only ten minutes to tire himself, to RaMonown's disappointment. "Come on, Sonic! We've only been training you for a few minutes! Get back up!" he yelled, causing the Demi-Devil to rise. "Yes, sir..." he said with little enthusiasm. For the next few hours, he ended up slamming rocks into himself, missing a few targets or simply screwing up.

At the end of the day, not much progress was made. Sonic was down for the count and he'd only grasped about five minutes worth of knowledge. RaMonown knew he was screwed and in deep trouble. "Blast, at this rate...it will be proven that I suck at training Sonic...what to do...huh?" he thought as he looked up and saw Violetwing approaching the downed hedgehog. "Oh my goodness, are you okay?" she asked Sonic. He was more so knocked out, asleep as it were. "Jeez, must've been a hard day." "More so for I than him." RaMonown said. "What do you mean?" "We made little progress. He had too many setbacks and failures, which lost us a lot of time. I may not be able to do this..." As he finished talking, he noticed that they were already gone. He took the moment to stand on the hill, letting the wind pass him as he stared into the sky. "I'm screwed over..." he thought.

Back at the mansion, RaZeke had just arrived. "So, let's see how he did." he said as he placed a hand on Sonic's chest. This caused the bat symbol to glow until a bright sphere exited his body. "Hmm...not good at all. What happened?" he thought as he scanned the Element sphere. "It is apparent that Sonic didn't grasp much from this lesson, meaning I could be right. He's got six more days of this and if I'm not careful, he could be in for trouble by the halfway mark." he thought as he put Sonic's sphere back inside of him. The blue hedgehog woke up, but was still dreary. "I see you have woken up." RaZeke said. "Yeah, but I hate that guy! He's mean..." Sonic said, rubbing his legs. "He's a tough one, but do me a favor and survive him for a little while." "If you say so...I'm heading upstairs." Sonic said, walking up to his room. Later that evening, he woke up from a nightmare in which rocks pelted his head repeatedly. When he opened his eyes, he saw two crimson-glowing eyes.

"Are you all right? I heard you moaning." Violetwing asked, the source of the red eyes Sonic saw. "Bad dream about rocks...yeah, evil rocks." he said. "Did your rocks get hurt?" "Let me see...nope, they're fine." Sonic said. "Well, now that you're awake..." she said, smiling at him. Sonic had a pretty good idea what was coming, but still really didn't grasp the subject too well. "Umm...well..." he said, stammering a bit as she held his face to her chest. Earlier in the evening, Violetwing and RaZeke had a conversation. "What exactly are you getting at?" he asked her. "Well, I'm not too sure. I just have particular feelings for Sonic...do you find it strange?" she asked. "You are much different than most summoned devils. You possess the ability to gain emotional attraction for others. It amazes me." "But I'm not too sure what to do..." "Well, he's eleven...so it's his time of the Demi-Devil life. I did it myself at age ten, actually. Don't be merciful or slow, okay?" RaZeke said. "You really want me to do that?" Violetwing asked, smiling. "Of course. I've never seen him so happy since he summoned you. He'll love it."

Back to the present, with Sonic getting some things off his chest. "Let's see, weird alien, chocolate stain...okay, everything outside is off my chest. Now for the inside. Uhh...Violetwing?" he started. "Hmm? Yes, Sonic?" she said, sitting before him. "I just wanted you to know that..." "Yes?" "That I'm glad that I summoned you. Life just seems better when you're around me." he said. "Oh, you...you're not just saying because I'm gonna do something to you?" she said, her face quite red. "Naw, I'm being serious, this time at least. I've never felt this feeling before. A lot of controversy may be implemented at this story for this but...I can't lie to myself. Hmm, laying it on a bit thick, aren't we Mr. Writer?" Sonic said, up at the ceiling. Suddenly, my face appears. "Yeah, but you're doing great." I tell him before disappear in a swirling motion. "Wow, most characters don't have that strong of a connection to their writers. Ah well, back to business." Sonic said.

"Sweet talker, I'll give you that. Actually, I did speak to RaZeke about this. He's seemed, oh what's the word...?" she said. "Eccentric?" he said. "Yup. That's about the size of it." she said, laying Sonic on his back. "Huh? What are you...?" he asked as she spread his legs. "Well, if I told you, that would ruin it, not wouldn't it?" she said with a confident smile. "Man, is it that time of the year already?" Sonic thought. "Probably not, but it's your time." she said, obviously heard what he was thinking. "Really, I never noticed. How can you tell?" he asked. Suddenly, some people were bowing before the moon outside, which looked like a round picture frame showing a young child and a timer. "Ahh, that's how." Sonic said after looking out the window. "Well, here we go..." she said...but you have to wait until the next chapter.

-Yeah, I know what you're going to say. I know what you're thinking, so don't sweat it.
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Devilios Zon Exciet	By : InuSonishaUnlimited Category: +S through Z > Sonic Views: 1143 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Devilios Zon Exciet