All That Glitters | By : sillyneko345 Category: +G through L > Jak & Daxter Views: 7252 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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AN: Sorry for the abrupt ending to the last chapter, everyone. Talk about your plot twists, right?! But it had to be. So let’s hurry and get into the next installment, and forget all about that little blip, shall we? - - - - - Kuromei: Haha, I’m glad the humor still makes you smile. Thanks for the nice comments! Tainted_Emerald: “Bad grammar?! Spelling errors?! Kill it! Die die die die!!” *stomps all over it* I love you for noticing. Csi Forsythe: We all know Torn is just there for comic relief. And we love him for it. - - - - - Characters: Everyone belongs to Naughty Dog. Even the setting belongs to them, if you cross your eyes and squint a little. -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- “Jak! Jak, stop! I said hold, soldier!” It took the prince a moment to realize that he was indeed being screamed at. It took him a few more moments to decide how to respond, and in that short amount of time his stunned opponent somehow wound up face down in the dirt of the training field. Obviously it wasn’t his fault. The look on Torn’s face was far from pleased as he jogged over, raising little puffs of dust under his heavy footfalls. “What the hell was that about? Jak, I think it’s time for you to take a break.” He frowned. “But—” “Break. Now.” Jak huffed but did as he was told. Stowing his practice sword he meandered off the field, hardly noticing when the crowd of watching soldiers parted around him like a flock of songbirds before a hawk. It had not, as such, been a good day. Maybe he could use a little rest in the shade after all. Torn joined him before too long, still looking none too thrilled. Very pointedly the commander dropped down beside Jak under the tented pavilion that had been set up for the officers. “Alright. May I ask what’s been going on out there today?” “What?” Jak idly flicked an ear. “You can’t say I’m not giving any effort for once. You’ve got to be happy with that change, right?” “That makes me very happy. In fact, I’m ecstatic. However, I would like to point out that as of now all of the new recruits and a good majority of the seasoned warriors are afraid to spar with you. Your newfound enthusiasm would be better used raising troop moral instead of making them frightened of their own leader, wouldn’t you agree?” Jak shrugged noncommittally. Torn sighed. “Jak, look. I know you’re upset. I personally think you have a right to be—and don’t you dare tell your father I said that. But we have to look at the bigger picture right now. Taking out your anger on the subordinates isn’t the way to handle the situation. I hear you punched one of the servants this morning?” The green-blonde had to smirk at the memory. Pure coincidence had seen him walking to breakfast down the same corridor as a group of the palace staff, one of them bragging loudly to the rest how he had “showed that little redheaded bastard who’s boss” the night before. Daxter’s goggles had been perched on the filthy man’s head. Jak still considered the entirely satisfying crunch of his fist meeting a gaping face to have been the highlight of his day. He lightly fingered the worn goggles now hanging by their straps from his belt, half listening to Torn’s raspy but somehow soothing voice. “… so, do you think you can do that?” “Huh?” Torn sighed deeply. “I asked you if you could keep your mind on the situation at hand. But judging by your response, I think it would be better if you took a little time out. You’re officially in charge of going to tell the servants to bring out water for the troops. Get moving, soldier.” It didn’t take long at all for Jak to do as he was told. Life really was much simpler when he followed orders without a fight, though he would never admit as much out loud. When his errand had been run, however, the prince didn’t quite know what to do with himself. I doubt Torn wants me back on the field, he thought as he wandered along the wall top. Maybe I should have taken it a little easier on the troops. Not all of them are jerks, I guess. Even if I didn’t really mean to sprain that guy’s wrist that’s still one more soldier we won’t have in top condition now… As he considered, Jak looked over the ledge and down into the gardens. He scanned the lush expanse in vain. Not a sign of orange fur was forthcoming. Not that he knew what he would be able to do even if he did spot the odd little creature that had been his friend. There were strange, strange powers at work in the world—unless you were trained to handle the challenge, as sages like Samos were, messing with them was generally a bad idea. There was no guarantee he would be able to do anything to change Daxter back without possibly making the problem even worse, and he doubted very much that Samos would be of any help. And that was all supposing that the little animal hadn’t been scampering around willy-nilly in his unexpected freedom and been picked off by a hawk already. Jak groaned softly, letting his arms cross over the top of the wall stone and his forehead rest on them. He really didn’t need that mental image pecking at his conscience. “This has got to be the weirdest day of my life.” “You’re telling me.” Jak’s head snapped up. “Keira!”
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