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Devilios Zon Exciet
By : InuSonishaUnlimited
Category: +S through Z > Sonic
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Devilios Zon Exciet

Written By InuSonishaUnlimited

Disclaimer: Nope, still don't own the SEGA characters but I am working on it even as we speak. Weird title I came up with, not affiliated with any language of any kind, so be not offended by it. Anyway, the only SEGA character in this tale is Sonic, everyone else is based on the design but not much else should be familiar. Probably my first attempt at a comedy story of some sort. A story about a young Demi-Devil that will be told...well, here. Rated M or MA for Strong Language and Violence, along with Sexual Content. For Mature Audience only, meaning no weak-minded or soft-hearted people or kiddies, okay?

Chapter 6: Afterwards Looking For Chocolate

Sonic looked through the cabinets, fridge and under the table, anywhere that could conceal his beloved chocolate, but with little luck. Violetwing walked in, dressed now, and held him in her arms when he walked up to her. "What are you looking for?" she asked him as he held on to her. "Chocolate..." he said zombie-like again, his eyes maintaining the crimson shade. "Hold on, I'll call your dad so he can tell me where it is." she said, walking over to his cell-phone. As it rang, RaZeke picked it up quickly. "Hello? Oh, Violetwing. What's the matt...oh no. Umm...well...tell him I'll bring some back shortly...there's a little situation that I need to take care of first. Okay, thank you." he said, hanging up and watching his minions pick at the Chocolate Walls of Fudge within a cave. They struck the wall heavily, gathering the goods and pushing it out.

Meanwhile, Sonic looked behind paintings, couches and other places for his snack, coming up with roughly nothing. "Chocolate?" he asked, looking around before going back to Violetwing. "Looks like you'll have to wait for it, Sonic." she said, walking outside and seeing some zombies marching towards the outskirts of town. "Chocolate...chocolate...chocolate..." they groaned as they walked. "Choco-zombies?" Violetwing asked, the zombies continuing to walk, even as Violetwing pulled out a flashlight. They melted in the light slowly until their legs were completely gone, now dragging themselves. "Oh, this is too amusing." she thought as she watched them go, some swearing in-between groans. "yawn...Man, this is boring now." Sonic said, smelling nothing but undead chocolate. "Even I'm not that desperate to each ancient chocolate." he thought as he stopped smelling.

RaZeke and his crew still picked at the wall, and by that I mean, he watched them go. After an hour or so, they got all the chocolate they needed to fill up the storage. After doing so, RaZeke took some and flew back to the mansion, which was covered in large rocks. He broke the rocks and entered, watching Sonic pulling up rocks with ease, fully enraged. Violetwing descended upon RaZeke and stood next to him. "He's been like this for the past hour." she said. "Ah. Sonic, look what I got." RaZeke said, watching as Sonic turned his head completely like an owl with puppy dog eyes. He levitated about two inches off the ground and floated over to RaZeke, who held the chocolate bar in front of him. "Who's been a good potentially threatening Devil? Oh, yes you were, yes." he said in a strange voice while waving the candy. Sonic's eyes watched the bar intently. "Who's been a good boy?" RaZeke asked again. "I've...I've been a good boy." Sonic said with defeat. He got the candy, but lost some dignity.

The next day was another day of training for Sonic, who proved to be no better with RaMonown. He slapped his head as Sonic came down from a rock smacking him into the air. RaZeke simply stood awe-struck and with a little shame at what he saw. Sonic was being absolutely defiant, which was a trait that RaZeke was known for. He walked up to the hedgehog and helped him up. "Excuse me a second, Sonic." RaZeke said, walking over to RaMonown. "What is going on here? Was it not you that said that you could take care of Sonic's powers with the Earth?" he said somewhat angrily, somewhat smug. "Well, is it my fault he has not the patience or skill required to...?" RaMonown stopped as the fist of the Supreme Devil met his neck. A loud crack sounded off as the devil fell to the ground dead. "Sonic. Time to get to work." RaZeke said, taking off his cloak and exposing his bare chest to Sonic.

Underneath the cloak was a pair of spike-covered red pants with red spiky boots. Sonic knew to fear his father when he had his cloak off. It seemed to be used to maintain the cool atmosphere that he put out most often. Without that cloak, RaZeke is dangerous to upset and quite serious. Sonic stood at his side and received a fear-inducing look of impatience as he made a combative stance. Over the next six hours, Sonic and RaZeke smacked around rocks, levitated them, created Thirteenth-Century art with them, all that stuff. Sonic did it absolutely perfectly alongside RaZeke, who couldn't be prouder. "Well, I guess I've proved my point. You've only the Steel element to cover...which is the hardest and most frustrating." RaZeke said. "How bad could it be?" Sonic asked. All RaZeke did was pass him a block of titanium. "Here, break this." he said, sitting down and watching Sonic try to rip it. Nothing occurred and Sonic was getting frustrated after just twenty minutes. RaZeke watched with amusement as Sonic threw that block down roughly fifteen times. No dents occurred and by the time he was done, he held himself up with his arms with an angered look.

"I failed to break it..." Sonic said. "No, Sonic. You didn't fail. Not even I can rip it in half." RaZeke said, struggling to rip it up, but failed. "Then...then...why?" Sonic asked. "Well, it's a relatively stupid test, but there is a way to do it. Just not ripping it in half." RaZeke said, walking off. Sonic sat in that field for a good while, looking at the titanium steel brick. He looked at it for a couple of hours and suddenly came across an idea, signified by a big grin. The next day, he sat before a large group of Devils holding clipboards. "So, he believes that he came across the solution to the puzzle?" asked one devil. "Indeed. I am unsure what his method is, though." RaZeke said, interested. All was quiet as Sonic sat there, holding the block and placing it down. In what seemed like a split-second, Sonic touched three points and suddenly the whole block split in half. Heavy "awes" and "oohs" were around as "A+" sheets flooded the hedgehog.

"How in the hell did you...?" RaZeke said, holding Sonic high before the Devils. "Behold, the only devil to ever solve the puzzle! My son, Sonic the Hedgehog!" RaZeke said proudly, with tears streaming his eyes. Cheers aboud as Sonic was blessed, praised and all that good stuff. "Now let's see what you can do." RaZeke said, putting Sonic down and bringing out steel pieces. Sonic used his power to covert the steel pieces into blades of small and large sizes. "Jumping Jitterbugs..." RaZeke said under his breath as he saw the results. "Well, Sonic, you did really well. You've learned the elements very well. All right, meeting is now complete, bring in the Dancing Lobsters!" RaZeke said with Sonic on his shoulder, walking out as the Lobsters came in. "Aww, but I wanted to see the Lobsters..." Sonic said, pouting a bit as the dance music sounded off. "Now then, the time has come for you to earn a new power...next chapter, Sonic." he said. "Really? That'll be fun." he said.

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Devilios Zon Exciet	By : InuSonishaUnlimited Category: +S through Z > Sonic Views: 1143 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I don't own Sonic nor make any money from this

Devilios Zon Exciet