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Devilios Zon Exciet
By : InuSonishaUnlimited
Category: +S through Z > Sonic
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Devilios Zon Exciet

Written By InuSonishaUnlimited

Disclaimer: Nope, still don't own the SEGA characters but I am working on it even as we speak. Weird title I came up with, not affiliated with any language of any kind, so be not offended by it. Anyway, the only SEGA character in this tale is Sonic, everyone else is based on the design but not much else should be familiar. Probably my first attempt at a comedy story of some sort. A story about a young Demi-Devil that will be told...well, here. Rated M or MA for Strong Language and Violence, along with Sexual Content. For Mature Audience only, meaning no weak-minded or soft-hearted people or kiddies, okay?

Chapter 7: Then Staring Down The Spirit of Fire

The following morning, at dawn to be precise, Sonic, RaZeke and Violetwing stood in the training field. Sonic wore a long, large, black robe with the collar up and a large, wide bottom. RaZeke stood on the opposite end with his cloak open in the front, with his sights set on his son. Violetwing stood on the outer edge, watching with a nervous feeling. "Well, Sonic! Can you take a guess as to what you're here to learn today?" RaZeke asked. "Umm...I dunno. I've already learned the elements...what is it?" Sonic asked back. Suddenly, he felt very hot, as if the sun was beaming down on him directly, despite the fact that the sun was barely up. He looked over to RaZeke, shielding his eyes from a source of extremely bright light. What he saw was burned into his mind for days and nights to come.

Slightly behind RaZeke stood an extremely big, red, glowing fiery spirit. It was, in fact, the Spirit of Fire, a being with long bull-like horns, tiny white eyes and large arms and legs. It was a spirit of pure, superheated flame that struck fear into the hearts of others. "Sonic...you will soon come across a spirit such as my own. A Spirit of Fire..." he said as he formed a giant, fiery glaive in his hand. "Umm...what exactly am I here for...?" Sonic said, dodging RaZeke's blade, but connecting with his foot going across his face. Sonic got up slowly and rubbed his cheek, looking up to the blade of RaZeke. "This is what you are here for. Use the lessons and Elements that I've taught you to defeat me." he said, striking the blade near Sonic's head, but he moved out of the way and locked RaZeke in a block of Ice. RaZeke melted the attack and rushed at Sonic. "Excellent, you are thinking on your feet! Think faster!" he said, swinging and striking at Sonic, who was stepping backwards.

He charged a bolt of Lightning and hit RaZeke hard enough to knock him off-balance. During that moment, Sonic jumped forward and shot at RaZeke with an Ice block, hitting him squarely in the face. RaZeke span around in mid-air, punching Sonic squarely in the chest and sending him flying. Afterwards, he jumped forward and kicked Sonic hard, the blue hedgehog flying into the air as RaZeke jumped up with his sword drawn. Sonic slowly turned to face RaZeke's smiling face as the Devil performed a backwards crescent kick downwards, sending the blue hedgehog towards the ground with the force of a meteor. The explosion was great and the damage reflecting the same thing was evident, yet something was up.

During the fall, Sonic enter a state of semi-consciousness with RaZeke falling at his same speed. "Sonic...Sonic...can you hear me?" he said in a lower, mystic voice. "Cut the act, Dad..." Sonic said. "Heh heh, no sense of humor. Anyway, come on now. Pull out your weapon." "Weapon...? But...but you never..." "Just because I never gave you a weapon personally doesn't mean that you never possessed a weapon. It's there, and you know it. Stop fooling around and pull it out!" RaZeke shouted, Sonic feeling relatively ashamed of himself.

Although he had no idea what he was talking about, he thought carefully. As he looked down, he noticed the ground getting closer. At this point, Sonic started looking around frantically, RaZeke looking rather confused. "Uhh...lad..." he said, pointing to Sonic's side. "Uhh, I don't see anyth..." "Just grab it, Sonic!" RaZeke yelled, Sonic simply obeying. He felt something, despite seeing nothing, and grabbed "it". The ground was about an inch away as he pulled it out, unleashing a heavy blast of blue energy underneath himself.

RaZeke smiled at the results as the smoke cleared, Sonic slightly sitting. He rose up, wielding a giant blue glaive of the same sort as RaZeke. His robe blew in the wind as he stood up, tipping over due to one little issue...the sword was a little heavy. He managed to hold it and looked at RaZeke, whose eyes were sword-like as he laughed. "Excellent! Excellent, excellent, excellent! Now, come Sonic!" he yelled with insanity, charging at Sonic. Sonic held the sword over his shoulder with both hands and got ready, RaZeke getting closer. Took about five seconds for the two to meet and the clash was spectacular. To Violetwing, she saw a giant crescent slash mark in the wind.

The reality is that they hit each other so many times and so hard, the area was enveloped in a shearing wind. About a few seconds later, RaZeke was seen walking towards Violetwing, holding Sonic. She stood before and looked at the two crazy hedgehogs, amuzed by RaZeke's line: "He's ready..." he said, showing her a nice big cut across his chest. Sonic didn't get out too well, with marks all over his body. "He's ready for his Spirit of Fire...for the following chapter." "The fan's didn't get their randomness." Violetwing said. "Eh, whatever. We can have a serious moment or two along the line." I said.

-Recognize the Spirit of Fire? If not, here's a hint: UNITY!

Random Occurrence

Outside the city, a thousand bunnies jumped a devil and took him prisoner. Six days later, they let him go because he was a whiner, he ate too much and he wanted Rabbit Soup. A few days that followed, the same devil was beaten savagely by a giant bunny rabbit for hinting at eating her thousand children. He was beaten because he accused the rabbit of sleeping with multiple rabbits, effectively calling her a whore. The reality was, the devil turned out to be the father of all the bunnies, but he committed suicide because he wasn't committed to the responsibility. Okay, bye.
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Devilios Zon Exciet	By : InuSonishaUnlimited Category: +S through Z > Sonic Views: 1143 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I don't own Sonic nor make any money from this

Devilios Zon Exciet