All That Glitters | By : sillyneko345 Category: +G through L > Jak & Daxter Views: 7252 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: I do not own the game this story is based on (Jak and Daxter). I make no money from writing this. |
AN: We’re wrapping up this story here pretty soon. Like so many I do, it wasn’t supposed to go on for so long. But, that’s life. I’m glad people enjoyed it, too! - - - - - Tainted_Emerald: I’m glad you deemed it worth the wait! Erol will indeed be much displeased. Let’s see if I can make the ending satisfying enough to compliment the rest of the story! GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Thank you! Jesa: Glad you liked it :) Kuromei: You know Erol is creepy around Jak in general. It was a small step to sexual stalker kind of creepy. And Dax tiptoes ever closer to telling his pal the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. Glad you’re liking it! Danielle: Ah, how I wish the fun stories would never end. But if they never ended, then new fun stories could never be begun! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it so much. Dos: Well, thank you very much! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it so much. If there is ever fan art, I must of course see it so I can squee all over it! - - - - - Characters: Belong to Naughty Dog, Inc. - // - // - // - // - Morning came all too soon. Jak awoke with a start in the cold pre-dawn gloom to Daxter shaking his shoulder gently. “Come on, big guy. Wakey-wakey. Time fer us ta get movin’.” With a stretch and a quiet groan the prince sat up out of the sand and dust, blinking at the small, shifting silhouette against the opening of their shelter. Daxter had changed over into an ottsel again during the night. He seemed to be getting quicker at the transformation. “Morning, Dax. Ready to head out?” “Ready as I’ll ever be, dashing off into peril without breakfast.” Long, orange ears flitted upward as Jak got to his hands and knees, collected his sword and cloak, and began to crawl outside. “But, uh, Jak? Big guy? If there’s somethin’ a little… weird goin’ on out there, promise ya won’t wig out on me, okay?” “Weird like snow in the desert, or weird like raining frogs?” Jak asked over his shoulder, curious as to what his friend meant. It would take more than a little oddness to spook the future ruler of a warrior nation. “I don’t understand what you—” Then he got to his feet, looked out ahead across the sands, and did understand. Even during the day, eco was eye catching. It glittered, sparkled, and swirled, nearly brighter than the sunlight. That being the case, the towering pillars of it ringing the city of Spargus and rising high into the cloudless desert sky eclipsed even the red sun about to rise over the dunes. Jak felt his blood run cold. Though they were still far off, the spectacle was awesome. Green, blue, red eco, and some that was even pale, almost whitish-blue rose up from the sand and over the walls as if a plethora of vents had opened of their own accord. The pale blue commanded the most attention, seeming ethereal in the moments just before true daylight broke. Jak had never seen light eco before, but he felt sure that he was seeing some now. The prince’s mouth was bone dry, and not just for lack of water. What could be happening to his home? Was this somehow some doing of Erol’s? It couldn’t possibly be… could it? His father, Keira, Torn—were they alright, and would they stay that way until he could get back to them? “Jak! Buddy, listen!” There was a sharp tug at his pant leg and an even sharper sting in his upper thigh as little claws dug unintentionally in. Daxter scrambled up to balance precariously on a piece of the prince’s shoulder armor, pawing anxiously at his friend. “That’s fer protection, pal, protection!” He got Jak by the chin, turning his head forcibly until they were nose to nose, startled blue eyes meeting calmer ones. “Nothin’s gonna happen ta yer city, okay? I swear.” To the best of his ability, Jak tried to compose himself. Truth be told, he had forgotten for a moment that Daxter was still at his side. But the fact that the other seemed to understand what was going on and was trying to reassure him allowed Jak to breathe a little easier. “Alright. I trust you. But—” A small, furry hand landed over his mouth. “Save the questions fer now. We have to get back there before we miss the party. Plus, the pretty lights’ll look even nicer when I work my own special kind of pizazz on ‘em, don’t ya think?” Jak could only nod somewhat dumbly and turn mechanically back toward Spargus. Until he had all the pieces of this scattered puzzle, the only logical thing to do was what Daxter said. - - - - - Running on sand was almost as natural for Jak as breathing. He had trained that way for more years than he could recall. The shifting grains under his boots, the hot rays against his back, the small orange being clinging to his shoulder helped to remind him that he was firmly anchored in reality as they came ever closer to the rear wall of the city. Luckily the area was deserted, showing no sign of Erol’s forces or any hint that they might have been lurking nearby. The barrier of eco was even more amazing up close. Jak craned his neck back for an astounded look upwards. He couldn’t see where the glowing tendrils ended. “Daxter, how are the different ecos not reacting with each other? I’ve never seen them all together like this before.” “This is a special situation. Eco can be controlled in definite patterns, with enough power.” Daxter sounded almost nervous, but he directed Jak firmly forward with a little tug at the prince’s ear. “There’re still gaps in this eco, see? Wait fer it ta swirl just right, then walk through. Don’t hafta sprint, but make sure we get on the other side pretty quick.” “Right.” Despite himself, Jak couldn’t help the leap. He stepped cautiously toward a forming opening in the wall of raw energy and felt a brush of blue eco against his bare arm. There was nothing for it after that—he bolted through with the customary jolt of the eco of motion running cool through his veins. Daxter yelped as he slipped off the metal shoulder plate and hung by it, legs and tail flailing for purchase in the crisp morning air as the eco shifted seamlessly shut behind them. “Jeez, Jak, watch it!” “Sorry!” The green-blonde grabbed his friend gently around the middle. He was lowering the ruffled ottsel gently to the sand near the brick wall when a shout from above hailed him, and he looked upward quickly. “Your Highness!” Instant relief assailed the prince as he beheld the flash of armor and the glimpse of a tanned face that looked as happy to see him as he was to be seen by friendly eyes. A Spargian guard. “Yes!” he shouted. “As far as I know we’re not being followed. Let us in, quick!” There was an immediate scramble up above. “Someone get down there and open the back gate—Prince Jak has returned! Move it, move it!” Daxter, who had half hidden himself between Jak’s feet out of reflex, peered up at the suddenly empty parapet. “Well, that was easy. Guess I’d better get my groove on before they get down here, huh?” Before Jak could ask what he was talking about, Daxter was springing into action. The ottsel scampered back to within arm’s reach of the eco wall, which twisted and shifted before him. Small tendrils of the stuff drifted free of the main mass and swirled forward, as if reacting to Daxter’s nearness. Dax didn’t bat an eye, however. He merely sat back on his haunches, tail curled primly around his hind feet, and reached forward with one hand to meet the energy. Jak watched intently as the ends of the ottsel’s fur began to shimmer and glow a bright yellow. It was strikingly beautiful against the pumpkin orange that covered most of his body, and made the yellow of his chest and underside glow like molten gold. Jak actually gasped, albeit softly, when Daxter’s paws left the ground. He knew it could happen when especially talented people worked with—channeled—enough eco, this momentary levitation, but with Daxter actually creating the stuff out of thin air, who knew how much power was flowing through that little furry body just then? Slowly the cloud of yellow eco that had formed around the ottsel began to travel down to his spread palm and unravel from there, working its way steadily into the moving tapestry of color that was already enveloping the city. Yellow seeped into the formerly empty spaces, and in less than a minute the barrier was complete. Daxter touched the ground again gently, foot paws settling back into the sand with minimal fuss as the glow left his fur and he became once again an ordinary creature. “Daxter, wow! That was incredible. I—” Jak had barely taken a step toward his friend before the ottsel staggered, stumbled, and collapsed onto his side with a puff of dust. “Dax!” Jak bolted over and dropped to his knees, gathering Daxter into his arms. He was completely limp in the prince’s grasp, breathing shallow. “Dax, come on, please! Wake up!” All Jak could do was shake his friend gently, pet his now sandy fur, and hope to gods that Daxter hadn’t made a huge mistake by using so much energy in one go. He was just a young ottsel, after all, and didn’t seem to have had much practice at manipulating eco on a large scale, if any at all. That he had been doing so simply to protect Jak’s home from an invading army bent on mass destruction made the prince feel responsible. The creak of an iron gate opening brought Jak out of his blooming panic. He turned to see two guards rush out with weapons drawn. They hovered uncertainly just outside the gate, watching the eco barrier warily. One stepped forward while the other covered the entrance. “Your Highness, quickly, come inside. Something is happening in the throne room, between your father and Praxis’ general.”
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