Dark cloud ( 2 ) : Time is changing
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+A through F › Dark Cloud
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
7
Views:
2,720
Reviews:
2
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Dark Cloud, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Dark cloud ( 2 ) : Time is changing
A strong thunderstom swept the kingdom , a dark figure
sitting high apon a throne . The rage in his voice " find her and bring her to
me .. kill anyone who gets in your way " , the 4 young men nodded " i have an
idea sir if your open to it " . The foreboding figure " speak then " , the
warrior stepped up to him " why dont we kidnap her and the boy .. then when shes
freed she will think you saved her from those men " . The shadowy figure nodded
" deception very good number 2 .. you will make a great warrior some day " . The
warriors armor changed from blue to red with a wave of his hand " you will lead
the team for this quest .. congratulations " , the youngest warrior on the team
was now the team leader for a mission . Plus the armor change meaning he earned
some respect , on their way out the young man told his team " dont be afraid to
step up to him if you have a good idea " . The team all gave him an agreeing nod
" so where is the target " , the team leader smirked " 100 years in the past ..
he opened a time gate for us " .
- after stepping through the gate and
arriving in a small town known as palm brinks -
size=4>" There she is men " the team leader said happily , the oldest man on the
team whose code name was red eagle sighed " you can
see why the master wants her " . Blue jay smirked " indeed " , cardinal sighed "
a vison of lovlieness " , the team leader black hawk scoffed " keep your head in
the game lets move " .
--- monicas pov
---
Im walking with Max down the streets of
palm brinks , trying to get him to open up about how he feels . When out of the
blue 4 guys attacked , we tried to fight back then it all went dark .. is this
really the end
-- max's pov
--
I had the words on the top of my lips ,
today was the day i told her how i felt . Suddenly we get bum rushed by 4 random
guys , 3 in blue armor one in red . Then it all went dark , aw man im going to
die .
- end povs for the entire fic ( it fit
at the time ) -
When Monica awoke she was in
the throne room at the old raymbrant castle , she shook it off and slowly got to
her feet " man what hit me " . A familiar voice caught her ear " i dunno who
they were but they were taken care of " , Monica called out with glee as she saw
a man with long brown hair standing infront of her " Lord William " . She gave
him a huge hug and let him swing her around " little Monica " , after letting
her back to her feet she pouted " why do you always call me that .. im 15 now im
not little " . He sat down smiling " because you will always be the same runt
that had the chutzpa to ask me to train you " , she smiled now as well " thanks
for saving me .. but arent we 100 years from the time they took me " . He slowly
nodded " i found you and a young man frozen in stone earlier .. they were
holding out for a ransom so they used magic to petrify you " . She snarled out "
damnit im stronger than that .. is there any way to get Max back to his own time
" , He shook his head " unless i use a crapload of my power and open a time gate
.. even then i cant be sure he makes it to the right time " .
She muttered " son of a ... " interupting her
" you got quite a foul mouth on you as of late . She sighed " sorry max's boss
swears like a sailor " , that caused him to roll his eyes " and you picked it up
cause your a fast learner " . She smiled " that's what you said when i picked up
a magic book .. the same day i was able to cast beginers spells " . His eyes
grew happy to see her well " a great evil has befallen the Raymbrant kingdom " ,
she looked into his pale brown eyes " understood .. wheres max the 3 of us can
take down this evil " . He nodded " so your lover is strong then " , monica
blushed " hes not my lover ... yet " . He smiled " im happy you found someone "
Monica knew that he was more like family to her through everything they had done
, she secretly wanted him to be more than that in those days .
She wasn't sure how she felt about him now ,
sure he was still the same strong and caring man . Which is the reason she had
fallen so hard for Max , there was a grave difference however . Lord William
feared nothing and was willing to express his feelings if he cared for someone ,
Max was shy and a little stubborn at times . She tilted her head up " im not
sure i love him i have feelings for someone else .. but he never answered a
simple question " . His eyes halfway shut " he never had time to answer .. you
left before he could say a word " , she sighed " noted lets go get max " .
- flashback -
size=4>The shadow was being flocked by his usual group of floozies , though he
never bothered using cheap harlots himself . It was a brilliant idea to have
them enter max's room , and make sure that when his two pawns arrived . Max
would be enjoying the company of a large group of unfamiliar women , he was
setting it up to bring the student and teacher together . So in the end monica
truly lost all , his plan was brilliant with no seen flaw . Break apart a
winning team , add kindle to a flickering flame , once the fire begins burning
hot , douse the fire by taking away that kindle and covering it with dirt "
.
( that last part is my greatest analogy ever
... to translate for the non analogical person )
size=4>( break up Max and Monica , get Will and Monica together , right before
they get physical kill Will , then Monica will be his
)
sitting high apon a throne . The rage in his voice " find her and bring her to
me .. kill anyone who gets in your way " , the 4 young men nodded " i have an
idea sir if your open to it " . The foreboding figure " speak then " , the
warrior stepped up to him " why dont we kidnap her and the boy .. then when shes
freed she will think you saved her from those men " . The shadowy figure nodded
" deception very good number 2 .. you will make a great warrior some day " . The
warriors armor changed from blue to red with a wave of his hand " you will lead
the team for this quest .. congratulations " , the youngest warrior on the team
was now the team leader for a mission . Plus the armor change meaning he earned
some respect , on their way out the young man told his team " dont be afraid to
step up to him if you have a good idea " . The team all gave him an agreeing nod
" so where is the target " , the team leader smirked " 100 years in the past ..
he opened a time gate for us " .
- after stepping through the gate and
arriving in a small town known as palm brinks -
size=4>" There she is men " the team leader said happily , the oldest man on the
team whose code name was red eagle sighed " you can
see why the master wants her " . Blue jay smirked " indeed " , cardinal sighed "
a vison of lovlieness " , the team leader black hawk scoffed " keep your head in
the game lets move " .
--- monicas pov
---
Im walking with Max down the streets of
palm brinks , trying to get him to open up about how he feels . When out of the
blue 4 guys attacked , we tried to fight back then it all went dark .. is this
really the end
-- max's pov
--
I had the words on the top of my lips ,
today was the day i told her how i felt . Suddenly we get bum rushed by 4 random
guys , 3 in blue armor one in red . Then it all went dark , aw man im going to
die .
- end povs for the entire fic ( it fit
at the time ) -
When Monica awoke she was in
the throne room at the old raymbrant castle , she shook it off and slowly got to
her feet " man what hit me " . A familiar voice caught her ear " i dunno who
they were but they were taken care of " , Monica called out with glee as she saw
a man with long brown hair standing infront of her " Lord William " . She gave
him a huge hug and let him swing her around " little Monica " , after letting
her back to her feet she pouted " why do you always call me that .. im 15 now im
not little " . He sat down smiling " because you will always be the same runt
that had the chutzpa to ask me to train you " , she smiled now as well " thanks
for saving me .. but arent we 100 years from the time they took me " . He slowly
nodded " i found you and a young man frozen in stone earlier .. they were
holding out for a ransom so they used magic to petrify you " . She snarled out "
damnit im stronger than that .. is there any way to get Max back to his own time
" , He shook his head " unless i use a crapload of my power and open a time gate
.. even then i cant be sure he makes it to the right time " .
She muttered " son of a ... " interupting her
" you got quite a foul mouth on you as of late . She sighed " sorry max's boss
swears like a sailor " , that caused him to roll his eyes " and you picked it up
cause your a fast learner " . She smiled " that's what you said when i picked up
a magic book .. the same day i was able to cast beginers spells " . His eyes
grew happy to see her well " a great evil has befallen the Raymbrant kingdom " ,
she looked into his pale brown eyes " understood .. wheres max the 3 of us can
take down this evil " . He nodded " so your lover is strong then " , monica
blushed " hes not my lover ... yet " . He smiled " im happy you found someone "
Monica knew that he was more like family to her through everything they had done
, she secretly wanted him to be more than that in those days .
She wasn't sure how she felt about him now ,
sure he was still the same strong and caring man . Which is the reason she had
fallen so hard for Max , there was a grave difference however . Lord William
feared nothing and was willing to express his feelings if he cared for someone ,
Max was shy and a little stubborn at times . She tilted her head up " im not
sure i love him i have feelings for someone else .. but he never answered a
simple question " . His eyes halfway shut " he never had time to answer .. you
left before he could say a word " , she sighed " noted lets go get max " .
- flashback -
size=4>The shadow was being flocked by his usual group of floozies , though he
never bothered using cheap harlots himself . It was a brilliant idea to have
them enter max's room , and make sure that when his two pawns arrived . Max
would be enjoying the company of a large group of unfamiliar women , he was
setting it up to bring the student and teacher together . So in the end monica
truly lost all , his plan was brilliant with no seen flaw . Break apart a
winning team , add kindle to a flickering flame , once the fire begins burning
hot , douse the fire by taking away that kindle and covering it with dirt "
.
( that last part is my greatest analogy ever
... to translate for the non analogical person )
size=4>( break up Max and Monica , get Will and Monica together , right before
they get physical kill Will , then Monica will be his
)