A Thank You Present | By : Fuzzbeast Category: +A through F > 999: 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors Views: 1454 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: I do not own 9 Hours 9 Persons 9 Doors or the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
Author's Note: This is a one-shot set after the events of the True Ending. It's got spoilers because of this, and also gratuitous smut, so read at your own risk. This fic may not be perfectly realistic or anything, but just roll with it. It's just for fun! Also, this is a Snake/Seven fic, so if you don't like the idea of this pairing, turn back now. Alright, on to the fic!
"I do not own 9 Hours 9 Persons 9 Doors or the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story."
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Everyone had escaped after the Nevada facility and made it back to civilization. The group was frankly quite exhausted after this traumatic ordeal, and everyone decided it would be best to stop and spend the night at a motel to recoup before heading their separate ways. They found a reasonably cheap looking place and stopped for the night. Strangely, everyone was still calling each other by their codenames, either to protect their privacy or simply by habit at this point. "Okay, everyone got their keys?" Junpei asked the group. Everyone else nodded and headed off to their separate rooms for some much needed rest.Snake and Clover, being close siblings, were sharing a room to save money. Clover ran for the shower, eager to wash herself clean of the previous day's events. Snake simply sat on the bed, looking contemplative. Clover emerged from the shower in her T-shirt and skirt, looking squeaky clean and refreshed. She flopped down on the bed. Snake got up and headed for the door.
"Where are you going, brother?" she asked.
He turned back to her and replied, "It's no big deal, but there's something I need to take care of. I might not be back until morning. Don't worry, I'm not leaving the premises."
She knew how stubborn her brother could be, so she decided not to pester him about whatever it was that he was going to do. "Oh, alright. See you later then," she replied.
He headed to the door. "Bye for now, Clover!" he called out as he left.
Snake worked his way around the outside of the motel, having previously made a careful mental note of where he was going. Snake knocked on Seven's door as it was already getting dark outside. Seven opened the door, and even in the fading light immediately recognized Snake's form.
"Oh, Mr. Snake, what are you doing here? Do you need anything?" Seven asked. Snake invited himself into the doorway, pushing past Seven, and shut and locked the door quietly behind him.
"Actually, Detective, I came to say thank you for all your help so many years ago...and more recently," Snake replied quietly.
Seven looked a bit confused for a moment. "But you've already told me 'thank you', haven't you?"
"Yes, I've told you 'thank you', but I wanted to give you something more....personal," Snake said as he moved in uncomfortably close to Seven. Snake gently placed a hand on the Detective's chest and smiled shyly, but also a bit suggestively.
"Oh-hh...." Seven knew what was happening here. He'd heard too many stories of loose women trying to get out of speeding tickets to not know what Snake was suggesting. "Umm, how old are you exactly?" he sputtered out.
"Relax, I'm 24 and perfectly legal," Snake replied easily.
Well, Seven thought, he was an adult and there was nothing technically illegal about it... It was a bit unprofessional, though, wasn't it? But on the other hand, they'd all been through a traumatic experience, and in his frazzled state of mind, he felt so tempted to just give in. After all, the boy was rather attractive despite his blindness. He had a certain beauty to him, from his soft wavy locks of hair to his slender, delicate hands, and his soft-looking lips. Seven's mind briefly strayed to thoughts of what those lips could do...
Snake had been patiently waiting this whole time, waiting for an answer. He grew impatient though, and said softly, "Please, Detective, I really want to...thank you. Please let me..."
Seven felt his resolve slipping. He wasn't really a very attractive man, and didn't have a significant other. It had been some time since he'd had any...intimate relations. Yes, his resolve was surely slipping... He sighed. He couldn't believe he was about to agree to this. "Alright Mr. Snake, I accept."
Snake smiled and slowly moved forward, pressing his body up to Seven's while standing on tip toe. He tried to place a kiss on Seven's lips, but missed a bit, landing the kiss slightly off center. Seven didn't care. He slid his arms around Snake and pressed his lips more firmly to the younger man's. Snake trembled and moaned a little, parting his lips. Seven did the same and Snake slid his tongue into the older man's mouth. It wasn't long before they were rubbing their tongues together passionately. They finally parted after a minute or two, gasping for air.
"Let's take this to the bed" Snake said, and Seven helpfully guided him to it.
It was a rather small dinky full-size bed, just what you'd expect from a low-end motel, but it would do. Seven sat down first, the bed creaking audibly under his weight. He wasn't really fat at all - he was very tall, stocky, and firmly muscled. Snake sat himself down rather daintily, sliding his shoes off in the process. He removed his jacket as well, carefully folding it and placing on the floor next to the shoes. He loosened the tie and pulled it over his head, placing it on top of the jacket. Just as he started on the buttons for his shirt, Seven piped up, "Um, Snake...?"
"It's best you do the same, Detective, for what I have planned..." came Snake's soft reply.
"Oh, right," Seven said as he gulped nervously, removing his clothing. Once nude, he pulled the covers over himself, and waited for Snake to finish. The younger silver-haired man took his sweet time sliding off the shirt and folding it carefully before placing it on top of the jacket. He did the same with the pants, but didn't remove his underwear.
Snake shimmied under the covers and closer to Seven. Even though he was blushing slightly, Snake wasn't acting shy as he immediately pressed his lips onto Seven's in another heated kiss. Snake began to trail his fingers over the bigger man's face, gently tracing the scars there. It all felt so oddly soothing to the detective. Here was someone who didn't care about his rough appearance. Someone who was touching him so sweetly... Seven grew bolder and ran his hands over Snake's back, brushing briefly over the spot where Snake's prosthetic left arm was attached. The silver-haired man softly moaned his approval into the larger man's mouth. Snake was the one who finally broke their kiss.
"Okay then, time for me to get to work..." Snake muttered. He ducked under the covers, sliding his fingers down the detective's chest, past his stomach, and finally to his intended target. Seven was quite aroused by now, and was sporting a full erection to prove it. Snake reached out and gingerly touched it with his good hand. It twitched under his fingers. "Alright Detective, wish me luck," he whispered. He lowered his mouth over the tip, sucking gently.
"Ahhh!" Seven cried out, startled. He wasn't sure why he was suddenly so surprised by this turn of events, especially since it obviously seemed to be Snake's intention all along, but for some reason he still felt some surprise when that hot, moist mouth descended on his length. Seven pulled his head under the covers to watch, entranced by the sight. Snake continued to bob his soft lips over Seven's cock, not quite able to take it all in, but doing his best. Judging from Seven's moans, he was doing a decent job of it.
The poor detective had the bad habit of saying whatever popped into his head when his mind was fuddled by sex, and tonight was no different. "Ah, so good..." he whispered. "Oh Snake, you're so beautiful..." "Why thank you," Snake thought in his mind, although he was wasn't able to verbalize this since his mouth was currently so preoccupied. Seven sighed and whispered ever so softly, "I wish I could feel you on the inside..." Snake instantly stopped his ministrations. "Had he heard that?! Did I say that out loud?!" Seven thought in a panic.
Snake removed himself from Seven's length with a wet popping sound. "Well, sir," Snake spoke, "I wasn't originally planning to go that far, but if you wish..."
"N-no, u-um," Seven stammered, "You don't have to do that if you don't want to. I- I didn't mean to pressure you or anything. I sometimes say stupid things during...y'know."
Snake popped out from under the covers and replied, "It's alright, I don't mind at all. I just wasn't sure you'd want to go that far."
"Um, um, you really don't have to..." Seven repeated nervously.
"It's alright," Snake replied, "I think I'd like to."
Seven gulped before saying, "Oh, okay, well....thank you."
Snake smiled softly. "Best be rid of these," he said as he shed the underwear he'd been wearing. Seven pulled the smaller man into an embrace.
"Umm, may I...touch you?" Seven asked hesitantly.
Snake smiled again and said, "Sure." Seven reached down to Snake's neglected erection and gave it a few hesitant exploratory strokes. The younger man moaned encouragingly, so Seven continued. He started to feel the precum leaking out, and Snake's breathy moans were getting a bit louder as he continued. "W-wait," Snake stopped him before he could lose his....composure. "We need some lubricant."
Seven searched the bedside table drawer, and thankfully fished out one of those travel sized lotion bottles and a condom. "Hey I found a condom in here too!" he said aloud.
"Here, let me have those," Snake requested. Seven placed the condom and the lotion in the younger man's hand. Snake set the lotion down and tore open the condom wrapper, sliding the condom over Seven's length. He then pulled the covers back and slid his leg over Seven's crotch, straddling him. "Please be a bit patient with me now," he said in his typical quiet voice. Snake picked up the lotion and began moistening his own entrance, gently sliding in first one finger, then two. His breath hitched a bit as he added the third. Seven was almost certain that this was the most erotic thing he'd ever seen. Just watching the beautiful flustered young man finger himself was making him ache. "Alright, here we go!" Snake said with a smile. He then grasped Seven's penis with his right hand as he slowly lowered himself onto the tip. He whimpered a bit as he slowly took in more of it.
"Now, now, don't go too fast," Seven cautioned, worried that he might hurt his young lover.
"Oh, I'm alright," Snake reassured. He continued to slide down the length until he'd managed to take it all in. He sat still and allowed himself to adjust for a few moments. Seven trembled a bit, the tightness was almost too much. Then Snake began to move, rocking his hips up and down in a gentle motion. Seven started moaning, gripping Snake's hips and gently guiding, but not forcing, his movements. Snake was so gorgeous; the way his face was scrunched up in concentration, the stray silver hairs clinging to his face...
"Open your eyes for me, please..." Seven requested.
"You know I can't see anything," came Snake's faint reply.
"Yes, I know," Seven said, "but I just want to see your eyes." Snake complied, his pretty, unfocused green eyes staring blindly straight forward. Seven thought they rather looked like green sea glass. He smiled and sighed appreciatively. Soon their rhythm grew faster and more desperate. Seven moved one of his hands to Snake's penis and began stroking in time to their thrusts as they continued.
"Hhh...uhhh," Snake moaned, then tensed, spilling his seed across Seven's stomach. Seven came a few thrusts later, arching his back upward into the young man as he groaned out his release. A few minutes later they had both caught their breath after separating. Seven pulled the used condom off of himself and threw it into the bedside waste basket.
"Sorry, I hope I didn't hurt you there at the end," Seven said with some concern.
"Oh no, I'm quite alright. I hope I did okay with your thank-you present," Snake replied softly.
Seven grinned before saying, "Oh, it was more than just 'okay'! Thank you so much for that. You're really beautiful, y'know...thank you."
Snake chuckled. "I'm the one who was supposed to be thanking you, but I'm grateful for the compliment..." he trailed off quietly.
There was a bit of an awkward silence as neither of them was quite sure what was the socially proper thing to do now. Snake was pondering if he should get up and use the shower, spend the night, or if it would be best to just get dressed and leave.
Seven broke the silence. "Um, maybe we should get cleaned up?"
"Ah, yes, good idea," Snake replied. They both headed for the shower. Seven continued to admire the young man's lithe form even as they showered. They headed back out to the main room, and once again the awkward silence filled the air. Snake finally spoke up. "Um, would you like me to leave now?"
"Uh, actually, I was hoping you'd...spend the night with me. F-for just a bit...O-of course, you can leave in the morning..." Seven stammered out. Snake just smiled and didn't say anything as he walked over to the bed and got in, pulling the covers up to his chin. Seven climbed in on the other side, and surprised Snake by wrapping his arm over his waist and pulling him close from behind. Seven inhaled deeply, breathing in the scent of Snake's freshly shampooed silver hair. Seven was grateful for the wonderful experience, but he was also sad that it had to end by the morning. They relaxed and a few minutes later, Seven was sure Snake must be asleep.
However, Snake stirred a bit, then whispered something very softly: "I rather like you, you know..." Seven was a bit taken aback by the statement.
"What do you mean by that? You don't mean that you would actually want to be with me, do you? I mean, I'm really too old for you, and..." Seven trailed off.
"Hush," Snake quietly admonished, "Don't worry about that right now. Just hold me for now and we'll figure out the rest some other time. Good night now."
Seven settled back down, but his mind was still racing. "Would he actually have a chance for something more with the lovely young man? Does he really want me?" he thought, "Oh well, best to save those thoughts for another time..." He wasn't sure what the future would hold for him or if Snake would be gone in the morning, but just for right now, he felt content. Snake nuzzled deeper into his embrace and Seven finally relaxed and drifted off to sleep.
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