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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho
  • From ANON - yoyo on January 12, 2007
    I agree with omega.
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  • From ANON - Omega13 on January 12, 2007
    Somehow I see this stepping away from Ryu and turning towards Elliot.

    The Elliot/Hitomi pairing really just seems to click with people considering all things, although you should probably attempt to include Christie at some point in all the chaos. Considering you have played DOA4 as Elliot, you should know the rather provocative shit she says to him which has spawned a number of theories and stories.

    Love = Hitomi
    Lust = Christie

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - zerorux on January 12, 2007
    LOL You really do have a talent for writing these types of stories. I think you hit the right balance between erotic and amusing with your Ryu & Ayane training chapter (XD @ Ayane's physical prowess). I'm beginning to see an Elliot spin-off and hopefully you'll add Christie to Elliot's goals and not Ayane.

    Please do a chapter with Hayabusa exploring his physical limits with 3 women at the same time. You really nailed threesomes (Ryu/Hitomi/Leifang and Ryu/Kasumi/Ayane) with your writing style and hopefully you can answer my challenge. More power.
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  • From ANON - Small Ninja on January 08, 2007
    Could you give a writers commentary on the late chapters and a story note, because the story is going deeper then just sexual encounters with the DOA girls.

    Chapter 19 is my favorite!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    the lack of oral sex (with one exception, which you admitted was an after-thought) really ruined it for me. Oral sex doesn't have to be dirty or demeaning, in fact, us girls like giving it just as much as some guys like getting it. Overall not bad, but from what I've read so far of yours I'm sure you can do even better
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  • From ANON - jonny100 on January 06, 2007
    Isnt Ryu gonna have 2 kids now since he got helena pregnant too?
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  • From ANON - Doa fan on January 06, 2007
    Dear god!!! Chapter 19 was breathtaking!!! I liked the begining conversation with Tina and Ryu.

    Since Ruy is going to be a father it would be a shame if Tina and Lisa dont get a little to close and personal on their wrestling tour "wink"
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  • From ANON - Mystery on January 06, 2007
    Definitely the finest work I have ever read. Highly reccommended.
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  • From ANON - taco360 on January 05, 2007
    hey I'm review ch 19. Ive been reading you story and its good. But i was jw and agreeing with that other guy,ru going make ryu like some family man now or sumthing? :/ just from seeing his reaction and all.
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  • From ANON - yoyo on January 05, 2007
    good story btw
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  • From ANON - yoyo on January 05, 2007
    I like chapter 19 but I you going turn this into story so that Ryu becomes some like cheesy family guy, cuz thats gonna suck.
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  • From Jaquard on January 02, 2007
    Dude, this story is just... sinfull. The debauchery is legendary. You put (somewhat) of a face on each character and you really run the gamut of sexual positions, ideas and creativity. You, my good man, deserve a medal for this writing. However, the story is stretching really thin. Add some more meat, since that is why most serious readers will remember this story.

    Kudos! And have 500 cookies!
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  • From ANON - Scalon on December 07, 2006
    Ouch, Ryu was THIS close...

    and the "Evil Kasumi" finds out about his sexual prowess. Could it be some of DOATEC thinks that the man who beat Murai would make a good father for the child of Kasumi's clone?

    Or that Ryu Hayabusa's DNA would be good for a male clone?

    Kasumi has hers, so why not give "her" a "husband"?
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  • From ANON - sv0 on December 06, 2006
    Good story. It was so well written that when I finished the infamous Epilogue/Chapter8, I couldn't help but want for you to somehow right a more elaborate version. You seem more than able writing Ryu with multiple partners as seen in the Hitomi/LeiFang chapter so if possible make one with the details you hinted at in the Epilogue.

    More power and hopefully we'll see more of this story from you.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 04, 2006
    Man that was good. Do u think u might be able to write the scene where Ayane and Kasumi make love to each other? If u can that would awesome and really hot!

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