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By : Tycho

From ANON - TVO on July 18, 2012
It's sort of been a while since we got anything out of this story. It's weird because Tycho does such great stuff but the updates are spread out over a long time and sporadic. He does a great job but man the wait inbetween sometimes takes about forever.

If this story has concluded I would hope he could provide some commentary and at least say what is going on. He used to provide a lot of commentary for his earlier chapters which he (she maybe?) eventually stopped doing. I think the Duke Nukem/Tomb Raider crossover is also over or at least it seems to have reached a climax and conclusion of sorts. Just wanted to know if we've seen the same thing happen here with Ryu moving into the events of NGS II.
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From ANON - xex on May 03, 2012
love this fic and hoping for an update... maybe a crossover into another franchise.

I hope "retirement" doesn't mean what I think it means.
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From ANON - Zaro on April 16, 2012
Hi there! Your story was pretty awesome! A great man deserves great women, after all! lol Well, I just wanted to point out, that I think you underpowered Ryu a lot as a character... I mean, after playing Ninja Gaiden, for Xbox, or any of the other modern Ninja Gaiden games, you realize thet Ryu hayabusa, it's mostly human, just in appeareance, and maybe soul... Ryu, almost in strength to Tina? And Kasumi, being able to hold the Super Ninja's Ryuken (dragon Sword...? That's ridiculous! It makes me laugh like crazy! xD The only way any other character could beat Ryu on any kind of strength, it's on DOA games, and that's because, you have to keep the game balanced, and can't overpower any character... But, regarding every character's abilities, Ryu could be opposed by Dante for DMC series, or Kratos from God of War... Any than that, you story rocks! You rock!
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From ANON - nom on March 22, 2012
Hmm instead of pairing Momiji with Ryu, why not expand the NGS2 rescue scene of Sanji? Momiji could give Sanji some 'special instruction'?
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From ANON - kcdc on March 05, 2012
Oh, almost forgot. Ayane and Ryu appear also in Warriors Orochi 3. The women in Warriors Orochi are top-notch and worth pairing up with Hayabusa to spice things up.
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From ANON - kcdc on March 05, 2012
First and foremost, I want to say this fic is awesome.

I know the 3D Ninja Gaiden games are suppose to happen before any of the DOA games but I love the progression in this.

There are like 6 women in Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2: Ayane, Rachel, Momiji, Elizebet, Sonia/Irene, and Kasumi. I think you should do what you do best: go in a direction you want to. It doesn't have to be tied up canonically and if past chapters are anything to go by, you usually do your best stuff doing so.

One thing though that I wish you'd reconsider is how you distribute the women to the different men. I think you should cut Bayman, Leon, Brad from the pool of women. Since you've chosen Zack & Bass as competitors for RRXXX, they can stay with their established partners i.e. Nikki and Dixie. Helena should be Kokoro's permanent 'partner'... but I'm not aversed to you revisiting the Kokoro x Hitomi x Leifang angle (it should be interesting since you wrote that both Jann Lee and Eliot have a thing for having 2 women at once). Christie... well you sort of hinted something with her and Ryu in the early chapters but I must confess that I'd like to see a chapter with Eliot on hand for an actual demonstration of Christie's 'finger trick' on Hitomi that you mentioned (chapter 25).

The Kasumi x Tina was a great touch and honestly it reminded me that I'd like to see more pairings, especially unlikely ones, with the girls that you haven't touched upon. For example Kasumi and Helena are both MILFs but they haven't had a scene together and Kokoro x Helena is heavily referenced but they don't even have a dedicated paragraph for their relationship and the one time we see them go down on each other (Zach Attack) it's like an afterthought. Tina I think should not just be Zack's manager but sort of hands-on GM/trainer for like the RRXXX participants, especially on giving practical advice on the girls to 'improve' their performance

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Have you given any thought to extending the crossover to other fighting games? DOA5 has Virtua Fighter's Akira Yuki as a guest and maybe that's one avenue worth investigating. Also Soulcalibur 5 introduced the concept of Astral Chaos, a dimensional nexus where thoughts and dreams can be given shape and the laws of time are malleable -- perfect for a Time Travel chapter if you're ever in the mood.

Hope to read more of this series. ^_^

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From ANON - scalondragon on February 04, 2012
Here comes TWO New Challengers: Bass and Zack, each having been infused with Dragon Essence.

And with Dixie managing Bass (with Candy Cane also helping get Bass up to speed in time to contend) it's going to be wicked. More of the line between Rumble Roses and their new "parent corporation" DOATEC blurring.

(Since Dixie reminded Bass of Tina's late Mom, that's one good reason--though Tina's point of some sleazoid taking pictures and accusing Bass of fucking Tina instead of Dixie was valid too; the two girls could easily be mistaken for each other, and sometimes "pictures of good fucks for quick bucks" can turn into deadly PR weapons. This could backfire though, Penthouse in 2002 published what it thought were pictures of Anna Kournikova topless that proved to be false.)

Lisa's understanding about the Ayane-Hayate thing showed she appreciated the personal sacrifice it took Ayane even if others might think it morally unforgivable (magic drove desires, and it let Ayane do what Lisa could not on her own: give a man she loved immortality). And Hayate getting his "Gemini Threesome" with Lisa and Anesthesia isn't a bad thing either (might not be like Aisha and her sisters with Ryu, but his own personal yin-yang thing is no cheap thing).

Of course, Rachel's strength is here on par with a Supergirl, Power Girl or even Wonder Woman, so she's no slouch with catching the trailer that Tina and Ryu whaled away inside in pure animal lust.

Of course, Tina's heart was with Lisa, though you wonder how long it would be before Tina's clock might go off like it had with Kasumi, Helena and Rachel. Or for that matter, Lisa or Fujiko's--cute babies/kids cause the hearts of those who see them to melt, and "I want one" sometimes comes out if the eyes that see them belong to a female.

I can see that we're getting into Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2, though some say NG3 is on the Horizon--sometimes you can only base off of what's out there now, not what will be coming.

It was good how you dealt with wrapping up the arc, and bringing Ryu back to his roots.

Though how the blonde (Sonia/"Irene Lew") might be brought into the harem is going to be interesting. Might not hurt if you did a "business before pleasure" take though--you don't want the Fiends to know the compulsion of Dragon Essence makes it harder for Ryu to keep his focus on battle when it might instead be on a new woman he wants badly.

And of course, when Elizabet is shown, her Fiend Aura might react violently with the Dragon Essence, letting Ryu have no compunctions of taking on the evil who nearly corrupted the Rumble Roses through a mind-warped Anesthesia. If she'd not cut her losses, who knows if Elizabet could have mounted a comeback--or if by dropping Anesthesia, she saw she'd need to refocus on Ryu in the more traditional confrontation--and got ready for it.

Though with Bayonetta, the "once you give Dragon Essence to other women, what happens afterward is up to those who got it" card might be played; the issues involved could be as light as Leifang and Hitomi (swapping) or Aigle (who had similar innocence to Kokoro), Dixie (appreciative fangirl giving her Idol all that was in her from Day One), Tina (UST) or Ayane (who had the deepest ones of the group, wanting to show her half-brother all she felt but couldn't thanks to the culture they lived in--any wonder why it hurt?).

And Bayonetta might not be that sanguine either--given she's a child of Umbra Witch and Lumen Sage, these developments might have gotten to where she KNEW things woud happen, just not how serious nor how disturbing. The Ayane-Hayate issue would have her worried Ryu thought she planned for it from the get-go, and an angry Super Ninja who took apart Doku and his Empire might not have mercy for a single Lumen Witch or her kind in light of it.

Magic users are not ones you want to hear "oops" from, nor can they always use "It was the best I could do on short notice" without the retort "Couldn't you have done your homework on this--didn't someone have to deal with repercussions as well?"

Either way, Bayonetta will need a contingency plan, as she went from "magic savior Ryu trusted" to "magic bitch who can't be trusted" in a short time. She didn't SEEM like the kind who did this for "lulz" or "evulz" but was there ulterior motive? To unite as much of the Dead or Alive group in immortality as possible? Or get them ready for a bigger threat?

When you unintentionally blow a lot of goodwill due to something going South in a major way you didn't see coming, it might bring a lot of ill things. We might see that coming soon.
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From ANON - Small Ninja on February 01, 2012
I have a small suggestion, as of this writing ninja gaiden 3 is less then two months from release and the emphasis is on story and character i suggest the tie in in the end to be about ninja gaiden 3 since its the same lead in how CIA needs Hayabusa for some task. Ninja gaiden 2 is just a big walkabout around the world without anything climatic or memorable characters. I know how you referenced Elizabeth(not like anyone know who she is without a pic) about ten chapters back but that can be easily changed with Anastasia being controlled by the Phantom of the opera. Also you can play off his cursed arm together with Bayonetta because as things stand now there is not much sense in Hayabusa still having sex with everybody and still being so honorable and everybody being best friends with everybody

Also i hope there's more Ninja Roses continuation because the story and dialogues are really good, i hope there's more tension between Niki/Zack/Tina and Dixie/Bass/Tina
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From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on January 29, 2012
No No No Lisa and Anesthesia not all incest are created equal nor is all incest win. Sorry but that is not how it works. Just as how I find Bass and Tina having sex repulsive I still see Hayate with either or both of his sisters disgusting. It's a thing called taste.

Hayate could have easily hooked up with Hitomi if he wanted to. In this lemon,he has Lisa and Fujiko. Why would he need to sleep with Ayane when he already has a friend with benefits. Most women don't exactly find sleeping with your sibling sexy unless it is sisters sharing the same man. I just find it completely OOC for Lisa to be making such a statement like that even if she is sleeping with her sister.

Another example of another incest pairing I hate is Chris and Claire Redfield. Claire can hook up with Leon and Chris has Sheva or Jill. There are some incest video game yuri pairings I don't find hot as well but right now I cannot think of any.

Ryu Hayabusa rightfully should be pissed. Ayane is his woman and Hayate broke the bro code. Bros before hos.

Ryu Hayabusa and Hayate should team up to take out Bayonetta. She has caused enough problems as it is.

Nice shoutout with the ending of this chapter to the beginning of Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2. Doesn't Ryu have enough women has it is??

Sonia/Irene, if they are really the same person, is just not that interesting of a woman. Sonia is simply a lamer Rachel with guns, not as attractive, and cannot defend herself for shit. Come on Ryu. Why sleep with her when you already have Rachel.

Great now Tina also loves Hayabusa as well. I'm sure Lisa will be pleased with that revelation. I think it is completely out of left field.

I hope that this is it for the Ninja Roses segment of this lemon. Zack and Bass don't have the same charisma has Ryu and focusing immensely on their sexual conquest would not be that fascinating.

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From VFSNAKE on January 27, 2012
GO RYU! I wish all the women would be with him and he didn't have to share. Oh well. They all come back to him sooner or later.
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From ANON - selkirik on January 27, 2012
ch 62 was nice but the sex scenes seem to happen too fast.

Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2 with Rachel, Ayane, Momiji and Sonia/Irene!
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From ANON - TVO on January 27, 2012
I kind of like where this is going. From what I can follow, the epilogue here was basically the beginning of NGS2: Sigma. And you've nicely worked in Rachel and Ayane's parts in the Sigma version as well since they both appeared in the game shadowing Ryu of sorts. Some scenes with Ryu and Sonia/Irene Lew coming up would be awesome! It always sort of annoyed me how monk-like Ryu was in that game when Sonia was basically all over him at the end. Wouldn't mind seeing the aftermath of that battle with the fiends where Ryu finally gets to decompress and maybe enjoy some time with Sonia.
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From ANON - selkirk on December 19, 2011
Maybe Brad should run away and go sheep-herding with Aigle as you put it. Frees up Kokoro and would make a lot of sense for her to be at Helena's side if she going to help run the business. What's up with Christie? She wants to experience having a child? Maybe you should free her up too rather than have her Bayman and Leon; Ryu seems to be more than willing to father children.

Also, Kokoro, Hitomi, and Leifang are well due for a 'reunion' of sorts. Now that you did Tina x Zack, I think you should address some of the older chapters with: a) Ayane teasing Eliot in ch. 19; b) Eliot getting off while watching Tina & Lisa in ch 23; c) Christie ogling Jann Lee in ch 30.

Keep up the great work and hope to see more from you soon.
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From ANON - amamoto on November 06, 2011
I had the feeling of the doragon no honshitsu (dragon's essence) being given to hayate by ayane since last chapter.
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From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on November 05, 2011
Well now I am more pleased to read that only Ayane needed to catch that grenade so that her brother can have the Dragon Essence in him. I was cared as hell Kasumi needed to join in. I think Ryu Hayabusa should be more pissed off that there is more hentai pictures of the siblings in a threesome than him sleeping with the kunoichi half sisters. Fuck there is even one of that queer Sasgay banging Ayane and Kasumi. As much as I like Hayate,he is not as skilled as Ryu and I never understood why does he get to sleep with his sisters.

Thank the heavens this is not going to happen again. You have my eternal gratitude. Hayate now has his own Ayane in Fujiko so there is no need for him to screw his sister again.

Moving on,that now completes all of the males in Dead Or Alive. All I ask is no more giant orgies pretty please.

Hayabusa should be more worried about the other guys teaming up and beating him up for sleeping with their women.

Could this mean that we are approaching the end?

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