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By : Chaosdreamer
  • From Xellacard on November 28, 2008
    this story is so amazing!!! it's currently my favorite story, thank you for posting it!
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  • From KyoEatsBabys on November 24, 2008
    You are Sreoisuly the bset Slinet Hlil Fnaifc Wiretr Eevr!!!
    Pelsae Wirte Mroe!!!
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  • From silver13 on November 18, 2008
    Awesome! love it so far. Keep updating.
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  • From SunflowerSonata on October 30, 2008
    I've read this story more than twice (actually I've lost the count LOL). This story is just too beautiful and well made! Even the plot is so damn interesting I just can't stop thinking/re-reading the story over and over again! And omg, I love how you make James sound so fragile and clinging desperately in his hope to see his father again yet Valtiel think differently (I can't help but to faint at chp 7 ending part lol)

    I wonder... is chp7 is the end of the story? Or will you be continuing with it? I'm so curious for what happened to James and Frank. And what will Pyramid Head and Valtiel will do to James. Keep up the good work and continue please XD I'm more than eager to read the next chapter.
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  • From JunkieMurderer on September 24, 2008
    Such a delicious story. And it's all the more entertaining for James being unwilling-ly willing! *grins* I'm pleased you went with the "PH looks like James" theory (does this make it twincest?), instead of making him some twisted Gary Stu. THAT would be scary!

    All in all, I'm enjoying this fic, and I hope you'll keep at the erotic horror genre!
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  • From spawnstar on June 04, 2008
    WOW Chaos, I love your story! I read it twice now! It makes me want to play the games again ;). Are you going to continue it soon? Any chance you might write a Condemned story? Because I would LOVE to read your take on the whole inner demon thing ;) This is so well written, the dialog is fluid and believable, the sex is hot and I can even sense the mood of the game in you writing!! KUDOS!!
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  • From Rezny on April 29, 2008
    My God... Words cannot even begin to describe your accuracy and attribution to utmost detail. I was literally clinging on dearly to every word; my face was probably an inch away from my monitor as I read all seven chapters. I have sacrificed sleep over this since I have to get up early in the morning, but my God was it ever worth it. Congrats on writing the best Silent Hill fiction I have ever laid eyes on. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From AnnAnime on March 06, 2008
    OMG!!! You HAVE to continue this story PLEASE!! I beg of you!!!
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  • From PervyYaoiFancier on February 05, 2008
    OH MY GOD.

    OH. MY. GOD.

    This is the CREEPIEST f#*%@&* thing I've EVER read!

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

    I mean...this is amazing! It's astounding! It's VERY original!! AND IT'S DAMN CRAZY!!! I can tell you have a very deep love for Silent Hill. I do, too! I was so absorbed in this story! And the characters! HOLY CRAP!! Amazing! I totally felt for James, though I'd always just thought of him as a silly fool (kinda like Harry...murr...) with a one track mind! Here, he is total demon-bait!^_^ WHEE!! I mean, he's still James, but with more human qualities! He has more than Mary in his life! IT'S GREAT! I feel so bad for him! He doesn't stand a chance against ONE of them alone, let alone them double teaming him! I am very glad that this wasn't like the typical angry!rape/squick/tort fic that everyone cranks out. They have their purpose, but THIS overshadows them all! I adore your Valtiel and Pyramid Head, the sadisitc, yet shockingly gentle (and cute?) demonic rulers of Silent Hill are totally admirable! I love that they don't just want to hurt James, they want him to be one of them! And with James' tenacity and sense of Justice, he could be a very scary demon! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Hooray for demon flesh!!

    I can't wait for more!
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  • From KagetsuAsame on February 02, 2008
    I'm so happy to see you updated and absolutely can't wait for the next part, keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From Madhater on January 26, 2008
    Yay you updated I'm sooooooooo happy it was an awesome chapter to, and i almost gave up on ever seeing a update again. well it's good to see one. ^_^
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  • From Tazendra on January 22, 2008
    Yes!!! That was so worth the wait. There's just something about evil creatures, demons, monsters, whatever, that just makes me hot. That whole burning his skin off and growing a knew one was messed up but really neat at the same time. Oh, and way to leave us hanging at the end there. I eagerly await some Valtiel on James action! I know it will probably be a while before the next update but that's okay. I've been meaning to rewrite my one story I have up here and start another one for a long while now but I never seem to find the time.
    Anyway, I love your stories so rest assured that I will obsessively check this site for updates until the next chapter is up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2008
    im_unloved here.

    you blow me away.completely.

    oh,and instead of 'heat' you type 'head' somewhere.
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  • From roketto on January 21, 2008
    mm, i like. it's nice to see a story with valtiel in it.
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  • From RaveEchidna on January 20, 2008
    Wow finally how I have waited for the next chapter and you didn't let me down. It was...well I am not sure if I want a cold shower or a hot one to clean up everything afterwards. Its like the perfect slice of sin, so tasty and yet so wrong.
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