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By : Chaosdreamer

From on September 25, 2007
I *adore* this. It's incredibly drawing and horrifying like the game, and yet I can't look away. I love how you write the events and the city; so real! I like the characterization and the details, while terrifying, are really well done. Wonderful, wonderful work. I look forward to more of this level of awesomeness. ^.^ Good luck with upcoming chapters!
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From Udyjay on March 29, 2007
X3 ... Dood! That was hot! THEYNEEDTODOITALREADYYYYY. Whee! xD You're so freaking good at this, I swear. Updaaaaate, pweeeease? I never say pwease, so, that means I'm DESPARATE.
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From MegFallow on March 06, 2007
@ EssenticSage: lol, I didn't realize at first how funny my "concern" review sounded but know I do, lol that would be quite interesting but that I am sure is left to be decided for another story. And you should make your art I haven't seen alot of Adult Silent Hill artwork up here so that would be fun!

To the author: Seriously, don't keep us in suspence and maybe have Frank try to rescue his son or destroy the monsters! Weeee!
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From EccentricSage on March 06, 2007
Hey, I came across something on U-Tube that reminded me of your fic... It's a BuckTick music video called "You're my Disease" and Atsushi looks and acts exactly how you described Valtiel's human form. Thought you'd get a kick out of it. And of course, the sexyness. :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7wJNf7TD84&mode=related&search= Hope you update, soon! I'm almost done with the fanart I promised. :D
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From Liliath on February 10, 2007
hot o_o prolly too much but yay, a chapter 8333 update soon, I'll be waiting :D!
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From ixtab on February 09, 2007
Heheh, just re-reading because I'm injured and feel the urge for comfort fic...yes it's messed up that I find reading this comforting.
It's still awesome, and improves as I re-read it. I really, really like your Pyramid Head, a lot. I love the way he and Vatiel's voices are represented. They remind me of a more terrifying version of Death from Discworld! ;p

Well, I'm off to eat painkillers and icecream, but chances are I'll read this again before the day is out.
Thanks once more for writing it.
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From EccentricSage on February 09, 2007
"What is going to happen to James is he going to die? Are they still going to screw him hard!?! "

XD Hopefuly not in that order.... LMAO! Just wanted to mention a peice of fan art is on the way. ;) Keep writing. :D Keep inspiring my fan art. (and decidedly pervy fanart, but of course)
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From MegFallow on February 06, 2007
O.O

What is going to happen to James is he going to die? Are they still going to screw him hard!?! Please keep this up I can't stand the suspence I have to know what happens next!
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From maiafay376 on February 05, 2007
Yummy chapter, but you know why I like it so much...now, if you would only stop teasing...

Sorry it has taken so long to get over here and review...just been a bit busy. I like the sensuality of both Valtiel and PH...and I really liked it when Valtiel said "What the fuck is this?" It made me crack up, even though I know it wasn't meant as funny--but for some reason I just kept imagining his expression (if he had one.) when he said that. I would love a full out threesome...but I respect your plot and if that is impossible to inject...then I'll just have to accept that. LOL. Anyway, wonder how James is going to get out of this mess, and I also wonder if Frank will save the day. For some reason, I really like Frank. Hmm, maybe because he reminds me of my grandpa a little...could be.
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From ixtab on February 01, 2007
Chapter six is everything I'd been waiting for, and more. It's wonderful, frankly.
Poor, beautiful, tortured James. He's so pretty when he suffers.

I really enjoy the voices that you give Vatiel and Pyramid Head. They work perfectly within the characters.

Looking forward to more!
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From KagetsuAsame on January 31, 2007
I was so happy to see that you updated. Wonderful, I can't wait for the next part, to see what's going to happen next. Keep it up!
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From EccentricSage on January 30, 2007
Great chapter! The atmosphere and sensations were very well described and painted a vivid picture. Only bad thing was the description of the positions various limbs were in and various manuvers between Val and James were confusing at times. But it was still pretty well written.

I find it all very interesting. PH and Val can be so cruel, yet so likable. It's interesting to see the moments of tenderness or concern that arise so subtley in them despite their tormenting James and the things they say about torture. (I realy like Val's bouts of poetry) I'm realy curious about what exactly they feal reguarding James. Val seems to have romantic interest in James though he pretty much denied it when he told PH he's just as soon fuck him as James. I'm interested in seeing how you will explore the complexities of the interplay of their demonic nature and any fealings they have for James. Clearly there's more there than pure lust. PH and Val clearly seem to have a friendship, or else how would they get along despite diferences.... such as when Val branded James. And Val certainly has seemed concerned with James' welfare when he held James too warm and still him, and when he worried aloud about the transformation's toll on James. I can't wait to see diologue between them again.... and see where that goes. And I'm still waiting for the sex. lol Leading us on like that! Shame on you! :p

The overall concept raises questions, too. Sounds like you have a lot more planed than a slash fic, what with the discussion of 'god' and 'paradise' between PH and Val. Sounds like this transformation poor James is undergoing is only the begining of a bigger plot... am I right?

Man, I sure feal sorry for James... even moreso since he didn't do anything to diserve such suffering. Poor guy. I hope he finds some comfort after the transformation is complete. And I hope Val and PH take some pitty on the poor soul. 0_o
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From Devilkitty on January 29, 2007
...i love you XD.
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From MegFallow on January 27, 2007
Once again, this story is awesome and I wish you would add more chapters to it, I like how Frank becomes protective of his son once the creepy phonecalls start coming in and leads me to believe that maybe Frank knows more about Pyramid Head, Silent Hill, and Vatiel a bit more than he lets on to James; which leads me to suspect that part where he calls James as a "missing person" as if it was his only way to protect James somehow.

Also I can't wait to see which one will molest James I like how you are using the theory of James creating the monsters from his own guilt like some suggest in the SH2 game. And yet you do it in a very unique way. Great job!

I look foreward to more updates on the chapter very soon.
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From EccentricSage on January 20, 2007
Hello! It's funny, I never got to play SH, only saw someone else playing it, AND I didn't see the movie.... but here I am, absolutely loving this fic. (did do some research so I understand concept & characters) Valtiel is a facinating character from what I learned of SH3...mysterious and intriguing. I love what you are doing with the concept. I especialy like how his human apearance he takes on is still rather creepy. To be honest, I'm not sure wich form I find sexier...'human' Val or inhuman Valtiel. I'm realy looking forward to what happens next.

I'd also like to specificaly congratulate you on that bit of diologue where Valtiel talks about his disguest for humanity.... That was fantastic! You realy give a good reson for these beings to be so rough and at-odds with humanity. Best of all it's too true.... I used to frequent OccultForums and it amazed me how people of all paths would talk about gods, daemons, and angels as though they were merely a means to an end... "oh, wich godess do you use" asks a Wiccan. It's no wonder the 'gods' of old nearly left us behind. 0_o And then there's the summoning and binding bit that so many daemons are subjected to, yet they are forever labeled 'evil' in most people's eyes. Boy oh boy are there going to be a lot of occultists finding their own personal 'Silent Hill' when they reach the other side of that vale! I think that's the best thing about your writing...the denizens of your Silent Hill aren't evil villains, they are just a diferent race than humanity and are sick of human hypocracy. Simply looking to further their own goals just as humans always have. Briliant and refreshing! ^-^

Please update soon. I'm already thinking about fan art based on this. ^-^ (You can find some of my work at FanArtCentral under the same name I use here. ;)
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