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Reviews for Tomb Raider: The Fat Man Chronicles

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From ANON - Jubilee on October 07, 2007
    That was great ! More !
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  • From JackRetsevrah on September 08, 2007
    Damn, chapter 7 is hot. Nice to see Lara fighting back, not that it did her much good, lol. I wonder what depravity Gordo will come up with next. Keep up the good work, looking forward to updates.
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  • From ANON - Callahan on September 04, 2007
    Very good stuff. Although I, in my own way like the pliant Lara, it was very good indeed.

    I look foward to see the continuation, and the one of the legends as well. You can count me as a heavy hitter, here o/
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  • From zyid on September 03, 2007
    looking forward to more, hope you do that Transformers fic. good luck finding time.
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  • From ANON - SoloLogo on August 02, 2007
    The sexual parts was really hot, and I liked what you've done with the characters. But I feel so sorry for Laura, I hope there's some sort of happy ending. At any rate keep the excellent work.
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  • From on July 22, 2007
    Hi Nice story, but the reason I am writting here is thatyou have offered the author off the "education" sorrt (Final fantasy section, to continue his story, it seems the writer has given up on the story. It would be great if you could pick up on it. I'd be glad to help in anyway I can.

    My e-mail is iceboy_16_3@hotmail.com drop me a mail and we can discuss this further.

    P.S. I will post thsi as review on every story you have up, increases the chance of you actually getting the message ^^
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  • From ANON - Callahan on July 20, 2007
    Even though I have been an active person in this website for almost an year now, this is the first time I review, reflection of how I liked your fiction. I looked at the original one, and damn, you are good. Very well written, and very comprehensible, since english is not my first language. The twists you add between the lines are beyond excellence, and I give you my congratulations.

    Now get your ASS back into the chair and write that next chapter

    Cheers, and success, dude o/

    Callahan
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  • From omegajoe2 on July 06, 2007
    ya know, I don't like pain, D/s, rape, etc. for some reason though, I do like this story. Please continue.
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  • From JackRetsevrah on July 02, 2007
    When I got to the part with Gordo smacking the dildo in, I thought, man this is sick, twisted, perverted and disgusting. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 02, 2007
    This series is everything that a dark noncon, BDSM fic should aspire to be- gripping and exciting in a sick, twisted, wrong way.
    I simply cannot wait for future installments.
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  • From Chibes on June 10, 2007
    Well the name Gordo might work...if you are fixed on the fat man mentality its the perfect name it means fat in Spanish...just a thought
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  • From ANON - kyte on May 31, 2007
    That was dirty, wrong, and somewhat sick. I loved it! Story was awesome. But, I think the fat man got Lara pregnant. He never gave her the morning after pills. Lol!
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  • From ANON - Syndrome on May 16, 2007
    I ussually dont review but since you I asked I will. I have to say Its good to see someone continuing the story. Keep up the good work. I cant help but wonder if Lara will eventually enjoy the things that she endures.
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  • From ninesenshi on April 30, 2007
    Hi,
    I liked this story, although it seems to have come to an end. I was hoping Lara would be kept by the guard as his plaything (he smuggles her home) and that she would end up pregnant.
    Maybe she goes after him for revenge and ends up getting caught by him. I would definately like to see some sex with a very pregnant Lara.
    The story was well-written, fun. Hope to see more from you.
    SailorNemesis

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  • From JackRetsevrah on April 03, 2007
    Second part was even better. Excellent work, as usual.
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