Click Here!

Reviews for A Change Of Tactics

By : JLDavenport
  • From Mega on November 07, 2015
    Well, a month now... I still hold the hope it's just RL delaying this.
    Report Review

  • From Cedricus on October 07, 2015
    Might want to go over the chapter one more time(noticed a few misspellings you might want to fix and a few spaces that are missing).

    I actually went and re-read Gaius and Maribelle's support to remind myself how they get together in the normal game. Strangely enough her father is mentioned in that one too.

    The age of the royal siblings always interested me because IIRC Emm became queen really young at 9 and had the throne until she "died" at 24 or 25. IIRC Emm is supposed to be 6 years older than Chrom and Lissa is 4 years younger than her older brother.

    Hype for the shy dancer!



    (つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ FNATIC TAKE MY ENERGY! ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ)
    Report Review

  • From ToggleSwitch on October 06, 2015
    I was curious to see what would happen when it came to possible pre-existing relationships for the other girls, so this adds a complex layer to the story.
    Report Review

  • From Mega on October 06, 2015
    >I have literally zero sad Lucina scenes planned

    I'm preeeeeeeetty sure the reveal is going to hurt her at first. She cannot possibly take that well.

    Apart from that, great chapter. But I am hoping you don't have 'had sex with her before' flashbacks planned for every character. Tharja was a surprise and Lissa was unexpected yet understandable once we read how it happened, but it will get strange if you keep pulling it.

    Apart from that, great chapter. But Robin need to gather the courage to tell Lissa what is going on with himself as well now. Not like he could have told her that first with that backstory... But I doubt he'll find that easy either.

    And now next, Olivia. That will be fun to read.
    Report Review

  • From ToggleSwitch on September 20, 2015
    I don't mind these kinds of chapters, since they're necessary for further develop characters. Good to see that we're finally getting going with the meat of things, and I'm especially curious as to what happened with Lissa.
    Report Review

  • From Zeroshi12 on September 20, 2015
    For some reason, I feel like once it's Anna's turn, she's really gonna turn things around into a prostitution sort of thing. I can't imagine her NOT wanting some money after Robin thoroughly wrecks her insides out.

    Also, are you including Spotpass DLC Aversa? Cause I can imagine pseudo-sibling sex to be HOT. Especially if 'older sister' Aversa plays out things with 'younger brother' Robin.
    Report Review

  • From Cedricus on September 20, 2015
    Awww, Morgan is so adorable and nice! Did notice she went against what her father told her and asked her mother about when she was going to marry Robin which might come back to bite her.

    I feel bad for Lucina...

    Robin seems to love the large tracts of land Tharja gave him. Will be interesting to see what other parts he enjoys with everyone else~

    @Mega: I tried to come up with the most fucked up thing I could think of based on in-game events for some on my list and Cynthia's map had her confused about who her father was so I went with her actually being right as a cruel bit of irony. In hindsight it doesn't fit with the fic's world at all so I would replace it with whatever(Justice Club shenanigans maybe?) if I could edit my old review.

    (Btw, there is a spot or two where Lucina's name is misspelled)
    Report Review

  • From Mega on September 19, 2015
    Funny how I posted just before you updated. And hey, work is work. RL will always take priority.

    Also, poor Lucina. The knife is being twisted and it won't be pretty when she'll learn the truth.

    As far as Olivia go, it was just a logical deduction. Would she ever do a suggestive (and possibly outright erotic later on) dance on her own? Not really. But with the suggested setup, then she can be convinced into doing so.

    Reading Cedricus's idea for Cynthia's father, I have no idea why he would even suggest such an event for Sumia. As far as I see her however, she's not going to be someone Robin will conquer early, given she's Lucina's sister. But manipulating her should not be that hard... And later on, sister threesome?

    As for Cherche... Robin will need to placate Minerva. Somehow. And now I have this funny idea in my head about Minerva being the one convincing Cherche to help (in a scenario when Robin told her his problem and she hasn't said yes yet), sensing what Robin has inside and going 'Obviously superior mate'.
    Report Review

  • From Mega on September 19, 2015
    Beena while since last update... Dunno if I should get worried.

    Apart from that, got an idea for Olivia you may like. I know Cedricus posted one, but it felt incomplete to me. She could see Robin about dancing... But instead, why not as to help her shyness? If she's embarrassed to do certain dances in public... Why not suggest doing even more embarrassing dances for someone in private? If she can get over her shame doing so, then surely she'll be able to do something easier for her, no?

    Or at least, that could be logic Robin would use for her to get started.
    Report Review

  • From Cedricus on September 08, 2015
    Awwww, Tharja actually lost her virginity to her crush!

    It actually just struck me that most of the girls that haven't had sex yet, aside from the mages and some others, probably lost their hymens riding their horses or pegasi during the war or before it while training. Cynthia might still have hers if riding a pegasus up in the sky isn't as rough as riding a horse at full speed on the ground.

    I somewhat wish there was a FEA online generator for making the portraits of custom Robins and the Second Generation children(since they have different hair colors depending on their fathers)so when characters are first introduced they could have a picture link as part of their description to make it easier for readers to "see" them in the story.
    Report Review

  • From Lord_Naruto on September 08, 2015
    I like howitzer wasn't Robin first time cheating on Lucina with Tharja. It really shows that you thought this storyline through and didn't just because pick Tharja because, duh, it's Tharja.
    Report Review

  • From ToggleSwitch on September 07, 2015
    This was a good length for a chapter; between this and the last one seem like an ideal page-count, since there's plenty of interesting story here. I'm looking forward to exactly how all this social engineering will be pulled off.
    Report Review

  • From Mega on September 07, 2015
    Surprising that Robin didn't do more with her breasts here... And I'm going to guess Tharja's idea of getting Noire ready will be hexes.

    Your previous comment on Nowi and Nah got me thinking, making me wonder how that would ever happen given how rational Nah is... Until I realized Nowi may also be one of the few that got what is going on with Robin. And then using logic on Nah turning her own rationality against her.

    It's going to be interesting at some point. Tharja right now knew what was going on, some others girls may be more willing if they also realised what is happening... But what happen once Robin's attention turn to people that have no idea and would never consider doing it with Robin? I believe that would be the next step into turning this darker.
    Report Review

  • From Mega on September 01, 2015
    Well, you made me create an account exactly so that I could review this. Good work.

    Anyway, this seems like a good intro so far. Having Robin stay in characterand still do it will be an interestign challenge too. But will you be able to write to the end is the question. After all, so many have good dieas but give up later on.

    As far as requests go... Well, I know one guy made a whole list of scenarios and such so it's a bit hard to add more to it right now. And I'm a big believer of plans having to change depending on circumstances.

    But I must say, as far as Morgan go... given whose daughter she is, I cannot see her taking forever before she start noticing some things. And given how devoted she is to him... Well, I'm sure it's not hard to imagine a scenario that has Robin both glad for such and still hate himself more.
    Report Review

  • From ToggleSwitch on August 30, 2015
    Well this is certainly an interesting concept, and I'm eager to see where this goes and how far it goes. I'm also interested in seeing how Lucina reacts to all of this, maybe develop some cuckquean tendencies, her getting off on the knowledge that Robin is sleeping with other women. Maybe even something with her mother or sister...
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!