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Reviews for Vergil remembers

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  • From ANON - Raven on May 03, 2005
    Wow, this was intense
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  • From ANON - Tony on May 03, 2005
    This is some great stuff! I was like, looking for some hot stories, and I found them, here! I got hard just reading this thing without even trying, its that good. Very descriptive, but not boring, its like being there, or something. Great work, keep it up, not that I'll need anything new for a while, but still, don't stop now!
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  • From ANON - Iesha on May 03, 2005
    WOW! This was an amazing chapter! It was so damn HOT!! I love the way you describe all the wonderful things that Vergil is doing to Lady, and the description is great , I love it when its really graphic like this - gets some great images in my head and reminds me of all the great things I'm getting...really gets my juices flowing, lol. Vergil is SO amazing, SO SEXY! I wanna get fucked like that, so hard that it makes me scream in ecstasy!
    Oh by the way Hamza, you don't just get the normal condoms from the NHS, you can also get the extra wide bigger ones, the narrower smaller ones (not that you'll ever need them), the sensitive ones for people with sensitive skin, as well as the ribbed ones! Quite a big variation, so you'll never get bored lol. There's also the ultra-strong ones, just in case you're getting a bit too rough!
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  • From ANON - Lori on April 30, 2005
    WOW! Holy shit! That was... amazing! *glomps*
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  • From Kayin on April 30, 2005
    Nice first chapter. As I've said before: your writing has incredible atmosphere. Onward...
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  • From ANON - BJ on April 29, 2005
    Not bad, Veronica! Though if he were really horny he should have blown his load inside her. *LOL* Hot stuff! *needs a cold shower*
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  • From ANON - Fyre on April 29, 2005
    [Right, now, the strongest theme I picked up in all three chapters read was a powerful blend of poetic phrasing and passionate description. I could feel a real emotional strength in those intimate parts, and others too. You have a knack for conveying the feeling of your fiction, that's for sure . The way in which the pleasure and lust is described with such desire and wanton bliss, how for example in the 2nd one Vergil's thoughts play over the coming act again and again, colouring it with poetic wording the same way the mind swims in the possibilities when faced itself with the same anticipation, and the way he savours and gorges on the sensation, even of merely pondering the deed. Its like a verbal reflection, no, embodiment, of the relentless hunger felt by the characters themselves. Its powerful, like the very thoughts running through your head captured so precisely, I can see you probably enjoyed writing these . there was some humour towards the start, good humour, it made me chuckle . All in all, poetic and powerful, that's as good a label as I can think of to sum it up.]


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  • From ANON - Simi on April 28, 2005
    If there's one thing I admire about your writing style, it's the fact that you allow a psychoanalysis at the same time as some action. Not only that but you keep Vergil in character all the time. It's amazing! Tell me when you update! XD
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  • From ANON - sonlyme on April 28, 2005
    Simply SIZZLING. *wipes sweat from brow*
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  • From ANON - Hamza on April 27, 2005
    Good God Almighty that chapter ruled! lol Some of the sentences make me cry with laughter like for e.g. 'his finger played with the soft tissue there and he chuckled wickedly' i do that except chuckle wickedly.....in fact i don't even chuckle lol.(again im talking about me doing this to my girlfriend, not me) oh & this bit ruled aswell 'Very slowly he pulled back, then rammed himself in again, nearly climaxing and after slow agonizing movements, discovered to his own surprise that he was about to spill his seed. He pulled out in time to pour hot white thick liquid on her perspired skin; baptizing her with his cum.' lol haha Damn thats hilarious! cool chapter, V!
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  • From ANON - Bhree on April 27, 2005
    You were right. The hottest one yet. XD Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Tango on April 27, 2005
    5555!!! I'm luaghing at Lady that she answer Vergil's question while they are xxxx, hehehe, well she like to curse on Verg, but in the end she.........with him, hahaha!!!

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  • From ANON - camerilla on April 27, 2005
    I'd kill him if I was lady. Heheh joking, of course not!! Steamy and HOT chapter that was........are you planning to have the next one?? I'm interested to see IF Vergil saw Dante fucked her......kinda jealous I guess....
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  • From ANON - sarahi on April 26, 2005
    damn!!! i think this is the best chapter yet!!! you know what i'm gonna say.......horny......=^^= i love it
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  • From ANON - Hamza on April 23, 2005
    “What? You want me to suck your cock, you sick son of a bitch?” lol hahaha why not?! lol 'He reached down to her hairless pussy, finding her wet as he inserted a finger inside.' yeh i like doin dat too lol (not to myself, to my girl, so dnt have any smart-ass ideas). cool chappie, V! :-D
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