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Reviews for Vergil remembers

By : PandoraMasters
  • From ANON - Hamza on April 23, 2005
    YES! YES! YES!!! They say 'Things comes to those who wait' & man, i've been one patient mutherfucker for my 'lameman's terms' chapter & i got it!!! Hahaha! I like the vivid descriptions of horizontal jogging, '"What he wanted right now was to feel a tight, hot pussy wrapped around his throbbing cock." He JUST wanted it THEN? lol...looks like i must be the only Randy Da Rooster then, huh? I like da bit where it says in the chapter, "Sometimes, she pants so hard against his ear and cries out in such abandon that he nearly spills his seed deep within her. He was normally careful not to get her pregnant. She refused to take any part in female contraception and Vergil pulled out in time, all the time." lol. Good, never get a bitch pregnant. She'll be on your ass with child support & shit (unless you're married). However why didn't he just wear a condom, which is da most fuckin sensible thing to do?! Don't tell me 'A demon who saves the day killing baddies' can't afford 3 fuckin £'s for a packet of durex's from da vending machines...better yet, he could get 'em from da NHS! They practically give 'em out free! (Although they would only be regular condoms..not da flavoured ones or ribbed ones) Anyways, cool chappie V! Make more like this!!

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  • From ANON - camerilla on April 23, 2005
    pls pls....pls pls continue........
    CLIFF HANGER~~~~~
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  • From ANON - Iesha on April 23, 2005
    What a great chapter! I love the part where Lady was undressing really slowly, taking her time, removing her soaking wet clothes, with the cold bottle placed across her chest - that was really turning me on lol. And with phrases like, "Ahhhh, that felt good" and "That would really hit the spot", it was great - what a wonderful image! So hot!! It was a very funny chapter as well. Vergil was extremly horny and sexy - "Since you’re already naked, why don’t I join you?" lol, I love that line. The ending was great, what a place to stop, just as they're getting to the really smutty part. It just leaves me begging for more!
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  • From ANON - Name on April 23, 2005
    Quite graphic. And an interesting read. Of course it would be interesting to see what she could do with other characters. Either self made ones or ones from another game/movie.
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  • From ANON - sonlyme on April 23, 2005
    what a place to stop!!!!!
    Hot. ;)
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  • From ANON - sarahi on April 23, 2005
    ah!! just like the other one!!! horny!!!!lol.....only you could do this =^^= very good!!!!more....more.....more...
    lol well bye bye!!

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  • From ANON - Bhree on April 22, 2005
    Hawt. Just hawt. Looking forward to the next one, so mean of you to leave us hanging like that. XD
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  • From ANON - Lori on April 22, 2005
    WHOA! Dang girl! You really made Lady a bad bad girl! And Vergil a horny prick, but all the more loveable. AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - camerilla on April 21, 2005
    That's wonderful!! Any more chapters to come?? Nice work, pls update.
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  • From ANON - sonlyme on April 20, 2005
    OMG. This was SO hot...I almost forgot about how well it was written. ;)
    (And it WAS well written).
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  • From ANON - sarahi on April 20, 2005
    damn!!! that is one of your bests chapters of any of the chapters of any of your stories!! it was getting me all horny..lol i loved it
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  • From ANON - sarahi on April 20, 2005
    oh!!!! sweet i love it i'm gonna go now and read the other chap. bye bye!!=^^=
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  • From ANON - Iesha on April 20, 2005
    WOW! I dont know what to say, that was just absolutely breathtaking! So amazing! One of the hottest, most erotic chapters I've ever read. And the description of the sex was so fucking hot!!! Man, I'd love to be fucked like that - so hard and so fast with 'pure unadulterated lust'. This chapter is so raunchy and sexy. Just reading it is making me so hot, thinking of a big, hard, throbbing cock thrusting up and down...oooooh!
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  • From ANON - Simi on April 19, 2005
    Whoohoo! Used my real name to review for once. Since I don't have an account here I guess it doesn't really matter if I do or if I don't. Anyway, the descriptions are really vivid here; it's good. I always felt that on ff.net, you had to be so restrained in your writing, in order not to break any rules. But over here? I think it's better because you can really let yourself be free in your creativeness and in the use of descriptions. I think that this really really is shown in the way you wrote this chapr. Hope to see more soon.

    Until then.
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  • From ANON - Some dude on April 18, 2005
    Very interesting story...if one were female. Just a bit too much male descriptives for me to deal with. :P If perhaps a few female ones were thrown in to balance it...then it would be fun for the whole family.
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