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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho
  • From ANON - scalon on March 19, 2009
    Oboy...could we be seeing the possibility that Ryu Hayabusa might be getting another "brother" soon? I could almost see "Dragon Lord Ryu" being the counter to "Lady X" and who knows...could it awaken her humanity? And might Lady X have responded that being with Ryu felt like being...human again?

    Could the possibility that Beta-117 might make a return appearance when he feels his connection with Ryu Hayabusa split again as a third is formed? And Alpha-152 help Lady X regain her humanity? Or better yet...do something magical like replace the metal with flesh? Such be the power of awakened love to restore humanity, like it had with Yasha/Benikage.
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  • From ANON - mogrox on March 19, 2009
    "Ryu extricated himself from the android and watched with an almost longing look in his eyes as Lady X walked back to the lift she had appeared on."

    ROFL How do you come up with this stuff? This is hilariously amazing. Good chapter again.

    Don't know if you already have things planned in advance but how about an impromptu tag match between Kasumi & Tina vs Reiko & Dixie? Kasumi finally tracks down her man and instead of having Ryu fight a doubles match, she and Tina improvise, leaving a befuddled Ryu speechless as he's forced to the sidelines as a spectator for a change.
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  • From elegyenigma on February 06, 2009
    As many chapters as this fic is made up of, it should have far more reviews than the relatively paltry 101 it has. 102, if you count my own now. This is smut-work at some of its finest, and truly shows a level of literate dedication unseen in many fic-writers who do spend about five minutes on a sex scene and thirty minutes writing out how perfect their OC is.

    I am truly impressed at the level of detail in this fic. It has helped give me inspiration to continue some of my own works...inspiration I've been in desperate need of for quite some time. I've only been able to focus on one thing at a time.

    Sadly, that one thing tends to my job and the maintenance of simply living a low-income, no safety-net life.

    Keep on truckin', yo. Your writing is some pretty boss stuff.
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  • From ANON - Cygnus on January 15, 2009
    Awesome story and very good sex scenes. The crossover with Rumble Roses is a great addition to the series of chapters. I wonder if Ryu will have some with girls from both franchises at the same time (like Benikage and Ayane, for example). Maybe others will come to love good Hayabusa.
    Keep the good writing and intense scenes.
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  • From ANON - scalon on January 10, 2009
    It looks like Tina's got a "plan of conquest": to first win over the musical rivals by using her Dragon Ninja to subdue them sexually. First Candy Cane, now Aisha...who's next, Reiko Hinamoto, Noble Rose or Makoto Aihara (trying to remember which Roses could sing right off-hand)?

    And of course, the video rights to the orgy of Aisha and her two sisters with Ryu Hayabusa would make Tina nice and wealthy--but she needs to share her post-tax profit with Kasumi, Ayane and Rachel--no sense in wearing Ryu out and making sure his main ladies weren't taken care of, yes?;P

    And that almost begs a question--would Hayabusa have made any of the Roses cum so hard/so much that they'd want to have his baby? (Kasumi and Helena each gave Ryu a child, Ayane wants to, and possibly Rachel too)

    Meaning Hayabusa's getting plenty of action, a lot of female fans, and a few Rumble Roses wanting to be a "Ninja's Rose" too--for those who Hayabusa seduced in the ring, would they wear a arm-band/t-shirt that might have a dragon entwined around a rose, a way of saying they're a "Dragon's Rose" now?
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  • From ANON - Ben on January 09, 2009
    Ok first to commend on the great story you are writing, it is a great tale of erotic expressions and adventure!!!

    I'm more of a Rumble Roses fan but i'm also familiar with the DOA characters and both Dead or alive and ninja Gaiden games. Now the sex itself is wonderfully written but i believe you should add more wrestling moves during the sex matches.

    How about a tag team match between Candy Cane/Miss Spencer and Tina/Lisa with the clown Sebastian and Ryu Hayabusa at ringside. They could use the humiliation moves and the guys enter the ring to fuck them. Imagine Tina trapped in Candy's Raflesia and while she's spread the clown enters to have sex with her or Lisa locked in the teacher's pet. The same thing goes in reverse with made up humiliation moves for the doa girls.

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  • From sargechris on January 07, 2009
    good start on a new saga. could you show a part on whats been happening with ayane and rachel?
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  • From ANON - KiteySs on January 01, 2009
    I had my doubts about a sexfight-saga. In my experience sex-fights stories usualy just turn into standard smut. But somehow you're managed to do it in a way thats fresh, intense and interesting, while still keeping setting deeply in mind. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From MandyRose on December 29, 2008
    Wow! This is just such an awesome, well written story! I do not own the games, but my boyfriend does, and I guess I am kinda familiar with the characters... but anyway, this is great stuff! The sex scenes are well written, and a real pleasure to read!
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  • From ANON - scalon on December 28, 2008
    Round 1 pitted the Heel-y Candy Cane against Dragon Ninja (and she got a BIG surprise out of what his classic blue garb hid). I guess that Ryu was "too much business" as he got her off hard too soon, but not always a bad thing. Of course, Tina got "her licks in" too.

    So now Ryu's going to have to pace himself better--I hope he learned from Tina's "training sessions" where he can improve his control better too.

    Might the next one up be Miss Spencer wanting to avenge her charge's loss, or Mistress Spencer wanting to punish the one who "took her Candy"?

    Or Bloody Shadow/Judgement, wanting to render some judgement on this male ninja interloper?
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  • From ANON - Small Ninja on December 28, 2008
    Another great chapter, I especially liked the ending when Tina lifted Candy Cane on her shoulders. And the follow ups from chapter to chapter in the whole series are simply amazing
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2008
    Great chapter. I wish you did more with the Killer Bambies, though. Maybe Ryu could have his way with them backstage before his next match?
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  • From ANON - zerorux on December 27, 2008
    *claps hands*

    lmao Tina and Ryu both passed out and had to be hospitalized for a month! Great chapter; you hit all the right notes, especially with how you scripted the sex scenes rather well with all three (or 6) participants.
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  • From ANON - scalon on December 17, 2008
    You said you neglected to give Helena's son with Ryu a name--how about if you give the "Soul Calibur" name as an alias he goes by when fighting, and give him another name that's his real name? That way what we suggested earlier might work.
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  • From Magnus on December 11, 2008
    I think this is going to be the same result as their first meeting; Tina will win. That is only a guess, but knowing how lucky Ryu is, I think he will end up losing to Tina. Wonder if Hayete will get pulled in by Lisa into this?
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