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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho

From Kitekun on December 06, 2008
Damn you are awesome. You've found a way to bring a huge amount of life back into an already epic story. Now I really really can't wait for the next chapter. Ryu is one lucky bastard.
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From ANON - Small Ninja on December 01, 2008
Truly a written masterpiece Tycho, you've really captured and combined the essence of storytelling and sex perfectly. I kinda find the beta build obvious and bland compared to the other parts of the story but it is great anyway.

On to the next item i really find your chapters with Tina to be the best, probably because she is the best sexually described character in the game and i hope Tina and Lisa switch to main female status due to the change of the theme to wrestling and i hope you include female vs female action, not just Ryu. Personally i would like to request Candy Cane vs Tina due to both being rockstars, if it goes well with the story of course. The matches should also include humiliation moves like in rumble roses.

And about the storyline i have no doubts that you will have no problem in having the same status as the rest of the Koibito!!!
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From ANON - scalon on November 30, 2008
Okay, NOW we're getting really kinky:P

The thing is, how are you going to do this, Tycho? One thought: Have the "Heel Roses" face off against Hayabusa, and he takes them in the ring. After they cum and cum, Hayabusa takes them out of the ring, to where their "face" sides want some ninja loving too.

During this time, we could find the girls have trouble flipping the "heel/face" switches continuously, so Hayabusa helps them find a totally-neutral self for outside the ring), and one for the private bedroom (this one could be a merged one who enjoys the sex and in this form both heel and face feel it).

Three questions though:

1) Will there be a "time trial" like before near the end? (Going through the whole gamut of Rumble Roses in an hour: you come before then, you LOSE)

2) Will they be "kayfabe" (known in wrestling speak as "in character") always or will there be a time they'll be themselves, neither face or heel, once they're in private?

3) How will Hayabusa get the girl to signify he's won (maybe wear a special golden choker collar he places around her neck--one with the raised form of a Dragon on it)? The more he's beaten (and won their hearts in the meantime) the more they'll aid him in keeping the matches fair (say like keeping Mistress Spencer's or Anesthesia's/Dr. Cutter's boy-toys out of action so Hayabusa can concentrate on their female handler). We could always have a silhouette of Hayabusa preparing for battle and before he puts his hood on, Tina or one of the other girls he's beaten/won over can give him a pep talk and a deep kiss for luck. One almost wonders if The Black Belt Geisha and the Princess of Wolves (the heel forms of Makoto Aihara and Aigle) would be wicked forms of Hitomi and Leifang:P
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From ANON - NinjaGaijin on November 29, 2008
Rumble Roses crossover? Interesting! Looking forward to the next chapters.
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From ANON - zerorux on November 29, 2008
lol You've finally done it! A true to goodness Rumble Roses crossover on the way! Can't wait to see what you have in mind for that contest. I just hope Ryu's contenders include Benikage/Yasha.

Speaking of women comparing notes on the men's prowess, the last time you left Elliot & Hitomi alone with Jann Lee & Leifang going about their business a room. Seeing as how their women are already more than friends, I was wondering if you're open to the idea of writing a non-yaoi foursome? That's one way to completely let bygones be bygones and have Elliot be treated as Jann Lee's equal since Elliot already had his way with both Hitomi and Leifang at the same time.
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From ANON - Pwedge on October 28, 2008
Wow what can I say, this fic is what got me into AFF when it was only the encounter saga. Then as it progressed, also got me into the Ninja Gaiden games. 34 chapters and I still haven't had enough. Please keep writing! Can't wait to see what else you've got in store
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From Magnus on October 17, 2008
I like this story, but it seems Ryu is losing more and more women to other guys. I know Rachel asked Lisa this early, but who are the best men in the story in Bed. I know Ryu is probably the number one though, but with the exception of Ryu and Hayete, none of the others have been compared.
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From sargechris on October 04, 2008
so you do plan on making more chapters or is it done for now? couse i want to see how ayane gets along with rachel since they partner up lol
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From ANON - Hoju on September 13, 2008
Amazing work, don't stop the music!
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From ANON - scalon on July 18, 2008
You just can't keep a determined pair of clones down, heh...that was very interesting, where they needed their originals for which to learn about love. Linking with Ryu and Kasumi, Beta and Alpha became more than male and female.

And Kokoro decides she'll stand by Helena while Christie and Helena decide their love-hate relationship needs them both to be together.

Rachel tossed her chips in with Kasumi and Ayane, and all's well with Hayabusa once more:)

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From TheTygre on June 23, 2008
On a final note, what are you going to do about Ninja Gaiden 2 and its release?
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From ANON - The Tygre on June 23, 2008
Let me start by saying:

Wow. Simply wonderful. I have to applaud you my good sir on what you have accomplished here today. Perusing these unhallowed, carnal pages of AFF.net, I am loathe to admit that I have lowered my standards to accommodate simple and every day smut. But you have gone beyond that. You have crafted a masterpiece, worthy of praise for its sheer girth.

But I feel I must give you my congratulations on a greater matter. It is rare that I find I read here for plot rather than the erotica. You have accomplished a truly titanic trial: you have made it so that I want to know what happens next. Not out of some sense of perversity, not out of some vivacious curiosity that demands lo-brau satisfaction, but out of honest wanting to know the end of the story. Congratulations! Congratulations! Congratulations! Congratu-

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Sorry, I think I just had an Evangelion acid trip there.

Personally, man to man, I was rather fond of...

AGH! OH GOD! IT'S HAPPENING! RUN! RUN! IF YOU VALUE YOUR LIFE, RUN! I CAN'T HOLD IT BACK! THE DAEMON IS UNLEASHED!

hihi!!! UR GONNA WRITE MORE RITE?!!! taht is so KEWL!! you sould change the endin!!! ur da best! --ME!!!!!!

Damn you! Back! Back to the City of Seven Sins where you belong!

Ahem.

Sorry about that. I'm sure you understand that we all have inner demons. I have an inner l33t speaking review writer. It is a vile and loathsome creature. Pity it. Pity the world if I lose control of it.

Now, as I was saying, you are truly worthy of commendation in that you accomplished a rare and wondrous thing. Speaking bluntly, most material at AFF.net is erotica based on pre-conceived plot. You have formed a plot, nay, an epic, around erotica. That's going to be hard to beat.

I must ask though, in all seriousness, about an ending. Just how exactly is this little menagie trois between Ryu, Ayune, and Kasumi going to work in the future? I mean, yes they are young now and can afford such dalliances, but what about when a family comes in? What about the rest of life beyond this youth? And unpleasant thing to consider, but something you might want to consider when you feel the need to close the black curtain, if you catch me.

Rest assured though, when I conquer the known multiverse as Ravanna and rest in my palace on the Plane of War, I shall be sure to promote you as head erotic scribe.

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From ANON - SilentNinja on June 18, 2008
My favorite couple! Well written and descriptive base solely on two individuals sharing the same conscience. Ryu's world is darker had Helena felt his loneliness compare to hers, they would not have something in common....

Too bad, the other DOA ladies(Mostly the kunochi girls...) will be extremely jealous. Ryu and Helena must keep their relationship a secret. Heres hoping for more intimate relationship with them.
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From ANON - scalon on June 12, 2008
Stand corrected...Joseph Fame Douglas would be best (in the DOA/NG continuum, Joe, not Ken, was the name of Ryu's father), and nobody would be the wiser.
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From ANON - scalon on June 12, 2008
As for naming the little boy...Kenneth "Ken" Fame Douglas comes to mind...:)
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