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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho
  • From ANON - scalon on June 10, 2008
    And Ryu finds the second of his blood in the most recent chapter:) Helena asked Ryu to give her a heir, and he did so. And while others might believe Helena's son sired by nobility, she knows he was made from love of a far more noble and honorable man above the ones nobility can ever bring.

    He then gets to reaffirm his love for Helena, who knows if another child might come (an "oops baby")?



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  • From play2dabone on June 07, 2008
    I notcied that you covered all 10 most important females and dedicated a chapter to each of them with the exception of Kasumi,Ayane and Rachel who shared one and Hitomi who still hasn't gotten her own chapter in the Beat Build series. It's pretty much safe to say Ayane,Kausmi and Rachel won't get one chapter each at this point correct? You'll see to it that gets taken care of it right? Christie and Helena don't appear to have a man to take care of all of their needs like the others do. Tina and Lisa have each other. Who's the lord that gets to pretend that he's the daddy.

    Apprently Helena wasn't confortable having Kokoro take over her father's company and so she and Ryu had a baby though it's for a good cause and possibly something they both desired. How much longer before this fic comes to a satisfying conclusion?
    Leon,Hayate and Bayman don't have permanant female lovers but at the very least they're getting some.

    Now with Ninja Gaiden II finally out will you be doing anythign with that? If you could may I suggest Hayate hooking up with Sonia.

    Peace

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  • From ANON - scalondragon on May 23, 2008
    The more I see of this, the more I enjoy it:)

    The Expansion Pack was Eliot's "coming of age" as he tries to get out of the dojo and into the world. His quest by Zack to find Ryu Hayabusa and pick his brain shows how far he's willing to go to do it. And the adventures along the way enrich him.

    The Beta Build was a great chance for a lot of the women to get a second man in their lives besides Ryu. Lisa finally got to show her feelings for Hayate, Leifang got to resolve hers towards Jann Lee, Christie found Bayman to be from her own style, and Kokoro enjoys the randy company of Brad Wong.

    It also developed Rachel some more as she decides she wants in on Hayabusa...and the hentai world he's part of. First by jumping him in Vigoor, then by tossing in with the ninja sisters at the oasis.

    One does wonder what the reunion with those three with Hayabusa would be like...and that "someone we both should see" Christie mentions to him too.

    Scalon
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  • From play2dabone on April 08, 2008
    Not exactlt what I was hoping for,but good enough. So Rachel has nwo been invited and accepted into Ryu's personal harem. Just two questions. Are you going to wrap up this massive beast of a story in the next chapter or do you still have plans on extending this? Have you checked put Ninja Gaiden Dragon Sword yet? Ryu gets a female portegge named Momoji who happens to be the sister of Kurena. And recenty annoucned in NG2 a girl named Sonia was revealed.

    Who happens to be blonde. So much for getting over Rachel.

    Great story and I can't to hear how's Hayabusa-sama is going to react.
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  • From sargechris on April 08, 2008
    good job on the story but can you have rachel have sex with ayane or Helena have sex with ayane?
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  • From ANON - Leokun on March 12, 2008
    An amazing piece of work. Never have I read a story on this site or any other fancition archive that has gotten me so immersed. Perfect combination of action, story and sex, all of which are highly entertaining and superbly written.

    Sex scenes are tasteful and creative, not to mention extremely erotic, the multiple pairings each character is involved in adds to the hilarity and casual nature of the sex.

    You sir, are a genius, when a fic is this good even 31 chapters just isnt enough. I certainly look forward to seeing more, XD
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  • From play2dabone on March 06, 2008
    What's going to happen to Leon and Helena? Is Helena still doign it with Christie secretly liek what happened with Hitomi and Lei Fang despite them both having boyfriends.
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  • From play2dabone on March 06, 2008
    Another fien chapter of lemoness completed. Kokoro and Brad has to be one of the strangest DOA pairings I have seen and trust em I have seen quite some that deserve the WTF? It was about time Ryu showed those two jacksass clones who's the real boss around these parts.

    As the old saying goes it always the shy ones. A gesiha is anything but innocent. Yeah for public sex. Update very soon
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  • From ANON - Alive and kicking Lover on February 23, 2008
    How many more chapters will this be? Is it almsot done? So now Kokoro and Brad are a couple. No complains there. I think if I am corret everyone has been paired up with someone. This is indeed the best lemon stroy that contains avery excellent plot with it.
    I am surpirsed Ryu was able to contain hismelf knowign that he had previously fucked Hitmoi and Lei Fang.

    I am assuming the next chapter will have him making up with Ayane and Kasumi right. Please let it be the case. Are there any plans oof makign an orgy witht he couples. I priase you and hope you will update very soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2007
    I could totaly see a Kasumi/Ayane vs Tina for a grand finale, power vs speed, which the kunoichis should win of course

    And Tycho i must urge you to end the story since the main characters have played their part and draging the story longer could lead it to becoming really cheesy

    As i said you should end it with a sex battle where Kasumi and Ayane defeat Tina to end the story with a conclusion point

    Any further character development can be done in a seperate story, for example you mentioned Tina/Lisa relationship. I think that would be great for a couple of chapters

    Anyway, plot,theme,characters,setting, you describe everything like it should be so naturally you're a great writer
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  • From ANON - zerorux on December 01, 2007
    Great to see that you continued your amazing story. That last chapter pairing Christie with Bayman was a surprise mostly because the only thing that stands out that they have in common is their profession. Now about the "wealth distribution" that Scalon referred to, I understand the reasoning for it but it would've been amazing if you could 1 last orgy sequence with all of the girls & Hayabusa (like an extended version of chapter 8 with all of them in the hut).

    So then we have Kokoro, Brad, Helena(whatever happened to her "pregnancy"?), Leon(French and still in love with Roland)... I wonder what you can do with them.

    Tina - Any chance you could match her prowess against Ryu's remaining harem (Kasumi, Ayane, and now Rachel) considering her fabled weeklong escapade with our hero OR maybe just have a threesome with her and the 2 ninja sisters with Ryu stumbling upon them in surprise?


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  • From ANON - KasumiAyaneFan on November 30, 2007
    Best Dead or alive lemon I have ever seen. You gotta continue with this woudnerful peice of art.
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  • From ANON - DOA Pimp on November 30, 2007
    Stellar job there. It´s a nice and sweet thing you branced off and let the the other DOA women get paired up with the males. Ryu might as well form a small harem since I doubt Rachael will let him be anymore after eing fucked soo good in the alley. Who is up next Tina or maybe Kokoro. In the future how about you do a foursome with Ryu,Kasumi,Ayane and Rachael. Regarding this chapter that is quite a kink having sex out in public.
    You keep up with those lemon filled chapters. I also love the story this lemon has.

    Peace otu and update


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  • From ANON - koolio on November 24, 2007
    I wanna see more Eliot/Hitomi action please, kudasai
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  • From ANON - Scalon on November 05, 2007
    Tycho,

    Looks like the "Beta Build" chapters are "share the sexual wealth" ones where other guys, like Hayate with Lisa and Jann Lee with Leifang get to enjoy the sexual blessings Ryu Hayabusa had been given. (Eliot had already shown true love to Hitomi.) Which is fair, since even if you fortify a superninja sexually, he's gonna be stretched pretty thin:P (When the last part of the "End Game" chapter was wrapping up, the girls looked hungrily at Ryu and in their minds, the words "Charge!" and "Banzai!" came to mind as they went on him. Oh to have been in Ryu's shoes:P)

    Scalon
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