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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho
  • From Simmerl on October 19, 2007
    needs moar Helena/Christie or Kasumi/Ayane :D
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  • From darkjubei on October 16, 2007
    Hey wow, never expected to find a story with one man going around sleeping with several women a good read but yours has pleasantly surprised me! It's very well researched, you've got a good feel for the characters - and Ryu sounds like a great lover which I'm happy about since I quite like him *wink*...
    And as for your little blurb at the end of the first chapter (I do intend to read more in time don't worry ^^) I completely agree with everything, so many fanfictions (including mine I'm ashamed to say, though I intend to change this shortly) do start a sex scene with some sort of fellatio or the like, and that does become rather dull and demeaning in a way so thank you so much for expressing these things so eloquently! Great work, you've done well!
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  • From ANON - jdogg on October 11, 2007
    ddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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  • From ANON - Scalon on August 18, 2007
    Tycho,

    It looks like La Mariposa got make amends to Hayate after all;P

    And for Hayate, it was none too soon--the matings of his sisters and Hayabusa would drive a man mad if he knew he couldn't have anything like that. Looks like some fair play came at the right time. The better to start the healing for a man who has a baby niece and a brother-in-law (has Hayabusa sprung for a ring for Kasumi, or is he going to get matching ones for her and Ayane?).

    And Lisa gets to put her second recorded "ninja mark" on her scoreboard;P

    Scalon
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  • From ANON - z on August 17, 2007
    28 kinda makes sense since Lisa was 1st introduced in DOAXBV as a classy office lady. Making her a former emloyee of DOATEC works. Can we count on Ryu running across Tina since Hayate x Lisa already happened?
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  • From ANON - Yoyo on August 17, 2007
    UPDATE FASTER, DAMMIT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2007
    Are you going to do some kind of foursome next chapter with Ryu, Hayate, Lisa, and Rachel? Or at least another sex scene involving Hayate and Lisa?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 03, 2007
    Great story! The sex was very...provocative, I must say >.> anyway, what you really need to do is finish up that hox scene with Rachel and Tina. It sounded like it would make quite a story.
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  • From Rockreaper on June 28, 2007
    Awesome story. I love the inclusion of Ryu.
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  • From ANON - Val on June 26, 2007
    That comment was about Hitomi and Lei Fang, by the by.

    And whoever is whining about "the lack of oral sex ruining it" do shut it. If you want oral sex read pretty much any other fic on this site. Most of these encounters seem to be about the women getting what they want in return for something. Most women don't get as much out of sucking a dick as you'd like to think. God forbid one story doesn't dwell on that one sex act. I think that the fact that the author doesn't need to rely on using blowjobs to make the story erotic is a real positive.
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  • From ANON - Val on June 26, 2007
    The only "lesbian tendencies" I've heard of occurred in the volleyball game, which was basically a wet dream of one of the male characters. The games that aren't dream sequences and fit into the storyline imply heterosexuality. Sorry, fanboys.
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  • From ANON - Scalon on June 21, 2007
    Elliot's grown quite a bit, having become Hitomi's love, and having shown the other women he's no kid anymore, but a young man wanting to come into his own. With Ryu's help, he does so (and gives enough so Zack isn't left out either).

    In the latest chapter, we see Ryu Hayabusa showing his love for both sisters, but we also see him grow as a man when the birth of Taki makes him a father. Here we see his warmth for his new little girl.

    When Hayate comes to give him the news of Alpha and Beta's "road rampage" Ryu knows more about Kasumi's anguish about Alpha's existence.

    When Rachel returns to help the two super-ninjas fight the fiends, Ryu takes more an appreciation of her. Almost like the "Ninja Gaiden Sigma" for the PS3.

    Finally when the feral lust overcomes Rachel and she wants Ryu, he does not make the mistake of denying her. (Earlier it was because he didn't want to force himself on her, here she knows what she wants and won't take "no" for an answer.)

    It does bear a few questions, though. Did Ayane or Rachel conceive, as Kasumi had earlier, and we're sure Helena did as well?

    And as hinted in an earlier review, might there be a "Ninja Gaiden Koibito: The Next Generation" in the future?
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  • From ANON - nihil on June 20, 2007
    Ch 27

    The plot thickens! Just when I thought you'd conclude it with an epilogue, you manage to concoct another tale to not only prolong our enjoyment of your work, but to also give more depth to these characters and explore their world. Bravo.

    I'm curious what you have in store for Ryu, Elliot, and Hayate. Looking forward to umm Kasumi x Ayane x Christie (just guessing).
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  • From Simmerl on June 20, 2007
    lol Taki :D
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  • From play2dabone on June 20, 2007
    It seems as if this fic will not end. Not to say it is a bad thing. I enjoy what you have done. Damn that Hayabusha and Elliot. Lucky bastards. Continue to update you work dude. oh and when you do end this lemon end it with a Kasumi/Ayane/Rachel/Ryu orgy if you can.
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