Click Here!

Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho
  • From ANON - Scalon on December 03, 2006
    Nice series you have, Tycho, I'm impressed.

    But the question is begged, what do you do for an encore? Perhaps a "gold-and-silver" pairing of Helena and Christie where Ryu tries to do them both right, or the "sister act" of Kasumi and Ayane?

    He might run into Zack and Bass, who tell the ninja to "do right with their ladies by them" or they'll give him a grade-A beat-down--and Tina and Lisa aka "La Mariposa" will join in:P

    I also look to see what comes up next:)

    Scalon
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Spolers on December 02, 2006
    I wished the Lisa chapter was together with Tina. I love two sluts geting what they deserve

    Keep Goin you are great
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Some Troll on November 03, 2006
    This is really good and I would love to see more. If you need suggestions, I have few in mind.

    1. We have only been given ideas of what KasumiXRyuXAyane is like, could you write out something.

    2. Suppose that Lisa decides that she wants more and enters in her DOA4 attire, though Ryu would obviously know.

    3. Perhaps Kasumi did not manage to completely destroy her last clone (Alpha something, forgot number) and the exceedingly powerful nemesis of DOA4 comes seeking satisfaction.

    4. Did Ninja Gaiden ever confirm Alma's fate, considering that scene of Rachel holding her as she opens her eyes as a complete human. Considering Rachel is present, perhaps the other sister would like to offer her gratitude for exocising her, albiet in such a painful manner.

    5. Having not succeeded in the mission mode, I could be wrong, but was there not some other humanoid female great fiend that was not in the primary game that you have to defeat in NG:Black?

    6. Christie and Helena obviously have a twisted relationship, why not somehow incorporate the only man in the world that should envy no other.

    7. Assuming the whole Volleyball thing has something to do with Zack, perhaps you could incorporate his trophy girlfriend. In spite of the fact that absolutely nothing is really known about her.

    That is all I have at the moment, although I just really want to see you do more.
    Report Review

  • From yamsham on October 24, 2006
    Three thoughts came to mind as I read this: I wish I could write this good, this is really hot, and this is funny as hell. And then I made a full circuit and came back around to wishing I could write this good. I would have to say my favorite chapter was the Kasumi one, which, for all the intricate and graphic sex, was very powerful on an emotional level. I would really like to see more of Kasumi and Ryu, perhaps even expanding on the flashback to their youth that was briefly touched upon. That was some really deeply felt and moving stuff in their chapter. And funny. And hot. And damn, but I wish I could write this good.

    Actually, now that I think about it, just write anything to do with DOA. Any pairing. Any amount of girls. More bonus levels, please. I'll read it. You're that good. Thanks for sharing this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Small Ninja on October 24, 2006
    Truly are masterpice!! I like how you portraited the girls and their interaction with Ruy and their sex scenes. Your talent is beyond comparison, dont stop now!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Church on October 23, 2006
    SHIET NICE UPDATES!!! A job well done on your work. *druels* I love DOA fics and so far yours are the best at the moment. I wonder if there anything more you can do. Your stories have great potential. I look forward to more of your work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kickassninja on October 18, 2006
    Awesome story with exquisitely written sex scenes. Please write more of almost anything! - I don't know if you take requests, but I'd love a story with other Game babes such as Lara, Samus ...
    Report Review

  • From Ihategels on September 28, 2006
    That was truly the most artistic,romantic,tasteful story I've ever read involving graphic sex.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chitoryu12 on September 19, 2006
    The ends of chapters 6 and 8 were by far some of the funniest things I've read all year.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Onin on August 30, 2006
    The Kasumi chapter is definitely the best fic ever, & its one of my favorite pairing in the series.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rex on August 05, 2006
    I have to say, this has to be one of the most tastefully written stories involving sex I've ever read. To be calling this PWP or smut would be an insult. It's truely rare to find a story this well written, let alone one that is mostly adult content. I loved the use of the girl's native languages. It really enriched the story. The ending was nice, especially with Kasumi and Ayane making amends. The scene with Kasumi was especially sweet. I hope you write more stories. You're a blessing to this genre of writing!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Vix135a on July 24, 2006
    What can I say. This story was more than awesome!!! I watched my husband play Ninja Gaiden and let me tell you after seeing the game cover and the handsome and agile Hiyabusa in action in the game, I can see why he would be every womens dream...ok let's be honest...FANTASY!!!! I wondered if the Ryu was at all viral and judging from what I have read he is. Heck he should be spent. Hmmm, I wonder if I can talk my husband into dressing like a ninja? I think I will ask him. LOL. Write more.
    Report Review

  • From freshprince2008 on July 07, 2006
    Great Story. Good Details Just and all out Awesome story
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!