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By : Tycho

From VFSNAKE on September 06, 2011
Well that was interesting.
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From ANON - Small Ninja on September 01, 2011
Was kinda hoping that the 8 months sex chamber marathon with Ryu and Tina would end out as something epic considering the history between the two. Not that the story progress and sex is bad but when there�s a description given about 8 month long sex and then leaving it as it is sort of a child�s play for them it does give an over the top feeling.

To tell the truth Ryu & Tina is and has been my main interest of the story, and five years ago If someone mentioned to me a pairing of them I would without a doubt laugh it out hard even though they are top favorites. I mean Tina is is a famous starlet, overly ambitious,kinda arrogant,proud of her sex appeal and skills, on the other hand there�s Hayabusa who is stoic, stern and with a strong sense of duty and justice. And you match them perfectly with their in game attitude: sex, conversation, this whole ninja roses story is their creation. In wrestling terms that would be put them in a rivalry because they work great together. A negative explanation would be Lisa and Anastasia being sisters, I�m reading it but not diggin it, believe in it for plot!

Still hoping that�s they have pregnant sex with Tina�s baby bump getting bigger and bigger over time, as pregnant sex is a beautiful thing.

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From ANON - TVO on August 29, 2011
The story is fiction and its fun so I don't take it too seriously. It is very well written and in terms of well written, erotic Ninja Gaiden/Dead or Alive fics, this is the best out there. The ending scene didn't bother me too much. We know that Christie is bit of a vampy seductress and she's slept with other guys. I mean did I think it was one of the best scenes in the series? No. But I hardly thought it sucked.

Quicker turnaround for this chapter so I definitely appreciated that. I wonder where the story goes from here but I hope it continues. Reiko can always be trained into a better fighter, she's a young woman.

My only critiques over the last two chapters is that I kind've would've liked to have heard or scene Tina's reaction to her dad's conversation with Ryu. And I still think Ryu being stuck in a chamber with Tina for a year having sex nonstop is a little too much and way over the top. Even for this story.
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From GuiltyDevilGearSolid on August 25, 2011
I am amazed and in shock that you are still at it. In my opinion,this lemon was totally over at chapter 33:Beat Build Gone Gold with Alpha-152 and Beta-117's defeat.

How do you top a 10 women orgy? With double the amount of women making it 20. This may sound hypocritical and I don't care that anyone is bothered by my comment,but I am not a fan of such huge orgies as it takes away the intimacy from the couples established up to this point. i.e Hitomi/Elliot,Kokoro/Brad Wong,Lisa/Tina, and so on.

There are other ways to mix things up. Plus most men aren't exactly cool with letting another guy fuck their girlfriend. I forgave it during the Encounter segments as it was part of the story and even tolerated it with the Bonus Levels as I assumed that it was the final time Hayabusa Ryu would be sleeping with the ladies of the other men as he has his own.

So now Reiko is joining Ryu Hayabusa's private harem with Kasumi,Ayane, and Rachel?

I'm not too pleased with that decision along with Tina having Ryu's baby and her getting close to him,but hey it's your lemon not mine. The reason is Reiko would be useless against an attack by the fiends and is barely able to defend herself any better than Irene Lew. I am not a huge fan of Tina Armstrong as she is way too airheaded and silly for Ryu Hayabusa.

I plead with you that you skip over the scene with Leon,Bayman, and Christie come next chapter. I agree with Eat Shiet And Diet,King Kong,Harem Lover 1967, and WTF MAN that we came here to read about Ryu's exploits and for the most part we don't care about the other men in Dead Or Alive. Not to mention that threesomes with guys and a girl is not exactly something that is appealing and erotic in my view. It's not sexy in porn and it sure as hell ain't sexy in lemons.

It totally killed the flow of the chapter and ruined it.

I take it now that it is time for the other men of the Dead Or Alive tournament to receive the Dragon Essence.

You haven't seen the movie "Highlander" have you? To kill an immoral,you must cut off their head. I was expecting a reference to this legendary film since at this Ryu and the other women are now immoral.

Dante from Devil May Cry must be pissed that Ryu Hayabusa got to Bayonetta before he could as they make an excellent pair. Not that I am asking nicely for you to insert the cast from Devil May Cry or anything like that,but simply voicing my thoughts aloud.

Well here's to passing the 25 and 50 chapter mark. Congratulations!! Are you going to go for 75 next?

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From VFSNAKE on August 24, 2011
Awesome! Love it!
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From ANON - Eat Shiet And Diet on August 24, 2011
Yay Another great chapter to this literary gold of a lemon story

just one thing it would be awesome if you changed the ending of chapter 58 me and most of my online friends that use this site didn't really enjoy reading the last part that featured christie and those two dudes

i know you didn't really write a lemon for christie and bayman and leon but just mentioning kind of messes up the flow of this chapter since i really only read this story for lemons that feature ryu and even mentioning about other guys getting some sort of messes up the flow of this story

if i ignore that this is definatly one of your better chapters
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From ANON - WTF MAN on August 24, 2011
Damn

Why the heck did you have to write that crappy scene at the end with christie leon and bayman

that just completly F'ed up this entire chapter

Please for the love of god change it...
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From ANON - Harem Lover 1967 on August 24, 2011
Wow..this last chapter would have been amazing if you didn't write the scene at the ending about christie banging leon and bayman, that just completly sucked all the fun out of this chapter (Chapter 58), dude seriously if you have time please change it...
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From ANON - King Kong on August 24, 2011
Starts out as another great chapter..but the ending completly ruins the entire thing for me...really hated the part about you having christie sleep with leon and bayman, that just sucks in my opinion...if possible could you please change the ending of chapter 58...
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From ANON - TVO on July 26, 2011
Tycho writes some of the most and most fun and erotic stories. The problem? The wait between his chapters of his serialized stories gets really frustrating and annoying at times. I love this story but the updates are freaking ridiculous.

All that being said this chapter really delivered. The Rumble exhibition was freaking crazy.

Some criticisms: I thought Tina and Ryu doing a calibration test of his stamina for TEN MONTHS is sort of ridiculous. So basically they were having sex with each other for a year. I get that Ryu's new abilities basically make him immortal and give him infinite vitality, but can he still be hurt, killed, or wounded in battle? Why doesn't Lisa figure that out? Also, I mean Ryu is basically mated with Kasumi and Ayane and I get he's a ninja and all but I don't buy that he would stay away from his family and loved ones for that long.

I get that these are all women Ryu had experience with before, but the implication previously was that Ryu was only able to pass on his immortal essence to women he had a deep emotional bond or loving connection with. I didn't get that with a lot of the characters here in the erotic rumble being "deserving" of that.

I thought the reunion between Ryu and Rachel was fun with the pretty obvious conclusion that Rachel had Ryu's kid. But I mean what is the kid's name and where is he? I wouldn't have minded Rachel talking more about her explanation on why she tricked Ryu. I mean why did she want to have his kid, and if she wanted his son, why didn't she just tell him? I doubt Ryu would've refused impregnating her.

So what happens with Tina and Ryu? Will she join the Ryu harem and have a family with him as well?

I mean look the story is so much fun and it sometimes is a nice excuse for Ryu to have sex with a lot of hot women, but I found this chapter a little too over the top at times. I was really happy to get this update, but I think I just would've liked a little more story, development, and justification of details here. Tycho doesn't really offer his author commentary and he comes off a little reclusive at times.

Regardless, please keep up the great work and I hope you update this and the Tomb Raider/Duke Nukem story again sooner rather than later.
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From em7phones on July 18, 2011
Its not often that the amount of time without an update is directly proportional to the quality of the next chapter, and this one was far greater than I could have imagined.

Seeing as everything has come full circle in this chapter, it seems appropriate to tell you in this review that your work was stellar since chapter 1, and has only gotten better since. There really is no amount of superlatives and praise to do this series justice.

Clearly, you don't intend for this to end quite yet, and I can only anticipate the next chapter just as I have all the others before it.
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From ANON - scalon on July 17, 2011
So at long last we have the major-league Hardcore-Pay-Per-Voyeristic-View event of the century. Beautiful and well worth it.

We at last see that with Tina telling Bass about Ryu, he finally gives his approval. It was important for him to know who he'd be needing to bring into the family fold, so to speak. Or who might be his "son-in-law," as Ryu would always do his kids honor, even if no rings were needed.

Then comes the long stream of women that rivals the "Time Trial" chapter. With no Alpha to intrude. With each shot of Dragon Essence, they get healed and revitalized. It was interesting that Lisa told Ryu not to hold back with her and Fujiko as "Hayate would know if he had" (and felt they hadn't gotten the full effects the others did).

After the sister act of Anesthesia and Lisa, Aisha makes Ryu 3-for-3 with the "sistas." The ladies went to Japan hunting for dragon...and Ryu delivered in all the right ways.

Of course, then Leifang, Makoto, Hitomi and Aigle gets their fair share of Ryu, the "gift that keeps giving life" to them all :)

The Hinamoto sisters got their rightful due of Dragon Essence--and once again, Hayate would know Ryu didn't hold back (Fujiko wouldn't have let Ryu :P), but be the better Ryu hadn't :) (I see a "sandwich" in Hayate's menu coming soon:P)

And Rachel soon tells Ryu "You're a father to a little boy." Meaning she's joined Kasumi and Helena in the "Inner Circle" of select ladies who'd make sure there would be an heir to the Ninja Dragon.

And last but definitely not least for Ryu are Ayane and Kasumi, who get their rightful reward in all suits, not just spades.

But with twenty nubile women healed up and ready to take on each other, folks might turn off the event before the event shuts down (the ladies and Ryu might not need sleep, but the viewers do). Either that or someone is recording this into a multi-part edition for distribution. I think we're talking at least 8 discs per box set, or at least 3 hours as the ladies all turn the Rumble Royale into a female frenzy when they're not seeing how much Ryu can further pump inside them :)
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From VFSNAKE on July 17, 2011
YEAH! GO RYU! DOMINATE THEM BITCHES! LOL!
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From ANON - scalon on June 05, 2011
I was reading Ice-T's autobiography, "Ice" and he mentioned there were 3 types of women:

1) freak/party girl
2) hustler/money-maker
3) wife/mother

Either he would get one woman who was all three...or three women who each specialized in one of them.

All the girls were obviously Type 1, while Kasumi was also Type 3. If "money-maker" equals businesswoman, then Tina Armstrong is also a type 2, and Helena is all three (she enjoys sex with Ryu, she is the big business head of DOATEC and the Rumble Roses organizations, and she sired Ryu's child).

I don't know if Ayane or Rachel would be Type 3, even though they love Ryu dearly, or if Tina is having too good a time to think of using her dragon-essence-boosted body to become a Mom and give Bass grandkids. It would make Tina a target of those who want payback for Donavon or just see her as Ryu's blonde American bitch--she IS his biggest booster, and his manager, so some might put a bullseye on a few parts of her.

Ryu would be wise to make sure she's well-covered since she's ptobably the point-woman for Helena and Ryu too.
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From ANON - shynd on April 18, 2011
These screens from DOA Dimensions made me read chapter 19 again (substituting Hayabusa for Hayate)
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-19.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-20.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-21.html
LOL I'm really seeing the Eliot x Ayane possibilities. If Ryu going to revisit his feelings for Hitomi in carnal fashion, seems only fair for Eliot to explore certain things with Ayane.

Great job on this epic fic and looking forward to more chapters!
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